COMEON作文小组------candyam 9月12日作业

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Whether high schools, colleges, and universities should set their programs more about preparing for future career and jobs, while less on teaching about general subjects, different people may give various answers about this.  In my opinion, I agree with that preparing for future jobs is more important, therefore high schools should spend more time on it.

To begin with, people should know the meanings of education.  The original purpose of education is that people obtain the abilities to adapt to modern society, and win their places and status in it. Moreover the essential of general subjects should accord this purpose of education.  However, at present, since we lack more effective ways to evaluate abilities of students, we only depend on tests and scores to estimate.  Therefore most of students study for a good GPA rather than gain really useful knowledge and information when study general subjects.  An interesting phenomena is that students get A in all courses generally cannot find jobs, let along good jobs.  For instance, one of my friends, she studied hard on general subjects and got an excellent transcript, but she found difficult to find a job for her weak practical skills and the lack of internship experience. In sum, high schools, colleges, and universities should put more resources and spend more time on teaching about preparing for future jobs and career.  They have responsibilities to let their students know that if you want to survive in schools, you need focus on general subjects and get a good result, while if you want to win in the society, you need to prepare better on practical skills and abilities as well as encouraging students to find an intern job before they graduate.

However, there is an exception.  Students who want to further their studies to go to graduate schools when they graduate form universities should spend their time and energy on studing general subjects rather than preparing for jobs.   Universities and colleges should have special programs for these students so that they cannot be forced to prepare for jobs because it seems like a sort of waste of time.  

In conclusion, I agree that high schools, colleges and universities should spend less time teaching about general subjects and spend more time teaching about preparing for future jobs and career in most cases for the reason that this strategy is in accordance with the original purposes of education.

[ 本帖最后由 candyam 于 2008-9-13 10:23 编辑 ]

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Whether high schools, colleges, and universities should set their programs more about preparing for future career and jobs, while less on teaching about general subjects, different people may give various answers about this.  In my opinion, I agree with that preparing for future jobs is more important, therefore high schools should spend more time on it.
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chineseladyUID: 2403976

有改的不好的地方，请见凉！我觉得结尾在丰满些就更好了，好象只是重复了文章中的句子