生如夏花小组第11次作业, 坚持到底才是男人

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The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

口语:

说说最喜欢的一个room，自己家的或者是其他地方的。

“Never, never, never give up.” During the hardest time of World War 2, Churchill, the one who was the president of England, announced this declaration. It might be one of the shortest speeches in the world, however, one of the most influential speech as well. People all over the world were spiritually encouraged by these five words, and finally won the victory of war with these words as their beliefs.

Up till now, the old speech has functioned as an adage. And a variety of questions are raised judging from divergent aspects. Someone argues it might be too stubborn to persist one thing forever and indeed a large amount of people find themselves involved in a dilemma that whether they should keep going, when it comes to the situation fraught with problems and troubles. Nonetheless, as far as I am concerned, the proverb leads us to success under and only under right circumstances.

To begin with, we should never give up while the route we choose is right because, admittedly, challenges come all the time in today’s society. We have to overcome the difficulties in order to approach the success. Actually, it is could be weird to imagine that one could get things done forthrightly and readily like the superman in the movie. And in most of the long race towards success, people, who make one more step, would grasp the fruit of victory.

Moreover, I learned another proverb which said, “do what you like, all that you do, things done by halves are never done right.” I agree with that. As a matter of fact, I am just practicing this proverb now. I am a Chinese students studying Applied chemistry in Japan. And the university, of which admission I want requires me a certification of above 100 Toefl ibt score. It is could be torturous because we Chinese in Japan have to learn two languages, including English and Japanese. Furthermore, unfortunately, the pronunciation, intonation, and grammar of these two are completely different. At the even harder, many of us have to further our study in the major we want to choose in university and take a part time job for subsisting. In this case, it is never surprising to see if one tells he or she quit. But when it comes to me, I would never, never, never give up for the reason the task is strenuous and tedious. I may fail, even if I donate all my blood into the preparation for entering university. But I may never have the chance to success if I quit on the middle of the way. Living with shame, or dying with dignity, perhaps I am always the stubborn one who keeps choosing the latter one. But at least I never feel regretful about the assumption that “ if I pay more patience, I may succeed”.

On the contrary, some people cast doubt on what if one choose the wrong way and keep never giving up. In that case, persistence directs them to the failure rather than the success. In contrast, I would like to argue, we would never give up on the way towards our goal. But it does mean we could not change our method to succeed. As could be seen, these things occur occasionally only under the condition that people are not aware of improving themselves.

After all these factors above are contemplated, It could be easy for us to vindicate the old adage that, never, never give up is right in most of time.


[ 本帖最后由 portsxu 于 2007-7-22 21:06 编辑 ]

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Well , my favorite/the most impressive room in my house is kitchen. I could never forget my interesting experience in the kitchen.

First of all, my grandma taught me how to cook in that room, we spent a lot of time there, I could not forget how patient and benign she was. The period I spent with my grandma there is precious for me as I am now studying overseas.

Moreover, I really enjoy cooking in the kitchen. I still remember how excited I was when I finished my first version of dumplings successfully.

In addition, the kitchen is always the magic place filled up with delicious food, when I am hungry, when I am thirsty, I just open the fridge, candy, pizza, grape juice, I could get any one I like.

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“Never, never, never give up.” During the hardest time of World War 2, Churchill, the one(不要) who was the president of England, announced this declaration. It might be one of the shortest speeches in the world, however, one of the most influential speech as well. People all over the world were spiritually encouraged by these five words, and finally won the victory of war with these words as their beliefs.(好厉害的开头....这个史实不是杜撰的吧....太厉害了)

Up till now, the old speech has functioned as an adage. And a variety of questions are raised judging from divergent aspects. Someone argues it might be too stubborn to persist one thing forever and indeed a large amount of people find themselves involved in a dilemma that whether they should keep going, when it comes to the situation fraught with problems and troubles. Nonetheless, as far as I am concerned, the proverb leads us to success under and only under right circumstances.(本身没什么问题...但是,是否值得另开一段说这个>>>纯粹是模板话啊////)

To begin with, we should never give up while the route we choose is right (right了为什么还要give up) because, admittedly, challenges come (are coming up) all the time in today’s society. We have to overcome the difficulties in order to approach the success. Actually, it is could be weird (unrealistic) to imagine that one could get things done forthrightly and readily like the superman in the movie. And in most of the long race towards success, people, who make one more step, would grasp (gain) the fruit of victory.(个人意见:我听说IBT作文第一段_表达你的意见的第一段需要是最充实的.我自己英语也不地道,但觉得你的一些用法,怪怪的.而且这一段里,你只从正反两面说了下,没有层次递进.TS不明显,用superman那个比较俏皮,呵呵)

Moreover, I learned another proverb (用这个暗示两段关系很巧妙) which said, “do what you like, all that you do, things done by halves are never done right.” (这个proverb有点晦涩,个人觉得还是别在段首完文字游戏的好,段首是别人急切要看你论点的地方) I agree with that. As a matter of fact, I am just practicing this proverb now. I am a Chinese students studying Applied chemistry in Japan. And the university, of which admission I want requires me a certification of above 100 Toefl ibt score. It is could be torturous because we Chinese in Japan have to learn two languages, including English and Japanese. Furthermore, unfortunately, the pronunciation, intonation, and grammar of these two are completely different. At the even harder, many of us have to further our study in the major we want to choose in university and take a part time job for subsisting. In this case, it is never surprising to see if one tells he or she quit. But when it comes to me, I would never, never, never give up for the reason the task is strenuous and tedious. I may fail, even if I donate all my blood into the preparation for entering university. But I may never have the chance to success if I quit on the middle of the way. Living with shame, or dying with dignity, perhaps I am always the stubborn one who keeps choosing the latter one. But at least I never feel regretful about the assumption that “ if I pay more patience, I may succeed”. (5555,太感人了......感人的把瑕疵都可以54了....非常详细非常生活化....个人认为你之前两段可以不要了,,,,)

