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issue 144
"It is the artists, not the critic,*who gives society something of lasting value."
*A person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.

Who gives society something of lasting value? The author claims that it is the artist, rather than the critic. By scrutinizing the various dimensions of this contention, I agree with the author insofar as that it is the artist who creates the splendid works. However, without art critic, the great art works cannot embody the significance thoroughly.

Obviously, it is the general knowledge that the artists create the preliminary value of the great works. Those art works, such as paintings, music, literature and so forth, enhance life by adding beauty to our surroundings, provide us mental support and spiritual encouragement, and bring us to pursue the truth, mercy and beauty of the mystery world. It is through the works of art that the artists express their passion, emotion and desire. Great art works always reflect human nature and reality. To find examples one need look no further than the "Mona Lisa", created by Vinci, in which a gentle lady with her perpetual smile but there flowing sadness in her eyes, reflects the complexity of the human character. And the unique beauty and mystery of this stunning painting will be an eternal topic for the people later.

However, we should never overlook the importance of the art critic, from whose professional, insightful observation and advisable suggestions, both artist and populace benefits a lot. On the artists level, they can get useful and genuine feedback from the art critic, revise their works again and again until it reach the perfect state. Moreover, when the artist turn back to their original works they may use a different way to inspect them, which can bring the artists inspiration and sparkle creation. On the ordinary people's level, with the art critic's detailed instruction and vivid description, people can better understand the art works and enjoy the essence of the outstanding works easily. Also, art critic can pick out the excellent works and save people lots of time and energy.

Furthermore, sometimes art critic plays a crucial role in quest of the stunning works and propagandizing them, which has not been discovered yet. There are many great civilian artist hiding in society, their merit have not been found out and admired by people. When the art critics find those excellent works, they will write critical thesis including appreciation and praise about them and publish the paper. By doing so, critic call people's attention to focus on the wonderful works and the artist will win his reputation which he had already deserved long time ago. In addition, many outstanding art critics are identified as artist as well, in other words, they are not only critics but also artists, so it is the artist and art critic together create the enduring value of the art works.

In sum, it is the great artists create the primary value of the art works and with the critical aid of the art critic artists can realize the enduring value of the art works. Both the artists and art critic make great contribution to give society something of lasting value.

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Who gives society something of lasting value? The author claims that it is the artist, rather than the critic. By scrutinizing the various dimensions of this contention, I agree with the author insofar as that it is the artist who creates the splendid works. However, without art critic, the great art works cannot embody the significance thoroughly.

Obviously, it is the general knowledge that the artists create the preliminary value of the great works. Those art works, such as paintings, music, literature and so forth, enhance life by adding beauty to our surroundings, provide us mental support and spiritual encouragement, and bring us to pursue the truth, mercy and beauty of the mystery world. It is through the works of art that the artists express their passion, emotion and desire. Great art works always reflect human nature and reality. To find examples one need look no further than the "Mona Lisa", created by Vinci, in which a gentle lady with her perpetual smile but there flowing sadness in her eyes, reflects the complexity of the human character. And the unique beauty and mystery of this stunning painting will be an eternal topic for the people later.题中的几个关键词都注意到了，写得挺好

However, we should never overlook the importance of the art critic, from whose professional, insightful observation and advisable suggestions, both artist and populace benefits a lot. On the artists level, they can get useful and genuine feedback from the art critic, revise their works again and again until it reach the perfect state. Moreover, when the artist turn back to their original works they may use a different way to inspect them, which can bring the artists inspiration and sparkle creation. On the ordinary people's level, with the art critic's detailed instruction and vivid description, people can better understand the art works and enjoy the essence of the outstanding works easily. Also, art critic can pick out the excellent works and save people lots of time and energy.

Furthermore, sometimes art critic plays a crucial role in quest of the stunning works and propagandizing them, which has not been discovered yet. There are many great civilian artist hiding in society, their merit have not been found out and admired by people. When the art critics find those excellent works, they will write critical thesis including appreciation and praise about them and publish the paper. By doing so, critic call people's attention to focus on the wonderful works and the artist will win his reputation which he had already deserved long time ago. In addition, many outstanding art critics are identified as artist as well, in other words, they are not only critics but also artists, so it is the artist and art critic together create the enduring value of the art works.

In sum, it is the great artists create the primary value of the art works and with the critical aid of the art critic artistspopulace can realize the enduring value of the art works. Both the artists and art critic make great contribution to give society something of lasting value.

这篇你写得真挺好，又很细心，我没的说
只是，我当时在想这篇文章时，想不清give到底是什么
If create means give, the critics are excluded;
If uncover means give, the artists are excluded…
Finally I did not meet the answer…