生如夏花小组----第11次作业

lisha726UID: 2282972

欢迎狠拍。。

7.21第十一次作业:(作业请于21日23点前交出)

独立写作: (个人成功)

The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

口语:

说说最喜欢的一个room，自己家的或者是其他地方的。

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Well, for me, I think my favorite room is my bedroom. For one thing, my bedroom is neither too big nor too small. It just contains a desk, a bed and other small ornaments. But for me, this is enough. When I study tired, I can lie on my bed and relax for a while. When I relax enough, I can sit before my desk and study efficiently. For another thing, every morning, when I open the window, the sunshine comes in. You can imagine how wonderful this would be, feeling the sunshine, listening the bird and breathing the fresh air.







Words: 355
In my childhood, I know there is a saying, "where there is will there is a way". And at that time, I know that if you want something, what you should do is just to do it. So, in my opinion, I agree with this expression "never, never give up".

To begin with, "never, never give up" is a very precious value for us. From this expression, we may get encouragement. For instance, we may encounter difficulties everyday and it are these difficulties that make us upset. At this time, you can tell yourself “never, never give up” and then your upset would be appeased in some degree. In a word, holding this value can sometimes make you not as upset as before.

Furthermore, “never, never give up” tells us to be fortitude, to face difficulties bravely. As mentioned above, we all may encounter difficulties. But should we give up just because of these difficulties? The answer is certainly not. We should learn to be fortitude and be confident that every difficult would vanish. What’s more, if you don’t learn to be fortitude, then the society would discard you some day.

Moreover, "never, never give up" is a path through which you can get your goal. Everyone want success, want to enjoy the feeling that success brings to you. So for success, you must work hard towards the success. But we must admit, there is not a fluent way for you to get success. Think about Edison, in order to invent a bulb, he has failed for one hundred times. Just imagine, if he give up when he failed 99 times, then would he touch the victory fruit? Would he be in the memory of all over the world people? In some sense, the difficult you meet in the way to success is just some kind of thunder that has small rain. That means these difficulties are not non-conquered and if you pay effort you can vanquish it.

In conclusion, we may encounter difficulties everyday, but we should not give up. What we should do should be to face the difficulties and finally conquer it.

portsxuUID: 2342632

In my childhood, I know (knew) there is a saying, "where there is will there is a way". And at that time, I know(knew) that if you want something, what you should do is just to do it. So, in my opinion, I agree with this expression "never, never give up".

To begin with, "never, never give up" is a very precious value for us. From this expression, we may get encouragement. For instance, we may encounter difficulties everyday and it are these difficulties that make us upset. At this time, you can tell yourself “never, never give up” and then your upset would be appeased in some degree. In a word, holding this value can sometimes make you not as upset as before.

Furthermore,furthermore是在原有观点上更进一步,如果前后观点是平行的,那么用moreover “never, never give up” tells us to be fortitude, to face difficulties bravely. As mentioned above, we all may encounter difficulties. But should we give up just because of these difficulties? The answer is certainly not. We should learn to be fortitudefortitude是一种品质,人是一种生物,因此无论怎样学习也不会变成抽象的品质,这里后面用形容词为佳learn to be persistent) and be(be 可以去掉) confident that every difficult(difficulty) would vanish. What’s more, if you don’t(do not) learn to be fortitude, then the society would discard you some day.

Moreover, "never, never give up" is a path through which you can get your goal. Everyone want success, want to enjoy the feeling that success brings to you前面是everyone后面是u,句子人称指代要一致~. So for success, you must work hard towards the success. But we must admit, there is not a fluent way for you to get success. Think about Edison, in order to invent a bulb, he has failed for one hundred times. Just imagine, if he give up when he failed 99 times, then would he touch the victory fruit? Would he be in the memory of all over the world people? In some sense, the difficult you meet in the way to success is just some kinds of thunder that hashave small rain. That means these difficulties are not non-conquered and if you pay effort you can vanquish it.

In conclusion, we may encounter difficulties everyday, but we should not give up. What we should do should be to face the difficulties and finally conquer it.

每段开始都有主题句,而且后面内容也紧紧围绕主题句,这种写作方式老美喜欢,保持~~
小小建议,文中的u可以全部换成one,这样文章会显得更加可观,而且,关键在于,老美不适应第2人称的句子,他会认为是在命令他什么,该点参见挑战托夫满分作文,有明确表述

[ 本帖最后由 portsxu 于 2007-7-22 01:45 编辑 ]

lisha726UID: 2282972

小小建议,文中的u可以全部换成one,这样文章会显得更加可观,而且,关键在于,老美不适应第2人称的句子,他会认为是在命令他什么,该点参见挑战托夫满分作文,有明确表述

嗯，很受用！

xugelanUID: 2336294

说理太多了，可以举几个例子

Since i was a child ,i knew the saying that "where there is a will there is a way".It is my motto and i really appreciate the positive meaning this motto indicates.So ,i aggree the expression "Never, never give up" has the same spirit as the motto and it encourages people to keep fighting for dreams.

To begin with, the expression has a function to appease one's depression when met with something difficult to deal with.No one could garantee himself a smooth life and never be upset.Thus a word "Never, never give up" from your friend would make you feel better and give your courage to overcome the difficulties.

Moreover,when one has maken some achievements,he needs continuing inspirition to further enhance his performance.Usually,people will devide his goal into several steps.After finishing the front steps ,many people may feel satisfied and forget what they should do next.In some sense,it is the success makes them fail. Thus,it is necessary for them to walk out of their little success and never give up the further goal.

Finally,not giving up is an essential quality that anyone who has been successful must bear no matter how intelligent he/she is.It is important for one to persist in his dream until it become true.Take Hellen keller for example,at the 19th months after her birth , an attack of fever left her permanently blind and deaf ,which means she had to live in darkness and silence for a life.At that time she even did not know how to speak.However,when she gradually growed up ,her desire to express herself and the strong will of never giving up make her insist in learning and finally became a polyglot and famous writer in the world.

For those reasons above ,the expression "Never, never give up" teachers us some basic knowledges of life and it would certainly benefit us if we understand the virtue of this expression.

[ 本帖最后由 xugelan 于 2007-8-28 17:39 编辑 ]