On the contrary, (however或者in addition转折稍微好点) some people cast doubt on what if one choose the wrong way and keep never giving up. In that case, persistence directs them to the failure rather than the success. In contrast, I would like to argue, we would never give up on the way towards our goal. But it does mean we could not change our method to succeed. As could be seen,(病句吧) these things occur occasionally only under the condition that people are not aware of (the necessary of) improving themselves.

After all these factors above are contemplated, It could be easy for us to vindicate the old adage that, never, never give up is right in most of time.(呼应的很好)

问题都说在上面了....中间一段非常好,另外我个人认为不要太依赖模板,尤其是不必要的话,我认为你第二段基本是issue里为凑字数的模板,IBT本来字数要求就少,没必要吧
个别表达注意下,句子进步很大.祝继续进步!!!!!加油,,,拉拉拉~~~~

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Well , my favorite/the most impressive room in my house is kitchen. I could never forget my interesting experience in the kitchen.

First of all, my grandma taught me how to cook in that room, we spent a lot of time there, I could not forget how patient and benign she was. The period I spent with my grandma there is precious for me as I am now studying overseas.

Moreover, I really enjoy cooking in the kitchen. I still remember how excited I was when I finished my first version of dumplings successfully.

In addition, the kitchen is always the magic place filled up with delicious food, when I am hungry, when I am thirsty, I just open the fridge, candy, pizza, grape juice, I could get any one I like.

很逼真的情景,,,,,,很好,,,,,惭愧下

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刚网上查了下, 丘吉尔的原文有俩个版本,never,never,never,never give in  or   never,never,never,never giveup

一看到这个题目就想起来了他的话,以前哪里看到过

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搜索到的一个朋友写的文章,转过来大家看下

作文题目： The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.“永不，永不放弃”这句话意味着坚持不懈地为了目标而奋斗。你是否同意这种陈述呢？用最特别的理由和例子来充实你的答案。

“Never, never give up.” is the shortest speech from Winston Churchill, the Prime Minister of Great Britain during Second World War, but with these four words, Britons were tremendously encouraged and finally went through that harsh period.

“永不，永不放弃”是二战期间英国首相丘吉尔最简短的演说词，但是依靠着这四个单词，英国人民受到巨大的鼓舞并且最终走过了一段艰难的时期。

“Never give up” is a positive attitude towards failure, problems and frustrations. The process of persisting with the goals in spite of great difficulties is fairly respectable. A case in point is that thunderous applause particularly gives to the athletes who get hurt during the competition but continue to complete. They are no doubt regarded as winners, winners with full of spectators’ respect. They are in violent and lovely contrast with those who tend to quit once the aims are elusive. Quit does render all the effort meaningless.

“永不放弃”是面对失败、困难以及挫折时一种积极向上的态度。不管多么困难都坚守目标是非常值得敬佩的。人们将雷鸣般地掌声特别给予那些在比赛中受伤但坚持完成比赛的运动员就是一个例子。他们毋庸置疑是赢得观众们尊敬的胜利者。他们与那些在迷茫中想要放弃目标的人形成明显的反差。放弃将会使所有的努力付之东流。

Persistence, more often than not gives us a second chance to achieve the goals. That we fail somewhere does not mean that against all odds we can accomplish the objectives somewhere else. As long as the opportunity, faint as it may be, can still be seized, continuous attempts will play a significant role in attaining the final success. Failure is just ephemeral. There are a great number of facts to prove that. Some great inventions, such as telephone, experienced numerous unsuccessful attempts, but eventually they changed our lives and our community with far-reaching effect.

毅力，通常会给我们实现目标的第二次机会。我们在某处失败并不意味着总是如此，我们可以在另一处完成目标。只要有机会，命运也许就会抓住它，不断尝试在走向最终成功的道路上扮演着一个重要的角色。失败只是暂时的。无数的例子证明了这一点。一些伟大的发明，例如电话，就经历了无数次失败的尝试之后，最终改变我们的生活并带给社会深远的影响。

To what extent we keep trying and never stop depends largely on how strong our faith is for seeking the goals. Therefore, we should first make sure that our goals are clearly defined and achievable. Then the methods or means are well designed and practicable. Any unrealistic objective is not worth pursuing sedulously since it is doomed to a futile project. By carefully thinking and planning, with adequate courage and confidence, we have no reason to fail.

我们不断尝试并且永不放弃的程度取决于我们要达到目标的决心有多大。因此，我们应该首先确定我们目标明确且可以完成。之后一些方法或者手段才能更好的计划实施。任何不现实的目标不值得去辛苦地追求因为它注定是无用的计划。通过仔细地思考和计划，拥有足够的勇气和信心，我们就没有理由失败。

“Never, never give up” will definitely lead us to brilliant success.
“永不，永不放弃”明确地引导我们走向充满光明的成功。

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很好,一些句子收下了