Issue130 【CSMY作文互改小组】第3次作业

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issue130 ：题目：130 How children are socialized today determined the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.
Time:1:08                Words:523                  Date:07.1.7

When we talk about children 's socialization, nearly everyone will think it is very important . As the author's assertion, the destiny of society will depend on children's socialization, I agree with it deeply. However I do not think that all of us in the whole world are not realizing how to raise our children to help development a better society.

Why is children's socialization so important ,even that may determine the destiny of society? Let's get down to the fundamentals. We human beings were born in the society, then we are living and working in the society. Everyone need to communicate with others ,and nearly everyone will become a social man. No matter which areas you take part in, people's  behaviors , communication methods and so on , will influence destinies of people themselves .Then all of these make together , and become the destiny of society. Let's take an instance to illustrate this issue. I know that a small town in Malay Peninsula of Malaysia ,tribesmen in there are gentle, and always avoid aggressive things and fighting .But they are not take this characters when they were born, or in their infant periods. All of these characters are raised by teachers and parents ,as well as culture and society, from the period of their socialization. The whole society is quiet , and that is the destiny of society. In this angle , how we socialize our children is a huge thing ,and it will take our society stepping into the future.

As to whether or not that we know how to raise children to helping us making a better society, I think the answer is certainly affirmative. Maybe we have not quite comprehensive methods to help our children, but the whole society has already been aware of finding the best ways. In America, education encourage children to take part in the social work to raise their capabilities of dealing with others. In china ,children are also raised in the kindergartens ,what means a lot of chance to study each others ,and faced into their peers. That is to say, children are stepping into a special society , where they must to think what is others, and what is the  relationship with each others. Perhaps some ones suspect this conclusion. However , even if the children do not have the profound behaviors ,they also have the simple behaviors ,such as eating an small apple themselves and giving a big one to their friends or sisters. All that means they are thinking about other's feelings, and they want to make  good  relationship with  others. Maybe the condition that we provide to them are not good enough in one place , but they are made together to form a good raising method.

In sum, I think the socialization is very important and it can bring our society go into our further. And we have good ways to education our children how to socialize. What we need to do is get the merit of our education  together in this aspect, and then do our  best to give a better work on socialization of children .

很烂,感觉中文也没的写,郁闷~期待指导