9T第六次作业BYxulifengbee

xulifengbeeUID: 2286331

Along with the improvement of people’s living standard and the ever increasing of the income, eating at restaurants has been affordable and widely accepted. The mass of the restaurant-goers claim that eating at food stands is hassle saving. Unlike these “lazy” people, I personally prefer to prepare dishes myself.

Actually, my favorite room of my house is the kitchen. I enjoy the sense of cooking dinner myself and sharing it with my family and friends. Undeniably my ability of cooking cannot be compared with professional, but I still tend to do it as I hope I could show my sincere to the guests however bad the dinner is. When a dish is competed, it is the time to harvest happiness, especially with the praises of others

Besides, DIY-dinner is much safer. Some businessmen will use low quality materials for the finacial benefits. These questioned foods will murder our health. Once in my country, more than one hundred people were killed by unsafe food. The issue about food safety greatly sharked the whole society and waked people to pay attention to the risk of eating at restaurant.

Besides the safety, home cooking has greater purchase value. The cost of eating outside for a long time cannot be neglected. At home only the cost of the materials should be considered, while in the restaurant the fee for the labor is needed. For youngest who just begin to earn money for the rent, it is more important to learn to cook dinner. It is a huge saving for a better live.

Therefore it is not hard to conclude that having a dinner at home is a good choice for purchasing happiness, safety and financial. Do it yourself!



还是长度不够，但我在努力:)

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Along with the improvement of people’sliving standard and the ever increasing of the income, eating at restaurantshas(is becoming) been affordable and widely accepted. The mass of therestaurant-goers claim that eating at food stands is hassle saving. Unlikethese “lazy” people, I personally prefer to prepare dishes myself.

Actually, my favorite room of my house is the kitchen. I enjoy the sense ofcooking dinner myself and sharing it with my family and friends. Undeniably myability of cooking cannot be compared with professional, but I still tend to doit as I hope I could show my sincere to the guests however bad the dinner is(这句不懂). When a dish is completed, itis the time to harvest happiness, especially with the praises of others

Besides, DIY-dinner is much safer. Some businessmen will use low qualitymaterials for the financial benefits. These questioned foods will murder ourhealth. Once in my country, more than one hundred people were killed by unsafefood(一次?一年总共?). The issue about food safetygreatly sharked(这是敲诈的意思，你是不是说sharpen)the whole society and waked people to pay attention to the risk of eating atrestaurant.(感觉没说完，建议把这句和Topic联系起来)

Besides the safety, home cooking has greater(great) purchase value(economical).The cost of eating outside for a long time cannot be neglected. At home onlythe cost of the materials should be considered, while in the restaurant the feefor the labor is needed. For youngest(最小的儿子？) who just begin to earn money for the rent, it is more important tolearn to cook dinner. It is a huge saving for a better live.

Therefore it is not hard to conclude that having a dinner at home is a goodchoice for purchasing happiness, safety and financial. Do it yourself!(喊口号，汗!)

我也说不出来什么原因，总觉得怪怪的
字数有点少，建议多加点例子，然后分析例子，就充实了

xulifengbeeUID: 2286331

thanks 字数少的确是个问题 我会注意的