COMEON作文小组——梦想在望2008 10月18日作文

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There is always a heated controversy about higher education among people over a long period of time. Some people believe that only good students should receive higher education. Others hold the opinion that a college or university education should be open to all students. From my point of view, I agree with the former one. Universities should only allow good students into them.

On one hand, good students have high grades in high schools and often possess excellent qualities. These students set their goals to enter universities from early time because they were aware of the significance of universities education for their future. They value the importance of higher education and are very willing to further their education. They have put enormous work into their education, and are interested in learning more. Poor students who did not try to achieve high good grades strikingly are not concerning about their education, and therefore, do not deserve to enter universities. Nevertheless, if they go back to high school and improve their grades, they should have a chance to go into universities as well.

On the other hand, it would induce a number of problems if all students can access to university education. Imagine that, if universities did give all students, regardless of their grades, admission for higher education. Universities would quickly become saturated, and the quality of education would diminish because good students are not able to attain good education that they deserved. In addition, if all students have an access to go into universities, they would bring about a great financial burden of government. It would not beneficial for the sustainable development of universities education.

In conclusion, I think that it is critical to conserve university education for those who really need it, such as good students. If poor students want to go into universities, they should go back into high school and improve their grades.  

ly8768UID: 2452066

There is always a heated controversy about higher education among people over a long period of time. Some people believe that only good students should receive higher education. Others hold the opinion that a college or university education should be open to all students. From my point of view, I agree with the former one. Universities should only allow good students into them.

On one hand, good students have high grades(grade似乎是年级的意思，score或者mark会好点) in high schools(high school在英语中是高中的意思，不是中国高校的意思) and often possess excellent qualities. These students set their goals to enter universities from early time because they were aware of the significance of universities education for their future(前后时态应该一致set用的一般时，because后的是过去时). They value the importance of higher education and are very willing to further their education. They have put enormous work into their education, and are interested in learning more. Poor students who did not try to achieve high good grades strikingly are not concerning about their education, and therefore, do not deserve to enter universities. Nevertheless, if they go back to high school and improve their grades, they should have a chance to go into universities as well.(最后一句话不知道lz想证明什么，和这段要说的好学生才能接受高等教育有什么关系。)

the other hand, it would induce a number of problems if all students can access to university education. Imagine that, if universities did give all students, regardless of their grades, admission for higher education. Universities would quickly become saturated, and the quality of education would diminish because good students are not able to attain good education that they deserved(为什么good students cannot access higher education?). In addition, if all students have an access to go into universities, they would bring about a great financial burden of government. It would not beneficial for the sustainable development of universities education.
(个人觉得第二段论证有些简短，能在详细点就好了)

conclusion, I think that it is critical to conserve university education for those who really need it, such as good students. If poor students want to go into universities, they should go back into high school and improve their grades.

[ 本帖最后由 ly8768 于 2008-10-19 14:38 编辑 ]