CRACK 9T小组第1次作业----flora2446

flora2446UID: 2234190

第一次作业(7月16号):

writing:
Most people like other people to make decision for them. But other not. which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

In China, astricted by other people’s decision, most children are growing up in a circumstance which is not so free. Parents like to make choice for their children, choose a proper school, choose a ideal occupation, choose a given life style, even choose a lover for them, instead of themselves. In this situation, most of us succumb to the power, lose the wing to fly higher. But I really heat this, and try my best make do every decision for myself.

For the first, handling task independently could enforce one’s ability to live. As we see, those who like other people to make decision for them unavoidably give birth to lean, which go against with their growing. There is a true example in my daily life. Tina, a lucky girl from a well-fixed family, always depend on her parents from her birth to middle school. In other persons’ eyes, she owns plain sailing all the time, and there is no need to make any decision herself. But when she come to the university far away from her hometown, she feels difficult to stand on her own bottom, do not know how to fill in a table for entering a consortium, do not know how to find the office building for her preschool procedure, do not know how to mediate conflict with her roommates…Face to the choice, Tina have not the good sense to make a decision, which leads a hardly college life for her.

For the second, handling task independently could administer to catch hold of the opportunity and accelerate your success. In many situations, it needs to make a crucial choice in a short time. Not every thing could seek help from other persons, not only for the reason that time is limited, but also because that no one can know your ability and character better than yourself. Only you actually understand which choice is more adapt to you. If you train to make decision for yourself to the best of your abilities, you will get more self-confidence facing the turnoff. Especially in the university, parents no longer look after you around, and teachers are not helpful like that in middle school. Many things should and must disposed by yourself. Choose a better one from two, even more, dominate the future with your own thinking, then success is not far away from you.

To sum up, I do not like other people to make decision for me. The older you are, the more you should control for yourself. For the higher ability, for more opportunity, for near to the success, I will do my endeavor to balance every choice.




speaking:
Do you agree or disagree: Students should wear uniform in school?

I do not agree with that students should wear uniform in school.

Firstly, every one has his favorite clothes with diverse style and personality. Most of the students do not like to wear in the same manner and color. They are averse to obey the prescript because of their makeup.

Secondly, unification will cut the throat of diversity in the campus. Uniform makes the circumstance inanimate and monotony, and go against with building a vivid surroundings, which is not benefit for students’ growing.

Thirdly, a added uniform may increase economical burden to some needy students. The have some cloths, and there is no need to buy such a new one.

So, I really disagree with wearing uniform in school.





[ 本帖最后由 flora2446 于 2007-7-17 10:50 编辑 ]

cyyc0311UID: 2187097

In China, astricted(restricted) by other people’s decision, most children are growing up in a circumstance which is not so free. Parents like to make choice for their children, choose a proper school, choose a ideal occupation, choose a given（rigid) life style, even choose a lover for them, instead of themselves.(觉得有点别扭) In this situation, most of us succumb to the power, lose the wing to fly higher. But I really heat this, and try my best (to) make do(笔误吧，删掉一个) every decision for myself.

For the first, handling task independently could enforce one’s ability to live. As we see, those who like other people to make decision for them unavoidably give birth to lean, which go against with their growing. There is a true example in my daily life. Tina, a lucky girl from a well-fixed family, always depend on her parents from her birth to middle school. In other persons’ eyes, she owns plain sailing(不明白这是什么意思) all the time, and there is no need to make any decision （by）herself. But when she come（comes） to (或直接用enters好点吧)the university far away from her hometown, she feels difficult to stand on her own bottom, does not know how to fill in a table for entering a consortium, do not know(去掉) how to find the office building for her preschool procedure, do not know(去掉) how to mediate conflict with her roommates…Face to the choice, Tina have(has) not the good sense to make a decision, which leads a hardly(hard? tough) college life for her.(再加一句论述会更好)

For the second, handling task independently could administer to catch hold of the opportunity and accelerate your success. In many situations, it needs to make a crucial choice in a short time. Not every thing could seek help from other persons, not only for the reason that time is limited, but also because that no one can know your ability and character better(这个词形容know好象有点不好) than yourself.(我也没想到什么好词形容know，不过可以用more familar) Only you actually understand which choice is more adapt to you.(好像都是人adapt物吧) If you train to make decision for yourself to the best of your abilities, you will get more self-confidence facing the turnoff. Especially in the university, parents no longer look after you around, and teachers are not helpful like that in middle school. Many(去掉) things should and must disposed by yourself. Choose a better one from two, even more, dominate the future with your own thinking, then success is not far away from you.

To sum up, I do not like other people to make decision for me. The older you are, the more you should control for yourself. For the higher ability, for more opportunity, for near to the success, I will do my endeavor to balance every choice.

那些other people，persons就用 other 或者others就行了吧^_^
make choice 还是choices？ 还有decisions，我不太清楚
有些句子短语写的很8错，结构上我觉得可以把Tina那个例子提前，作为说明让别人做决定的不好之处，然后引到你说的第一点第二点。
个人意见 要是有什么想法什么的，和我讨论讨论哦^_^

[ 本帖最后由 cyyc0311 于 2007-7-17 11:51 编辑 ]

cyyc0311UID: 2187097

speaking:
Do you agree or disagree: Students should wear uniform in school?

I do not agree with that students should wear uniform in school.

Firstly, every one has his favorite clothes with diverse style and personality. Most of the students do not like to wear in the same manner and color. They are averse to obey the prescript because of their makeup.

Secondly, unification will cut the throat of diversity in the campus. Uniform makes the circumstance inanimate and monotony, and go against with building a vivid surroundings, which is not benefit for students’ growing.

Thirdly, a added uniform may increase economical burden to some needy students. The have some cloths, and there is no need to buy such a new one.

So, I really disagree with wearing uniform in school.



突发的一些事情耽搁了，不好意思。
觉得还行，词汇比较丰富，注意掌握一些词的发音就好^_^

[ 本帖最后由 cyyc0311 于 2007-7-17 23:18 编辑 ]

flora2446UID: 2234190

谢谢cyyc0311 ~