【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】之【TWE写作】12月27日作业 by 达达

达达摩摩UID: 2499908

           With the rapid development of society, an creasing number of new technology and new commodities appear in our life. How can we to be familiar with many merchandises , and how can we use those new goods ? The answer of course is advertisements. From my point of view , I disagree with the following statement that advertisement waste money and time of company.

          In recent year, the remarkable improvement of people’s living standard. We need more and more to keep up with the trend of the times of fashion goods. Some of goods we know from our lives but some of those we have to know from advertisement . For example, I planed to configure a new computer last year, but I did not know what the fashion in that time , I ask my friends and help from my classmate , however , I also did not have effective information . I am so anxious. I had to get some information from new advertisements , after several days , I get the effective information that I need . Finally, I was very happy and I was satisfied with my own computer. This is my own example , I get the benefit from advertisement.

          Another point I believe that is play an increasing important rule in today. For instance, my good friend Sarah ,she is very beautiful with the big blue eyes and gold hair , Plus , she is very high ,with a height of 1.7m, she like to shopping and buy some dress and clothes . One day , we go shopping. We see a lot of dresses and personal adornments , we have no idea to do . At that time, one advertisement appear one big screen in market, we look so carefully, at last we get some useful goods go home . From my experience , I believe that advertisement is convenient and efficient .

         To sum up, I strong agree with advertisement is good for our life and society , we accept advertisement that we can keep pace with the development economy.

[ 本帖最后由 达达摩摩 于 2008-12-27 21:16 编辑 ]

chineseladyUID: 2403976

With the rapid development of society, an creasing number of new technology and new commodities appear in our life. How can we to be familiar with many merchandises, and how can we use those new goods ? The answer of course is advertisements. From my point of view , I disagree with the following statement that advertisement waste money and time of company 开头好比以前好很多呢！观点明确！赞！

In recent year, the remarkable improvement of people’s living standard. 这句没有谓语，老毛病哦We need more and more to keep up with the trend of the times of fashion goods. Some of goods we know from our lives but some of those we have to know from advertisement . For example, I planed to configure a new computer last year, but I did not know what the fashion in that time , I ask my friends and help from my classmate( asked help from my friends and classmates ), however , I also did not have effective information . I am so anxious. I had to get some information from new advertisements , after several days , I get the effective information that I need . Finally, I was very happy and I was satisfied with my own computer. This is my own example , I get the benefit from advertisement 动词时态不一

fAnother point I believe that is这里是少个词？ play an increasing important rule in today. For instance, my good friend Sarah ,she is very beautiful with the big blue eyes and gold hair , Plus , she is very high/tall ,with a height of 1.7m, she like to shopping and buy some dress and clothes . One day , we go shopping. We see a lot of dresses and personal adornments , we have no idea to do . At that time, one advertisement appear one big screen in market, we look so carefully, at last we get some useful goods go home . From my experience , I believe that advertisement is convenient and efficient 有些地方动词时态不一，该用过去的没有用。注意哦。

chineseladyUID: 2403976

With the rapid development of society, an creasing number of new technology and new commodities appear in our life. How can we to be familiar with many merchandises, and how can we use those new goods ? The answer of course is advertisements. From my point of view , I disagree with the following statement that advertisement waste money and time of company 开头好比以前好很多呢！观点明确！赞！

In recent year, the remarkable improvement of people’s living standard. 这句没有谓语，老毛病哦We need more and more to keep up with the trend of the times of fashion goods. Some of goods we know from our lives but some of those we have to know from advertisement . For example, I planed to configure a new computer last year, but I did not know what the fashion in that time , I ask my friends and help from my classmate( asked help from my friends and classmates ), however , I also did not have effective information . I am so anxious. I had to get some information from new advertisements , after several days , I get the effective information that I need . Finally, I was very happy and I was satisfied with my own computer. This is my own example , I get the benefit from advertisement 动词时态不一

fAnother point I believe that is这里是少个词？ play an increasing important rule in today. For instance, my good friend Sarah ,she is very beautiful with the big blue eyes and gold hair , Plus , she is very high/tall ,with a height of 1.7m, she like to shopping and buy some dress and clothes . One day , we go shopping. We see a lot of dresses and personal adornments , we have no idea to do . At that time, one advertisement appear one big screen in market, we look so carefully, at last we get some useful goods go home . From my experience , I believe that advertisement is convenient and efficient有些地方动词时态不一，该用过去的没有用。注意哦。

chineseladyUID: 2403976

With the rapid development of society, an creasing number of new technology and new commodities appear in our life. How can we to be familiar with many merchandises, and how can we use those new goods ? The answer of course is advertisements. From my point of view , I disagree with the following statement that advertisement waste money and time of company 开头好比以前好很多呢！观点明确！赞！

In recent year, the remarkable improvement of people’s living standard. 这句没有谓语，老毛病哦We need more and more to keep up with the trend of the times of fashion goods. Some of goods we know from our lives but some of those we have to know from advertisement . For example, I planed to configure a new computer last year, but I did not know what the fashion in that time , I ask my friends and help from my classmate( asked help from my friends and classmates ), however , I also did not have effective information . I am so anxious. I had to get some information from new advertisements , after several days , I get the effective information that I need . Finally, I was very happy and I was satisfied with my own computer. This is my own example , I get the benefit from advertisement 动词时态不一

fAnother point I believe that is这里是少个词？ play an increasing important rule in today. For instance, my good friend Sarah ,she is very beautiful with the big blue eyes and gold hair , Plus , she is very high/tall ,with a height of 1.7m, she like to shopping and buy some dress and clothes . One day , we go shopping. We see a lot of dresses and personal adornments , we have no idea to do . At that time, one advertisement appear one big screen in market, we look so carefully, at last we get some useful goods go home . From my experience , I believe that advertisement is convenient and efficient 有些地方动词时态不一，该用过去的没有用。注意哦。

chineseladyUID: 2403976

总算是正常了:confused: :(