crack小组mercy123批改8号同学作业

mercy123UID: 2356484

蓝山，呵呵，你的写作比我强多了啦。我修改了一些小错误。
至于Speaking，声音有些小，是不是录音软件的问题？
我将听到的内容记录如下：
Well, in my opinion, that's good idea for students to wear school
uniforms. And I have two reasons for that. The first one is that
with uniforms, all students would look better and orderly because it
will look that all students are well prepared for school. And second
reason is by uniforms is much cheaper than by jeans and shirts. And
students' parents can save a lot of money and students would not
feel embarrass if they don't have good clothes.
感觉对两种原因的论述与原因本身有些重复。呵呵。
主题句讲得慢了些。占用了不少时间。

[ 本帖最后由 sissilei 于 2007-7-21 07:12 编辑 ]

蓝山咖啡UID: 167322

thx 4 ur grade