IMPLUSE 8月12号奥运作业，求猛拍！~

gabby19832004UID: 2461820

新能源（sun, wind, water）will be soon replace 旧能源fossil fuels (oil, gas…)， agree or disagree?
Several decades ago, when people earned their livings by handicrafts, the resources they exploited were limitied. However, with the fulfillment of industrializaiton, we make use of energy in a lavish way, not only the old energy, oil, gas, coal, but the new energy, sun, wind, water alike. The environment protection and new energy replacement have become a hot topic among people in the 21st century.

I posit fossil fuels should be substituted frist because they always cause severe enviroment problems to us. It is a potentially devastating problem that confront us all. It is broadly acknowledged that by burning thousands upon thousands tons of coal we boost the greenhouse gas (CO2) volume in a skyrocket pace. And that increase has in turn speed up the greenhouse effect which brings us the melt of iceberg, the flood and the hurricane all over the world. Obviously, if we keep us being a spendthrift of fossil fuels we are definitely deserve such punishment of the nature.

Secondly, the old energies are not regenerative while the new energies are. The fossil fuels, we could know their characteristic from their name, is made from fossil. As the major ingredient of fossil fuels, the ancient plants buried in to the soil, after several billion years development the form the coal, the oil and gas. They could not generate themselves soon after we deplete them. The new energy, however, is infinite to us to some extent. The solar energy can never be used out, the water could circulate itself, and the wind could regenerate time and time again.

Thirdly, it would be more clean and convenient for us to employ the new energy. After burning the coal, we have to deal with the remnant it produced. We also longing for a kind of gasoline that is more clean. As we talking about gasoline, everyone may have the same tedious experiment of waiting in long a queue in the gas station. What if we make use of solar energy? What if we make it replace gasoline? Everything will turn out to be easier. Just by running in the road or bask by the roadside we could charge up our cars without worrying 93# or 97# or a more clean fuel resource.

By and large, I have the inclination that new energy should replace fossil energy immediately for they are more clean and easy usable, as well as they are inexhaustible.

19811010316UID: 2220703

They could not generate themselves soon after we deplete them.
We also longing for a kind of gasoline that is more clean.
tedious experiment of waiting in long a queue

非常好，写得如非常具体。

Jas2008UID: 2509577

Several decades ago, when people earned their livings by handicrafts, the resources they exploited were limitied. However, with the fulfillment of industrializaiton, we make use of energy in a lavish way, not only the old energy, oil, gas, coal, but the new energy, sun, wind, water alike. The environment protection and new energy replacement have become a hot topic among people in the 21st century.(展开得不错,如果再点名自己的观点就更好了)|留

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(有点突兀，中间加一些过度会衔接更好)I posit fossil fuels should be substituted frist because they always cause severe enviroment problems to us. It is a potentially devastating problem that confronts us all. It is broadly acknowledged that by burning thousands upon thousands tons of coal we boost the greenhouse gas (CO2) volume in a skyrocket pace. And that increase has in turn speed up the greenhouse effect which brings us the rapid melt of iceberg, the flood and the hurricane all over the world. Obviously, if we keep（or indulge） us being a spendthrift of fossil fuels we are definitely deserve such punishment of the nature.|留学

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Secondly, the old energies are not regenerative while the new energies are. The fossil fuels, we could know their characteristic from their name, is made from fossil. As the major ingredient of fossil fuels, the ancient plants buried in the soil, after（spend） several billion years to form the coal, the oil and gas. They could not generate themselves soon after we deplete them. The new energy, however, is infinite to us to some extent. The solar energy can never be used out, the water could circulate itself, and the wind could regenerate time and again.

Thirdly, it would be more clean and convenient for us to employ（utilize） the new energy. After burning the coal, we have to deal with the remnant it produced. We also longing for a kind of gasoline that is more clean. As we talking about gasoline, everyone may have the same tedious experiment of waiting in a long queue in the gas station. What if we make use of solar energy? What if we make it replace gasoline? Everything will turn out to be easier. Just by running in the road or basking by the roadside we could charge up our cars without worrying 93# or 97# or a more clean fuel resource.0s/N-l*dA3b

        By and large, I have the inclination that new energy should replace fossil energy immediately for they are more clean and easy usable, as well as they are inexhaustible.|

语言还应继续推敲，很多地方可以改进。
注意文章的连贯性和段落的逻辑衔接，尽量围绕中心阐述每一句话。

ourtransUID: 2241441

Several decades ago, when people earned their livings by handicrafts, the resources they exploited were limitied. However, with the fulfillment of industrializaiton, we make use of energy in a lavish way, not only the old energy, oil, gas, coal, but the new energy, sun, wind, water alike. The environment protection and new energy replacement have become a hot topic among people in the 21st century.I posit fossil fuels should be substituted frist because they always cause severe enviroment problems to us. It is a potentially devastating problem that confronts us all. It is broadly acknowledged that by burning thousands upon thousands tons of coal we boost the greenhouse gas (CO2) volume in a skyrocket pace. And that increase has in turn speed up the greenhouse effect which brings us the melt of iceberg, the flood and the hurricane all over the world. Obviously, if we keep us being a spendthrift of fossil fuels we are definitely deserve such punishment of the nature.bbs.gter.netgvQB#UJ  
lSecondly, the old energies are not regenerative while the new energies are. The fossil fuels, we could know their characteristic from their name, is made from fossil. As the major ingredient of fossil fuels, the ancient plants buried in to the soil, after several billion years development the form the coal, the oil and gas. They could not generate themselves soon after we deplete them. The new energy, however, is infinite to us to some extent. The solar energy can never be used out, the water could circulate itself, and the wind could regenerate time and time again.寄托家园&R9X%w
Thirdly, it would be more clean and convenient for us to employ the new energy. After burning the coal, we have to deal with the remnant it produced. We also longing for a kind of gasoline that is more cleaner. As we are talking about gasoline, everyone may have the same tedious experimentexperience of waiting in long a a long queue in the gas station. What if we make use of solar energy? What if we make it replace gasoline? Everything will turn out to be easier. Just by running in the road or bask by the roadside we could charge up our cars without worrying 93# or 97# or a more clean fuel resource.|By and large, I have the inclination that new energy should replace fossil energy immediately for they are more clean and easy usable, as well as they are inexhaustible.

不错，继续加油。尝试着完成后自己改写，用不同的词代替已经用了的词。