CRACK 9T小组第16次作业----holding

holdingUID: 2285054

第十六次作业：

writing(child):

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmated are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

21:11-21:48

As the fast development of the science, technology is more and more important to our country. The more significant science and technology become, the more attention people will pay on the system of education, because it is vital to children and students who are related with the future of our society. When the issue comes to which one is more important to a child's success in school between the classmates and parents, I agree with that classmates are a more important influence than their parents.

In the first place of analysis, I concede that parents have their influence of children. As we all know, the parents are the children's first primary teachers. Children learn a lot by imitating their parents, such as talking, writing their names, including some other basic ability to survive. Moreover, the parents are the persons concerning the children the most. So, all of the parents do is aiming to a bright future of the children. Therefore, the parents do have some influence on children, but this influence has too little relationship with the aspect of success in school. However, comparing with classmates, the parents also have some limit in some aspects, which make their have less influence than classmates.

First of all, the people accompanying with the children in the school all day is not their parents, but their classmates. Although children learn a lot from their parents, they have to spend most time in one day learning widespread knowledge together with their classmates. A lot of researches show that the surrounding for students to learn has large influence on the results. For example, nowadays, most of students would like to participate into the best school to gain a higher education, which is not only because the faculty there has a higher level of education and more efficient method of teaching, but also they will have some classmates who are more diligent.

Secondly, classmates will help more about study than parents. Classmates will the first people children turn to help when they are facing some difficulties. Overcoming the difficulties is the most step of achieving success in school. So their classmates who can help children to conquer the dilemmas immediately have more significance to their success in school. Moreover, classmates are more familiar with the course and knowledge they learn together, so they can offer much more useful methods to improve children's study, while the suggestion given by parents might be less efficient.

What is more, an excellent classmate could be a forceful competitor towards child. If they can compete fairly, they will both have a great improve in their school work. Taking my experience as an example, I have a classmate, also a friend, during my study in primary school, middle school and high school. At the class, we both listen to teacher carefully, and work hard. Long time competition does not reduce our friendship, but benefit us to obtain success in the examination of entering university.

speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Talk about one of  the most important inventions in the past 100 years.

Computers

Calculation much more quickly and more precise and improve the development of technology and researching in science.

Through the information changed in the internet connected by computer, the communication of people all around world has been greatly improved. Surfing on line, we can learn a lot knowledge and experience from other people.
2. Is it more likely for someone who attend college to achieve success than the one do not attend college? why?

People attending college is likely to achieve success than the one do not attend college.

Firstly, the college will offer the wide knowledge to the students, which is helpful to the success in the future.

Secondly, there are always some excellent tutors and teachers in the colleges. They can give the students some useful advices and suggestions.

Moreover, both the advanced equipments and good sphere of study and research will benefit the students. And all these are very important to the students’ success.

harrietannUID: 2204456

CRACK 9T小组第16次作业----holding

第十六次作业：

writing(child):

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmated are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

21:11-21:48

As the fast development of the science, technology is more and more important to our country. The more significant science and technology become, the more attention people will pay on the system of education, because it is vital to children and students who are related with the future of our society. When the issue comes to which one is more important to a child's success in school between the classmates and parents, I agree with that classmates are a more important influence than their parents.

In the first place of analysis, I concede that parents have their influence of children. As we all know, the parents are the children's first primary teachers. Children learn a lot by imitating their parents, such as talking, writing their names, including some other basic ability to survive. Moreover, the parents are the persons concerning the children the most. So, all of the parents do is aiming to a bright future of the children. Therefore, the parents do have some influence on children, but this influence has too little relationship with the aspect of success in school. However, comparing with classmates, the parents also have some limit in some aspects, which make their have less influence than classmates.

First of all, the people accompanying with the children in the school all day is not their parents, but their classmates. Although children learn a lot from their parents, they have to spend most time in one day learning widespread knowledge together with their classmates. A lot of researches show that the surrounding for students to learn has large influence on the results. For example, nowadays, most of students would like to participate into the best school to gain a higher education, which is not only because the faculty there has a higher level of education and more efficient method of teaching, but also they will have some classmates who are more diligent.

Secondly, classmates will help more about study than parents. Classmates will the first people children turn to help when they are facing some difficulties. Overcoming the difficulties is the most step of achieving success in school. So their classmates who can help children to conquer the dilemmas immediately have more significance to their success in school. Moreover, classmates are more familiar with the course and knowledge they learn together, so they can offer much more useful methods to improve children's study, while the suggestion given by parents might be less efficient.

What is more, an excellent classmate could be a forceful competitor towards child. If they can compete fairly, they will both have a great improve in their school work. Taking my experience as an example, I have a classmate, also a friend, during my study in primary school, middle school and high school. At the class, we both listen to teacher carefully, and work hard. Long time competition does not reduce our friendship, but benefit us to obtain success in the examination of entering university.

结构清晰，语言流畅，不足之处在于例子不够具体，另外，最后一段算作结尾还是延伸上文而并无结尾？