COMEON作文小组------brufeng 9月25日作业

brufengUID: 2267718

Successful people take new things and take risks rather than the thing that they've done well.(2007.3.27)

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With the "new things", I have two different apprehending,one is different realm, the other is same domain new things.Successful people should have great power of innovating. For brand world is made by this tremendous power, But with high differentiation in our modern socity, people can not be an export for everything. So I do not agree that successful people take new things and take risks rather than the things that they've done well.

In scientific area, like space program, that is a huge program, mass of poeple together for the human's universe dream. Many successful people in the group, computer expert make sure the program will carry on, mechanician check each joints can do the prearranged things, physical scientist give the power rocket need. If they want take risks that is dengrous for astronauts. So, only when these people have done well all their testes, the new things can only used for practise.Not everything need one person finish.The best way for taking new things is cooperate with other experts. You just do your part, others will make sure other things.

In sports and amusement areas, we are hardly imaging that led YaoMing who play blasketball game run the 100 meter race. Each athletes have their speciality, that is ridiculous to see that sporters play with their shortcoming. they'd better do their adept things. Many singers handle with real estate, the consequence is income falls short of expenditure.

In business area,you never heard that Microsoft Company do other parergons. A successful people definitly have good experience on sertain area, but when he/she meet new realm, he/she as much as a new student and may like most other normal people no such great successful. After all, successful people are minority.

In short, successful people should do the things which they export and have done well rather the risks and new one.

short, successful people should do the things which they export and have done well rather the risks and new one.

candyamUID: 2325105

With the "new things", I have two different apprehending(觉得用的有点奇怪),one is different realm, the other is same domain new things.Successful people should have great power of（不太准确吧，用词） innovating. For brand world is made by this tremendous power, But with high differentiation in our modern socity, people can not be an export for everything. So I do not agree that successful people take new things and take risks rather than the things that they've done well.

In scientific area, like space program, that is a huge program, mass of poeple work together for the human's universe dream. Many successful people in the group, computer experts make sure the program will carry on, mechanicians check each joints can do the prearranged things, physical scientist give the power rocket need. If they want take risks that is dengrous for astronauts. So, only when these people have done well all their testes, the new things can only used for practise.Not everything need one person finish.The best way for taking new things is cooperate with other experts. You just do your part, others will make sure other things.

In sports and amusement areas, we are hardly imaging that led?? YaoMing who play blasketball game run the 100 meter race. Each athlete has his speciality, that is ridiculous to see that sporters?? play with their shortcoming.They should(正式文章最好不用缩写，另外首字母不大写的毛病以后不要出现了，不值得错) better do their adept things. Many singers handle with real estate, the consequence is income falls short of expenditure.

In business area,you never heard that Microsoft Company do other parergons. A successful people definitly have good experience on sertain area, but when he/she meet new realm, he/she as much as a new student and may like most other normal people no such great successful. After all, successful people are minority.

In short, successful people should do the things which they export and have done well rather the risks and new one.

short, successful people should do the things which they export and have done well rather the risks and new one.

作者在用词，流畅这两方面都存在问题，希望加以注意，不熟悉的单词和用法一定要查清楚了再用，否则不如用一些简单词。