comeon作文小组——梦想在望2008 11月9日作业

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

11月9日作业
Agree or disagree: the best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.

When it comes to the way of relaxation, depending on divergent personality types and life styles, we find that some people hold the idea of the best way to actually relax and decrease pressure is to spend time with others. Meanwhile, others believe that spending time alone is the optimal way to virtually relax and reduce stress. From my point of view, it is more advisable to choose to be alone when you want to relax yourself. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for being alone for relaxation is that when being alone, you will feel quietness and tranquility. Living at such a competitive society, after the hard work of an entire week, people tend to be weary of be together with others or participating a variety of parties. In order to be far away from the noise of city, they are more likely to spend time alone for enjoying the calm and peace. For instance, they would like to approach the nature, have a picnic with their families in a shiny day. It is very valuable for these people who are busy in working to spend time alone.

Another reason can be seen by every one is that when spending time alone, people are inclined to do what they love to relax themselves. Every person has all their own hobbies or interests. But they may be put aside because people have no adequate time to do. Nevertheless, once people have a chance to be in holiday, they tend to do things that are irresistible, such as their hobbies. For example, some people would like to spend a whole afternoon just on reading a favourite book in starbark coffee house. Others might like to go fishing just by themselves besides the pool. For them, it is these hobbies or activities such like reading, fishing and so on, that reduce stress and enjoy themselves. After the relaxation, people will be much more passionate to devote themselves to their jobs and lives.

Of course, there may be a couple of people would like to spend time with other people such as friends, for relaxing themselves. They are more probable to stay with together to do some activities, including playing cards, singing karaoke or something else. Whereas, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious, such as consuming the energy. Most seriously, these activities are more likely to do harm for the nerves systems, especially after people have already been exhausted from work.

In a word, taking into account of these factors above, it is sagacious to support the statement that the best way to relax is to spend time alone.

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

为什么没有人给我批阅作文？

阿泰UID: 209473

你为啥要用公告？？:confused:

jiwasunUID: 2425569

Agree or disagree: the best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.

When it comes to the way of relaxation, depending on divergent personality types and life styles, we find that some people hold the idea of the best way to actually relax and decrease pressure is to spend time with others. Meanwhile, others believe that spending time alone is the optimal way to virtually relax and reduce stress. From my point of view, it is more advisable to choose to be alone when you want to relax yourself. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for being alone for relaxation is that when being alone, you will feel quietness and tranquility. Living at such a competitive society, after the hard work of an entire week, people tend to be weary of be together with others or participating a variety of parties. In order to be far away from the noise of city, they are more likely to spend time alone for enjoying the calm and peace. For instance, they would like to approach the nature, have a picnic with their families in a shiny day. It is very valuable for these people who are busy in working to spend time alone. (例子好像不是很恰当，因为have a picnic with their families 不是 spend time alone)

Another reason can be seen by every one is that when spending time alone, people are inclined to do what they love to relax themselves. Every(Each) person has all their own hobbies or interests. But they may be put aside because people have no adequate time to do. Nevertheless, once people have a chance to be in(on) holiday, they tend to do things that are irresistible, such as their hobbies. For example, some people would like to spend a whole afternoon just on reading a favourite book in starbark coffee house. Others might like to go fishing just by themselves besides(beside) the pool. For them, it is these hobbies or activities such like reading, fishing and so on, that reduce stress and enjoy themselves. After the relaxation, people will be much more passionate to devote themselves to their jobs and lives.

Of course, there may be a couple of people would like to spend time with other people such as friends, for relaxing themselves. They are more probable to stay with together to do some activities, including playing cards, singing karaoke or something else. Whereas, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious, such as consuming the energy. Most seriously, these activities are more likely to do harm for the nerves systems, especially after people have already been exhausted from work.(伤害神经系统有点过了吧，没有这么严重吧。如果硬要怎么说，就说朋友聚会，经常高兴了就喝很多酒，这会伤害神经系统)

In a word, taking into account of these factors above, it is sagacious to support the statement that the best way to relax is to spend time alone.

楼主很厉害，全文没有一个拼写错误，句子方面也几近完美，佩服

jiwasunUID: 2425569

寝室上不了网，很惨，其实早改好了，没有贴上来，实在抱歉

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

哦  对不起啊 我 才发现！
点错了！

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

谢谢点评！:)