CRACK 9T小组第19次作业----holding

holdingUID：2285054

第十九次作业:

writing(food):

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

22:05-22:35

As the development of economy and social technology, the level of service in our lives becomes more completely and makes our lives more convenient. As the most important part of daily life, food preparation becomes easier than ever before, which bring a evolution to our lives. When the issue comes out about whether this change has improved the way people live or not, there might be a debate. But, for me, I think the change of preparing food more easily does not promote the living level of people, even does harm to our life.

In the first place of analysis, let us pay attention to the materials of these easily prepared foods, which are harmful to our health. The people who are busy on the business and work, especially write-collars, tend to buy some freezing fast-foods in the super markets after work, which have been already prepared or half-prepared. All too often people only consider these freezing foods could save our time to prepare dinners. However, they do not realize that these foods are probably not fresh enough. Although they are not over the available date, they have lost their most valuable nutrition during the process of freezing. Moreover, some fast foods have been proved that they are harmful to people's health due to high fat, high sugar, and high calorie. Among the restaurants providing these fast foods there are several "popular" food, such as KFC and Pizza hut. Therefore, the change brought by easily preparing food actually brings some danger to our lives, instead of improvement.

What is more, the life style changed by these foods is becoming worse than ever before. It is apparent that the simpler process of preparing food has saved people's time spent on preparing food and heightens the efficiency of using time. However, some exceptional habits in the past are disappearing in this process, which could lead our life to be lack of love and happiness. For example, you can help to prepare food after work with your parents, talking about the trouble and happiness at work or at home. This is a kind of share and also a expression of the concern and love. Nowadays, buying fast foods, cooking dinner for family only takes several minutes. And after dinner, you will usually drop into the busy work and leave your family alone. In this case, you lose the best opportunity to communicate with your family, which is also a significant part in your life besides work.

To sum up, the simplification of food preparation does not improve our lives in many aspects, including health and family harmony.

speaking(X月XX号机经):

1. Talk about a memorial activity that you attended before.

2. Which do you prefer, indoor activities or outdoor activities?

lizzy1986UID：2281654

holding,昨天给你改的作文已经改好了...8过MS你米有去看哦:loveliness:

holdingUID：2285054

呵呵， 我已经看了哦
不过我有个问题 waste time to后面是加doing 吗

lizzy1986UID：2281654

我查到的用法都是waste sth. doing sth.:loveliness:

holdingUID：2285054

我觉得这里的waste sth中的sth应该是time，而不是后面的doing

leadenskyUID：2251888

As the development of economy and social technology, the level of service in our lives becomes more completely(这里应该是形容词，并且这个词用的也不对，我觉得应该是level of service in our lives is tending toward perfection) and makes our lives more convenient. As the most important(最重要的应该是food, 而不是food preparation, 并且应该是one of the most) part of daily life, food preparation becomes easier than ever before, which bring a evolution to our lives. When the issue comes out about whether this change has improved the way people live or not, there might be a debate. But, for me, I think the change of preparing food more easily does not promote the living level of people, even does harm to our life.

In the first place of analysis, let us pay attention to the materials of these easily prepared foods, which are harmful to our health. The people who are busy on the business and work, especially write-collars, tend to buy some freezing fast-foods in the super markets after work, which have been already prepared or half-prepared. All too often people only consider these freezing foods could save our time to prepare dinners. However, they do not realize that these foods are probably not fresh enough. Although they are not over the available date, they have lost their most valuable nutrition during the process of freezing. Moreover, some fast foods have been proved that they are harmful to people's health due to high fat, high sugar, and high calorie(这个不是直接原因，因为要成为harmful必须还要有个条件，就是缺少运动). Among the restaurants providing these fast foods there are several "popular" food, such as KFC and Pizza hut. Therefore, the change brought by easily preparing food actually brings some danger to our lives, instead of improvement.

What is more, the life style changed by these foods is becoming worse than ever before. It is apparent that the simpler process of preparing food has saved people's time spent on preparing food and heightens the efficiency of using time. However, some exceptional(usual) habits in the past are disappearing in this process, which could lead our life to be lack of love and happiness. For example, you can help to prepare food after work with your parents, talking about the trouble and happiness at work or at home. This is a kind of share and also a expression of the concern and love. Nowadays, buying fast foods, cooking dinner for family only takes several minutes. And after dinner, you will usually drop into the busy work and leave your family alone. In this case, you lose the best opportunity to communicate with your family, which is also a significant part in your life besides work.

To sum up, the simplification of food preparation does not improve our lives in many aspects, including health and family harmony.

总体来说不错，有些小问题。