impulse8.4作业,有拍必回!

gabby19832004UID: 2461820

Do you agree or disagree， if people want to have a good future they should have a careful plan while they are still young（周一作业）.

Several decades ago, when our society did not possess a varity of expertises, people initially followed their ancestors’ profession. However, with the fulfillment of industrialization, we are now faced with all kinds of choices, which we may hardly select even as an educated adult. So from my point of view, I tend to hold a negative position toward plan a better future when we are young.
First, it is impossible for children to plan their future. As we all know, the
way toward success is a long course that paved by our tears, our sweat and sometimes blood. Madam Curie devoted her whole life into scientific researches and finally discovered radium. In this regard, one should start as earlier as possible in order to be successful. Notwithstanding, it is still unfeasible for a child to steer his or her life wheel at such an early age. Kids are originally able to be infatuated with specific objects, while unable to focus on abstract contemplations. We cannot tell from a boy who is interested in a pack of candy that he will be bound for a candy maker, say nothing of the boy himself. Thus, it is rediculous of a young child plan his or her future.
However, some may argue that parents should make decision for their children. I think this decision harmful. Each baby was born with its distinguishing talent, which may not always follow their parents’. For example, we have a boy named Zhouzhou, whose parents are both factory workers, has special musical genius naturally. Unlike zhouzhou presented his talent early in his life, large majority of children develop their interests very late. So, it is not easy for parents to truly understand their young kids, not to mention to plan their development. Moreover, figuring out the future of young kids at early age may risk narrowing their development.
Last but not least, a good blue print does not necessarily indicate a successful future. Like fame depends largely on other people’s recognition, success need to combine such ingredients as good chances, cooperation and inspiring environment. Thus, a better future could not be planned, it might, but not must, be realized by diligently scratch.

By and large, I disagree with the contention that people should plan a better future when they are young because of its infeasibility, misleading posibility and the uncertainty of the future.

lemon1kgUID: 2309820

Several decades ago, when our society did not possess a varity of expertises, people initially followed their ancestors’ profession. However, with the fulfillment of industrialization, we are now faced with all kinds of choices, which we may hardly select even as an educated adult. So from my point of view, I tend to hold a negative position toward plan a better future when we are young.(观点前面的背景，好像变成choice而不是plan~牵涉到主题比较清晰吧。)

First, it is impossible for children to plan their future. As we all know, the way toward success is a long course that paved by our tears, our sweat and sometimes(even) blood. Madam Curie devoted her whole life into scientific researches and finally discovered radium. In this regard, one should start as earlier as possible in order to be successful.(居里夫人的例子没有说明越早越好啊~)Notwithstanding, it is still unfeasible for a child to steer his or her life wheel at such an early age. Kids are originally able to be infatuated with specific objects, while unable to focus on abstract contemplations. We cannot tell from a boy who is interested in a pack of candy that he will be bound for a candy maker, say nothing of the boy himself. Thus, it is rediculous of a young child plan his or her future.

However, some may argue that parents should make decision for their children. I think this decision harmful. Each baby was born with its distinguishing talent, which may not always follow their parents’. For example, we have a boy named Zhouzhou, whose parents are both factory workers, has special musical genius naturally. Unlike zhouzhou presented his talent early in his life, large majority of children develop their interests very late.（这句的意思是：和周周不同大部分的孩子还很迟的时候才发展他们的兴趣~~这两个有关系么？为什么不是他们很迟才知道自己的才华在什么方面。） So, it is not easy for parents to truly understand their young kids, not to mention to planing their development. Moreover, figuring out the future of young kids at early age may risk narrowing their development.

Last but not least, a good blue print does not necessarily indicate a successful future. Like fame depends largely on other people’s recognition, success need to combine such ingredients (such)as good chances, cooperation and inspiring environment. Thus, a better future could not be planned, it might, but not must, be realized by diligently scratch.

By and large, I disagree with the contention that people should plan a better future when they are young because of its infeasibility, misleading posibility and the uncertainty of the future.

