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64) Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

When it comes to the daily homework, some people argue that it is necessary because practice makes perfect, while others hold the opposite opinion that daily homework is unnecessary, since what a student do is more than homework. I tend to agree with the latter. There are couples of reasons.

It is true that homework can improve students' knowledge. Through homework, they can reinforce what they have learned, and can remember it effectively. Also, homework is a form of feedback of the effect of their learning to teachers, and thus, teachers can adjust their plan to give them much proper lessons.

However, daily homework is unnecessary. Three times or four times a week is enough. Each time the homework can make the students to review what they learned in the several days. The homework also provides them the chance to review systematically, not independently. Therefore, it can be more efficient.

In addition, daily homework is not the only way for the students to improve their study. They can attend some clubs, such as the science clubs, the math club, to enhance their ability of using the knowledge. Teachers can organize some activities to help students to understand some knowledge, too. For instance, holding a game to spare words can be helpful for students to remember words.

Finally, study means not only doing homework, but also some other things. Some students may be fond of music, sports, and painting. They need time to practice, if they have homework every day, they may have no time to practice. However, if they have homework two days a time, they can do their homework the first day, and practice the next day.

According to the statements above, daily homework is unnecessary, three times or four times a week is enough. Then students will have time to do both homework and other practice.

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When it comes to the daily homework, some people argue that it is necessary because practice makes perfect, while others hold the opposite opinion that daily homework is unnecessary, since what a student do is more than homework. I tend to agree with the latter. There are couples of reasons.

It is true that homework can improve [reinforce/ strenthen] students' knowledge. Through homework, they can reinforce what they have learned, and can remember it effectively. Also, homework is a form of feedback of the effect of their learning to teachers, and thus, teachers can adjust their plan to give them much proper lessons.

However, daily homework is unnecessary. Three times or four times a week is enough. Each time the homework can make the students to review what they learned in the several days. The homework also provides them the chance to review systematically, not independently. Therefore, it can be more efficient.

In addition, daily homework is not the only way for the students to improve their study. They can attend some clubs, such as the science clubs, the math club, to enhance their ability of using the knowledge. [altenatives such as science clubs or math clubs can enhance their ability of using the knowledge. / knowledge application ability, and also avoid falling into flat. ]Teachers can organize some activities to help students to understand some knowledge, too. For instance, holding a game to spare [spell] words can be helpful for students to remember words.

Finally, study means not only doing homework, but also some other things. Some students may be fond of music, sports, and painting. They need time to practice, if they have homework every day, they may have no time to practice. [those hobbies take time to practise. Too much homework will prevent them from practising or greatly deducing their time on their avocations . ] However, if they have homework two days a time, they can do their homework the first day, and practice the next day.

According to the statements above, daily homework is unnecessary, three times or four times a week is enough. Then students will have time to do both homework and other practice.

语法上没有什么大问题，我觉得句子也很通顺，表达很清晰。
唯一一点就是觉得你的points很多，每一段都不够深入。建议第1和2两个点合起来，结构上看，会觉得论证更为充实一点。
虽然都是disagree，我们的观点很不一样，^_^，可以多多跟你借鉴。

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However, daily homework is unnecessary. Three times or four times a week is enough. Each time the homework can make the students to review what they learned in the several days. The homework also provides them the chance to review systematically, not independently. Therefore, it can be more efficient.

In addition, daily homework is not the only way for the students to improve their study. They can attend some clubs, such as the science clubs, the math club, to enhance their ability of using the knowledge. Teachers can organize some activities to help students to understand some knowledge, too. For instance, holding a game to spare words can be helpful for students to remember words.bbs.gter.netB)U6|+zN#d
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Finally, study means not only doing homework, but also some other things. Some students may be fond of music, sports, and painting. They need time to practice, if they have homework every day, they may have no time to practice. However, if they have homework two days a time, they can do their homework the first day, and practice the next day.

According to the statements above, daily homework is unnecessary, three times or four times a week is enough. Then students will have time to do both homework and other practice.
语法很好。
思路很好。
行文流畅。
但是和可以写的更好。
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