CRACK 9T小组第10次作业

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Games play a key role in one’s childhood. We could learn a lot of fundamental rules of the society as well as commonsense by playing games. As for the adults, they could also learn knowledge of other realms by playing the games with certain thesis. In my opinion, I welcome the statement that we could be benefit by playing games.

To begin with, all kinds of games have their own rules to confine the players’ activities. If the player wants to be a champion, the first thing he/she must do is to abide by the rules. For example, in the football match, a team, which players broke the rules frequently, is always implausible to win the championship. This character of games tells people an important concept – do not broke the rules, or you will be punished and be a loser. Constructing such a concept will help people concentrating on his/her behaviors to avoid breaking the rules in the company, the society and even the laws definitely.

Furthermore, another character of the games is competition. One player or one team must beat the others to become the final winner, and even for the games which can be played only by one person, competition still exists because the player could challenge himself/herself for shorter completed time, higher correct rate and so forth. Living in the modern world full of competition, being familiar with the competitive pressure in games will be benefit for us in many aspects.

Moreover, in some games, such as basketball, pokers and so forth, we must cooperate with the others for winning. How to communicate with your partners, how to cohere the team members as well as how to be a good leader and coordinate every part of work, all of these we could learn in game and are useful to our business.

To sum up, games could teach us a lot of useful skills. Besides, games are always vivid that could help us to remember what we learnt more quickly and fasten.

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Games play a key role in one’s childhood. We could learn a lot of fundamental rules of the society as well as commonsense by playing games. As for the adults, they could also learn knowledge of other realms by playing the games with certain thesis(这个词在这里是什么意思，主题？感觉有点别扭). In my opinion, I welcome the statement that we could be benefit by playing games.

To begin with, all kinds of games have their own rules to confine the players’ activities. If the player wants to be a champion, the first thing he/she must do is to abide by the rules. For example, in the football match, a team, which players broke the rules frequently, is always implausible to win the championship. This character of games tells people an important concept – do not broke(break) the rules, or you will be punished and be a loser. Constructing such a concept will help people concentrating on his/her behaviors to avoid breaking the rules in the company, the society and even the laws definitely.

Furthermore, another character of the games is competition. One player or one team must beat the others to become the final winner, and even for the games which can be played only by one person, competition still exists because the player could challenge himself/herself for shorter completed time, higher correct rate and so forth. Living in the modern world full of competition, being familiar with the competitive pressure in games will be benefit for us in many aspects.

Moreover, in some games, such as basketball, pokers and so forth, we must cooperate with the others for winning. How to communicate with your partners, how to cohere the team members as well as how to be a good leader and coordinate every part of work, all of these we could learn in game and are useful to our business.

To sum up, games could teach us a lot of useful skills. Besides, games are always vivid that could help us to remember what we learnt more quickly and fasten.

总体来说很不错，你的用词变换很多，但是有些不常用的词如confine不知在这里是否用的正确
另外，你的连接词和短语不够，例如在中间几段中，在games和real life之间转换时可以用一下。
其它没什么意见，都还感觉不错。