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ly8768UID: 2452066

agree or disagree ：advertisements is a waste of a company's money and time because consumers have known what they want to buy

Advertisements have pervaded into all aspects of our daily life. There are a variety of advertisements that are accessible to people by TV, newspapers, slogans on streets and so forth. Thus here comes to a tense question whether massive advertisements are only a waste of a company's money and time. In my perspective, I cannot agree with the view that advertisements just waste a company's money even though some consumers have known what they want to buy.

To begin with, a company needs to propagandize their new products by advertisements when they are put into market. With the help of advertisements, an enterprise can introduce its new generation of products to various denizens who might be its potential costumers. For one thing, people would focus on the new products because of the company's advertisement. Hardly would anyone know a new product if there is no advertisement. Imagine that if Microsoft Corporation failed to inform the release of Windows Vista, how could so many customers know this new operation system and how would they prefer to buy it? While for the other thing, advertisement can lead people to know the features of new products. As a result, compared with other products, it is quite possible that people will be attracted by the new products for the new distinctive functions. Therefore, advertisements play a significant role when a company launches new products.

Furthermore, advertisements can usually determine or change the preference of costumers. Admittedly, people usually have the idea of what they need to purchase, yet faced with plenty of products they could be confused. In this circumstance, a witty advertisement would probably determine costumers' decisions. This reminds me of the advertisement of Haagen-Dazes, which is said that if you love her, bring her to Haagen-Dazes. Rarely could a mass of lovers decline this magical advertisement. Thus, it is verified that wise wonderful advertisements have a great impact on costumers' preferences.

Last but not the least, when an enterprise plans to open up a new market, the importance of advertisements is special manifest. With the help of advertisements, not only does the company introduce their products but also propagandize itself to the local residents. Let us have a look at the example of Mcdonald's first restaurant in China in 1994. Its successful opening and following expansion of markets in China can be ascribe to the well-planned advertisements which introduce the western style of diet to Chinese in spite that it is only the fast food. This example indicates the fact that the effect of advertisements can never be neglected.

谢谢狠拍:)

jackallen0714UID: 2510951

先学习下

ly8768UID: 2452066

你只要每天写了作文，贴上来，改上一个人的就好了。你看下本主题的第一页吧

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

agree or disagree：advertisements is a waste of a company's money and time because consumers have known what they want to buy |留学|签证|TOEFL|GREF|t5ujAdvertisements have pervaded into all aspects of our daily life. There are a variety of advertisements that are accessible to people by TV, newspapers, slogans on streets and so forth. Thus here comes to a tense(tensive感觉比较合适) question whether massive advertisements are only a waste of a company's money and time. In my perspective, I cannot agree with the view that advertisements just waste a company's money even though some consumers have known what they want to buy.（建议改写下） 寄托家园XJc t,y5fTo begin with, a company needs to propagandize（建议换个词，这个词是贬义词） their new products by advertisements when they are put into market. With the help of advertisements, an enterprise can introduce its new generation of products to various denizens who might be its potential costumers. For one thing, people would focus on the new products because of the company's advertisement. Hardly would anyone know a new product if there is no advertisement. Imagine that if Microsoft Corporation failed to inform the release of Windows Vista, how could so many customers know this new operation system and how would they prefer to buy it? While for the other thing, advertisement can lead people to know the features of new products. As a result, compared with other products, it is quite possible that people will be attracted by the new products for the new distinctive functions. Therefore, advertisements play a significant role when a company launches new products.9yd%~"d8\i*R4l$l留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA*I&eqiG7I-bK!^Furthermore, advertisements can usually determine or change the preference of costumers. Admittedly, people usually have the idea of what they need to purchase, yet faced with plenty of products they could be confused. In this circumstance, a witty advertisement would probably determine costumers' decisions. This reminds me of the advertisement of Haagen-Dazes, which is said that if you love her, bring her to Haagen-Dazes. Rarely could a mass of lovers decline（resist） this magical advertisement. Thus, it is verified that wise wonderful advertisements have a great impact on costumers' preferences(换个词tendency). 寄托家园)?0H9]EJBLast but not the least, when an enterprise plans to open up a new market, the importance of advertisements is special manifest. With the help of advertisements, not only does the company introduce their products but also propagandize（换个词promote） itself to the local residents. Let us have a look at the example of Mcdonald's first restaurant in China in 1994. （例子很好！）Its successful opening(换个词development or exploitation) and following expansion of markets in China can be ascribe to the well-planned advertisements which introduce the western style of diet(the style of the western diet) to Chinese in spite that it is only the fast food. This example indicates the fact that the effect of advertisements can never be neglected.
总之， 我认为此篇文章写得很好！尤其是在作文的结构上和说理上。值得我学习！

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

agree or disagree：advertisements is a waste of a company's money and time because consumers have known what they want to buy |留学|签证|TOEFL|GREF|t5ujAdvertisements have pervaded into all aspects of our daily life. There are a variety of advertisements that are accessible to people by TV, newspapers, slogans on streets and so forth. Thus here comes to a tense(tensive感觉比较合适) question whether massive advertisements are only a waste of a company's money and time. In my perspective, I cannot agree with the view that advertisements just waste a company's money even though some consumers have known what they want to buy.（建议改写下） 寄托家园XJc t,y5fTo begin with, a company needs to propagandize（建议换个词，这个词是贬义词） their new products by advertisements when they are put into market. With the help of advertisements, an enterprise can introduce its new generation of products to various denizens who might be its potential costumers. For one thing, people would focus on the new products because of the company's advertisement. Hardly would anyone know a new product if there is no advertisement. Imagine that if Microsoft Corporation failed to inform the release of Windows Vista, how could so many customers know this new operation system and how would they prefer to buy it? While for the other thing, advertisement can lead people to know the features of new products. As a result, compared with other products, it is quite possible that people will be attracted by the new products for the new distinctive functions. Therefore, advertisements play a significant role when a company launches new products.9yd%~"d8\i*R4l$l留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA*I&eqiG7I-bK!^Furthermore, advertisements can usually determine or change the preference of costumers. Admittedly, people usually have the idea of what they need to purchase, yet faced with plenty of products they could be confused. In this circumstance, a witty advertisement would probably determine costumers' decisions. This reminds me of the advertisement of Haagen-Dazes, which is said that if you love her, bring her to Haagen-Dazes. Rarely could a mass of lovers decline（resist） this magical advertisement. Thus, it is verified that wise wonderful advertisements have a great impact on costumers' preferences(换个词tendency). 寄托家园)?0H9]EJBLast but not the least, when an enterprise plans to open up a new market, the importance of advertisements is special manifest. With the help of advertisements, not only does the company introduce their products but also propagandize（换个词promote） itself to the local residents. Let us have a look at the example of Mcdonald's first restaurant in China in 1994. （例子很好！）Its successful opening(换个词development or exploitation) and following expansion of markets in China can be ascribe to the well-planned advertisements which introduce the western style of diet(the style of the western diet) to Chinese in spite that it is only the fast food. This example indicates the fact that the effect of advertisements can never be neglected.
总之， 我认为此篇文章写得很好！尤其是在作文的结构上和说理上。值得我学习！