CRACK 9T 第3次作业——冬子

冬子UID：2290398

writing(Build):
It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Someone likes to live in the bustling area with many stores and restaurant around and the others do not. If a new restaurant was determined to set near my house, I will not be pleased at all.

To begin with, we must admit that a restaurant nearby could bring much convenient to our lives. We can take a small case as an example, you have worked the whole day in a swelter summer day and were too tired to prepare dinner. Just turning around and getting into the restaurant, you can enjoy a marvelous meal immediately. Besides that, in the bad weathers, the restaurant could send food to the client's house. So we need not to buy food in a heavy downpour or fierce wind.   Furthermore, a new restaurant might attract a number of customers that could accelerate the development of economy around because merchants always prefer to set their stores in the area with high density of customers.

However, although the new restaurant could ameliorate our living environment to some extent, it also accompanies with many disadvantages. The most significant defect is that the restaurant will destroy the silence. As it mentioned above, many people will come to consume in the dinning-room, moreover in the recent years, many restaurant install Karaoke apparatus in the compartments to canvass more customers. Hereby the denizens living around must be annoyed by the noise and most of them even cannot open windows until midnight.

Besides the noise, the restaurant will endanger the environment around. Before I graduated, I lived in the dormitory with the cafeteria downstairs. The waste gas exhausted from the craftier was horrible! Our windows always adhered plenty of oil and we can never bask clothes on the colony or the dresses might be smelly. Furthermore, the rubbish full of nutrition created by the restaurant will draw on rats and insects that might spread into the neighborhood before long. In addition, the customers up and down might leave much trashes along the way. The whole environment might become unfitted to live.

To sum up, I disagree to build a restaurant near my house. Albeit the new restaurant might bring flourish, I prefer to live in a clean as well as silent community.

speaking(1月19号机经):
1.  Describe a place you have never been to but like to go some day.
The place attracts me so much is the Lingyin Monastery which is located in south China near the West Lake. I knew it from a traveling brochure. The monastery is in a mountain with many beautiful trees and springs around. It is a famous monastery with more than 1600 years history. Actually, it was built by an Indian monk and always be considered as a symbol of friendship between China and India. As the brochure mentioned, things which blessed by the monks in the monastery will bring good luck to the owner. So if some day I could go to the monastery, I will buy an amulet as a souvenir and hope that it could bring me good fortune.
2.       Do you agree that childhood is the happiest (or precious) time in life?
Yes, I think so. Before I went to school, I live in the country with my grandparents. I have many good friends there. In summer and autumn, we swam in the river all day long and caught fish for barbecue. While in winter, when snow covered the whole village, skiing and snowball fight became our favorite games.  Besides playing with my friends, the most exciting stuff was attending temple fair in Spring Festival. I could wear my best dresses and received plenty of presents from my grandparents. My childhood left me many good memories, it is the happiest time in my life.

leadenskyUID：2251888

修改见文档
水平有限，感觉没什么修改的，我觉得应该是高分作文

口语差不多吧，就是发音感觉有点生硬，我觉得你说的时候嘴巴应该尽量张大点，夸张点:rolleyes:

[ 本帖最后由 leadensky 于 2007-7-21 22:08 编辑 ]

冬子UID：2290398

m(_ _)m  组长谬赞了……

冬子UID：2290398

是啊，我也觉得自己的声音听着很呆板

而且每次稍微一加速舌头就打结……