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21:32-22:02 Nowadays, our life has been changed all the time as a result of the swift development of technology. Science and technology are playing a more and more important role in every aspect of society. And the spreading of computers and internet changes the way of education by(in) the traditional schools. As far as I(am) concerned, although studying by using new technology has improve the quality of education nowadays, it could not replace the role of traditional schools in the educational system. In the first place of analysis, new technology brings many conveniences to modern education. In the past, all too often we heard that some students could not at school just because of the trouble of transport. Many children living in mountainous areas have to overcome hundreds of miles-long way to go to schools. Once there are some terrible weather problems, the students would(will) not stay at home to avoid (and)the accidents will happen on the way. Now, if they have computers connecting with internet, long-distant education will service them. They can learn knowledge on computers at home with the information transmitted by internet. Moreover, new technology can also help to expand students' horizon. Internet is bringing large scales of fresh information of every aspect all over the world, which is helpful to multiply the students' knowledge and arouse their interests. On the other hand, role of traditional schools could not be replaced by technology, because technology nowadays does not cover some characters carried by traditional schools. First, teaching in schools is more profound than in computers. Students at school are facing a teacher who prepares the class carefully according to their response of knowledge, while technology can only bring some fixed pictures and words to children. If students at school have some problems of studying, they can turn to teachers or tutors at once, while ones(those) at home could not. Moreover, some course(s) can only (be)taught at schools. For example, some experiment courses, which are vital to students' ability of exerting knowledge, can only carried out at labs of traditional schools. Without these experiments, students could not understand the relevant knowledge deeply. To sum up, to teaching excellently and increase the quality of education, students should use both the technology and traditional education. Education system should also improve their teaching by technology comments: 1.30分钟写出这样的文章还是很不错,结构比较合理,语言也流畅. 2.第二段和第三段说理都还不错. 3.如果有时间,结尾段可以多说两句,写得更漂亮点. 另外:感觉楼主MM很喜欢写折衷的文章,写这种有时要看清题目. 口语: 1. Which place in the city where you live you like best, why? Well, for me the favorite place in our city is the water park near my home. Firstly, the park has a beautiful environment. There is fresh air and clean water, which is good to my health. And I can also have some picnics with my friends. Secondly, the park is very quiet. I can do some reading and relax my mind. Thirdly, in the weekends there are some fireworks and make me have a good time(后面没主语哦用个从句或加they). (内容,发音,语速都不错.缺点:用了太多的I can,there be.可以换种表达方式)2. Do you like to study in big city or small city, why? Well, I prefer to study in big city. Firstly, big cities have some advanced equipments, which are helpful to my research. Equipment is so important to our studying that having a good equipment means having half success of studying and research. Secondly, there are some excellent teachers who have much(many) researching experience(s) in big city. And big city has good study sphere. Thirdly, some students who have some problem of studying fees can have better financial support in big city (问题同上. there be ..city have..用了多次.)eg. the teachers in the big city are more experienced in research 试着加入点语气语调..这样会更好.. | 
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