LZ的语言真的很赞，每次看完我心都很虚~呵呵。
觉得有些地方好像论证的不够有利~~~

saintjUID: 2248994

Several decades ago, when our society did not possess a varity of expertises, people initially followed their ancestors’ profession. However, with the fulfillment of industrialization, (这个你都快用"烂"了，哈哈) we are now faced with all kinds of choices, which we may hardly select even as an educated adult. So from my point of view, I tend to hold a negative position toward plan (planning) a better future when we are young.-R5eVZ        ]+m%j6F8p
First, it is impossible for children to plan their future. As we all know, thebbs.gter.net;~KUC!v }'Lv;g6`
way toward success is a long course that paved by our tears, our sweat and sometimes blood. Madam Curie devoted her whole life into scientific researches and finally discovered radium.（这个例子我觉得只能说明成功可能需要花时间，跟future plan好像无关) In this regard, one should start as earlier as possible in order to be successful. Notwithstanding, it is still unfeasible for a child to steer his or her life wheel at such an early age. Kids are originally able to be infatuated with specific objects, while unable to focus on abstract contemplations. We cannot tell from a boy who is interested in a pack of candy that he will be bound for a candy maker, say nothing of the boy himself. (这一句没看懂。) Thus, it is rediculous (ridiculous) of a young child (to) plan his or her future.
However, some may argue that parents should make decision for their children. I think this decision (is) harmful. Each baby was born with its distinguishing talent, which may not always follow their parents’. For example, we have a boy named Zhouzhou, whose parents are both factory workers, has special musical genius naturally. Unlike zhouzhou presented his talent early in his life, large majority of children develop their interests very late. So, it is not easy for parents to truly understand their young kids, not to mention to plan their development. Moreover, figuring out the future of young kids at early age may risk narrowing their development.sX`/Q*B
Last but not least, a good blue print does not necessarily indicate a successful future. Like fame depends largely on other people’s recognition, success need (needs) to combine such ingredients as good chances, cooperation and inspiring environment. Thus, a better future could not be planned, it might, but not must, be realized by diligently scratch.

By and large, I disagree with the contention that people should plan a better future when they are young because of its infeasibility, misleading posibility and the uncertainty of the future.

19811010316UID: 2220703

Several decades ago, when our society did not possess a varity of expertises, people initially followed their ancestors’ profession. However, with the fulfillment of industrialization, we are now faced with all kinds of choices, which we may hardly select even as an educated adult. So from my point of view, I tend to hold a negative position toward plan a better future when we are young.(好的个性开头，对临场发挥非常有利)


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First, it is impossible for children to plan their future. As we all know, the寄托家园Dway toward success is a long course that paved by our tears, our sweat and sometimes blood. Madam Curie devoted her whole life into scientific researches and finally discovered radium. In this regard, one should start as earlier as possible in order to be successful. Notwithstanding, it is still unfeasible for a child to steer his or her life wheel at such an early age. Kids are originally able to be infatuated with specific objects, while unable to focus on abstract contemplations. We cannot tell from a boy who is interested in a pack of candy that he will be bound for a candy maker, say nothing of the boy himself. Thus, it is rediculous of a young child plan his or her future.(逻辑不对，应该把科学不能早开始论证充分，再转入boy的例子； 或者说衔接不好)

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However, some may argue that parents should make decisions for their children. I think this decision are harmful. Each baby was born with its distinguishing talent, which may not always follow their parents’. For example, we have a boy named Zhouzhou, whose parents are both factory workers, has special musical genius naturally. Unlike zhouzhou presented his talent early in his life, large majority of children develop their interests very late. So, it is not easy for parents to truly understand their young kids, not to mention to plan their development. Moreover, figuring out the future of young kids at early age may risk narrowing their development.(例子挺好玩)

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Last but not least, a good blue print does not necessarily indicate a successful future. Like fame depends largely on other people’s recognition, success need to combine such ingredients as good chances, cooperation and inspiring environment. Thus, a better future could not be planned, it might, but not must, be realized by diligently scratch.

By and large, I disagree with the contention that people should plan a better future when they are young because of its infeasibility, misleading posibility and the uncertainty of the future.

不错。
论证的在充分点就更好了，勤加练习。你的功底不错。

迷茫者UID: 2514662

~像各位楼上说的~~~理由 ~例子不够倒位
其他OK~

gabby19832004UID: 2461820

多谢大家!~我好象遇到瓶颈了,总之,有点力不从心.老啦老啦.
anyway, 我会和大家一起坚持下去.
共同进步!~