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发表于 2007-7-15 16:36:25 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay

In a recent survey of World Health Organization, the data shows a trend that the average age of world people rises year-by-year. Assuredly, as more and more emphases are drawn on individual health in modern society, longevity would never be a special mystery which human being have pursued for thousands of years. What can be summarized just point the material and spirit.

As is known to all, the food satisfies basic needs of human being in a big extent. Meat provides us the protein; vegetable supplies us the vitamin; the rice give us the sugar. Human could not live without those elements, to say nothing of longevity. Moreover, with the development of modern world and the existence of novel technologies, people concentrate on cultivating new species and extracting the nutrient from kinds of food gradually. While consumer could assimilate more nutrients than what people could acquire before. Not only could the cells glut themselves, but people feel satisfaction of their physical bodies.

Next, the nice spirit could also influence the age of human being. Our bodies are all controlled by some physiological incretions so as to finish everyday’s activity. Cell has its own mood like human but been effected by its owner. Good incretions could assist the metabolism, while the bad ones serve as a bomb that could destroy our physical bodies, such as anger, anxiety and scare. Thus, keeping a good mood does have merits in human longevity.

However, the measure of suggestions should be controlled properly, and any extreme thoughts and actions would disserve the original wish. Overfeeding can result in certain ill and over optimism lead to abnormal psychology. We are not the machine, so human must choose the life style suit themselves.

To sum up, the mainly reasons make people live longer now can be concluded as the essential material and nice spirit. But, at the same time, people should understand how to control them in an appropriate points.


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describe favorite sport of your country

Well, in my country, I think the favorite sport should be the basketball. First, it is a relax style of life after one day’s hard work. People could enjoy dribbling, passing and shooting with a pumped round ball on a court. Second, it nourishes our ability of teamwork and cooperation which make us appreciate each other even more and strengthens people’s friendship. Maybe someone would scar, but it becomes insignia as masculinity. Although the ranking of basketball in our country is not very high, we are trying to change this situation. Believed, there would be more and more Yao stepping into NBA soon.
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发表于 2007-7-18 00:06:15 |只看该作者
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In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay

In a recent survey of World Health Organization, the data shows a trend that the average age of world people rises year-by-year. Assuredly, as more and more emphases are drawn on individual health in modern society, longevity would never be a special mystery which human being have pursued for thousands of years. What can be summarized just point the material and spirit.

As is known to all, the food satisfies basic needs of human being in a big extent. Meat provides us the protein; vegetable supplies us the vitamin; the rice give us the sugar. Human could not live without those elements, to say nothing of longevity
有这样表达吗? 改成never say longevity. Moreover, with the development of modern world and the existence of novel technologies, people concentrate on cultivating new species and extracting the nutrient from kinds of food gradually. While consumer could assimilate more nutrients than what people could acquire before. 人的胃肠道和以前一样呀,难道回有选择性的吸收?)Not only could the cells glut themselves, but people feel satisfaction of their physical bodies.

Next, the nice spirit could also influence the age of human being. Our bodies are all controlled by some physiological incretions
激素和spirit不是一回事 so as to finish everyday’s activity. Cell has its own mood你的研究领域,我怎么不知 cell 还有mood like human but been effected by its owner. Good incretions could assist the metabolism, while the bad ones serve as a bomb that could destroy our physical bodies, such as anger, anxiety and scare. Thus, keeping a good mood does have merits in human longevity(精神力量?我是学医的,好像有点玄,最好来点实际的,反正要自圆其说
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However, the measure of suggestions should be controlled properly, and any extreme thoughts and actions would disserve the original wish. Overfeeding can result in certain ill and over optimism lead to abnormal psychology. We are not the machine, so human must choose the life style suit themselves.(
三段试,一段比一段少,两+-式,开头就应该点明。首尾呼应)


To sum up, the mainly reasons make people live longer now can be concluded as the essential material and nice spirit. But, at the same time, people should understand how to control them in an appropriate points.

口语:
describe favorite sport of your country


Well, in my country, I think the favorite sport should be the basketball. First, it is a relax style of life after one day’s hard work. People could enjoy dribbling, passing and shooting with a pumped round ball on a court. Second, it nourishes our ability of teamwork and cooperation which make us appreciate each other even more and strengthens people’s friendship. Maybe someone would scar, but it becomes insignia as masculinity
不知道你会不会碰上一个女权主义者,还是用中立的口吻比较好. Although the ranking of basketball in our country is not very high, we are trying to change this situation. Believed, there would be more and more Yao stepping into NBA soon.

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