COMEON作文小组——梦想在望2008 10月30日作业

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

10月30日

agree or disagree ：advertisements is a waste of a company's money and time because consumers have known what they want to buy（07.12.8传媒类）

Nowadays, advertisements has been increasingly indispensable for people. People's lives are enclosed by advertisements through a variety of media, such as televisions, broadcasts , newspaper, magazines and so on. The view on the merits and demerits vary from different people. A myriad of people believe that it is a waste of time and money to make advertisements for company, while others have an opposite attitude toward it. As for as I am concerned, I hold the opinion that it is worth, for a company, spending money and time on advertisements. My arguments are listed as follows.

One of the primary causes is that it is advertisements that triggers great profits for a company. By means of various media, a company are able to promote its products and services. Thus, consumers can know the information concerning the goods and services as soon as possible. Taking into account of their own needs, consumers are inclined to purchase the products and services of a company. In addition, considering of the effect of famous people, a company tends to allow prominent person to advertise its products or services. Consumers are more probably to buy its products or services due to the influence of advertisements. And afterwards, the sales, to some degree, will grow up.In short, it can be said that by advertisements do contribute to revenue of a company.

Another reason for my point is that advertisements is beneficial for consumers to know the characteristics of products or technology from a company. Advertisements of a company can help consumers to understand the differences from other company, and guide consumers to buy its goods. For example, a company created a new invention, and produce it in a vast scale. How do a company let consumers to know its creative products? At this time, a company could make use of advertisements to explain and promote its products. It is very conducive for people to enjoy the advantages resulted from the enhanced technology. Therefore, from this perspective, advertisements can improve people's lives.

Furthermore, a company can usually set a good public image by some advertisements. For instances, a great deal of companies would like to make advertisements for the purpose of charity. These advertisements tend to convey the sense of value to people. Hence, from this point of view, advertisements can be of great benefit for the prestige of a company.

In a word, from what has been discussed above, we can easily reach the conclusion that it is too useful for a company to give money and time to make advertisements.

purplechunUID: 2508437

Nowadays, advertisements has(have) beenincreasingly indispensable for people. People's lives are enclosed byadvertisements through a variety of media, such as televisions,broadcasts , newspaper, magazines and so on. The view on the merits anddemerits vary(varies) from different people. A myriad of people believe that itis a waste of time and money to make advertisements for company, whileothers have an opposite attitude towards it. As for(far) as I am concerned, Ihold the opinion that it is worth, for a company, spending money andtime on advertisements. My arguments are listed as follows.bbs.gter.net!V@Zy)x

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purplechunUID: 2508437

Nowadays, advertisements has(have) beenincreasingly indispensable for people. People's lives are enclosed byadvertisements through a variety of media, such as televisions,broadcasts , newspaper, magazines and so on. The view on the merits anddemerits vary(varies) from different people. A myriad of people believe that itis a waste of time and money to make advertisements for company, whileothers have an opposite attitude towards it. As for(far) as I am concerned, Ihold the opinion that it is worth, for a company, spending money andtime on advertisements. My arguments are listed as follows.bbs.gter.net!V@Zy)x

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purplechunUID: 2508437

怎么回复以后总是被删节很多啊。。。

purplechunUID: 2508437

Nowadays, advertisements has(have) beenincreasingly indispensable for people. People's lives are enclosed byadvertisements through a variety of media, such as televisions,broadcasts , newspaper, magazines and so on. The view on the merits anddemerits vary(varies) from different people. A myriad of people believe that itis a waste of time and money to make advertisements for company, whileothers have an opposite attitude towards it. As for(far) as I am concerned, Ihold the opinion that it is worth, for a company, spending money andtime on advertisements. My arguments are listed as follows.bbs.gter.net!V@Zy)x
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purplechunUID: 2508437

Nowadays, advertisements has(have) been increasingly indispensable for people. People's lives are enclosed by advertisements through a variety of media, such as televisions, broadcasts , newspaper, magazines and so on. The view on the merits and demerits vary(varies) from different people. A myriad of people believe that it is a waste of time and money to make advertisements for company, while others have an opposite attitude towards it. As for(far) as I am concerned, I hold the opinion that it is worth, for a company, spending money and time on advertisements. My arguments are listed as follows.

One of the primary causes is that it is advertisements that triggers great profits for a company. By means of various media, a company are able to promote its products and services. Thus, consumers can know the information concerning the goods and services as soon as possible. Taking into account of their own needs, consumers are inclined to purchase the products and services of a(that) company. In addition, considering of(删去) the effect of famous people, a company tends to allow(改成hire) prominent person to advertise its products or services. Consumers are more probably to buy its products or services due to the influence of advertisements. And afterwards, the sales, to some degree, will grow up.In short, it can be said that by(by删去) advertisements do contribute to revenue of a company.（这一段感觉句子的顺序稍显乱:)  首先说能带来利润，又说能帮助提高产品，然后说用户可以得到想要的信息。感觉promote那个不太相关。还有就是这段讲了人们倾向与买广告上的产品，但是没有分析为什么会这样，比如说从心理角度，人们愿意买自己熟悉的东西；名人广告给消费者对该产品更加相信等等）

Another reason for my point is that advertisements is(are) beneficial for consumers to know the characteristics of products or technology from a company. Advertisements of a company can help consumers to understand(see or figure out是不是更好些？) the differences from other company(companies), and guide consumers to buy its goods. For example, a company created a new invention, and produce it in a vast scale. How do a company let consumers to know its creative products? At this time, a company could make use of advertisements to explain and promote its products. It is very conducive for people to enjoy the advantages resulted from the enhanced technology(what is conducive?). Therefore, from this perspective, advertisements can improve people's lives(不是广告帮助吧？：）应该是产品，广告只是帮助甄选).

Furthermore, a company can usually set a good public image by some advertisements. For instances(instance), a great deal of companies would like to make advertisements for the purpose of charity. These advertisements tend to convey the sense of value to people. Hence, from this point of view, advertisements can be of great benefit for the prestige of a company.(最好能举一个例子)

In a word, from what has been discussed above, we can easily(easily是不是太绝对了，呵呵) reach the conclusion that it is too useful for a company to give(spend) money and time to make advertisements.