Issue103 没怎么改 先贴上,大家有空指点一下,互拍

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Issue103 ------摘要------
作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：53分31秒     477 words
从2005年7月10日11时5分到2005年7月10日11时53分

提纲：　１，历史对我们的精神有鼓励作用
　　　　２．历史遗迹给现代社会带来了价值
　　　　３．历史可以预测未来

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The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives.
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The value of history is relevant to our daily lives, which contains not only the spirit of psychology, but also the material preservation. The history effects have influence on our aspects of daily life.

As we know, the education focuses on the spirit of famous historic people in our school. From the spirit of study and fighting, it also enlightens our idea. For example, the Thomas Edison made thousands of experiments for a light. Finally, he achieved. It tells us thousands of failures are prior to success through sorrow and frustration. No failure, no success. Accordingly, when we encounter a failure in work or study, we may be encouraged by these spirit. In the second place, amount of famous people give our experience of fighting for the antiracism, equality, free, liberty. Mandela, a leader of South Africa, who leads his country to win independency, and leads his national people to reach free, equality, is famous with antiracism. He is a model of learning by many people who fight for their free and equality. Of course, he is respectful by many people. Therefore, in spite of what we do, if we affront the difficult, we may be encouraged by historic successful people.

In the meanwhile, including studying the spirit of historic people, we can benefit from the historic materials.  If there are some historic preservations, they can increase income, since the preservation can attract many people to visit. For example, the yellow park, which is famous with nature scene, attracts many people annually. Not only the park benefits from the visiting people, but the hotel, restaurant, the taxi, even shop where  if people want to buy something,  benefit from preservation. They can earn much more profit on visitors. Indeed, everyone shares the achievement of history. For example, If no train, we also spend a long time on traveling some place. If no computer, perhaps large amount of data are hard to be dealing with. If no air-conditioner, we maybe suffer from heat in the summer. Hence,  no history, on our daily life.

Nevertheless, the history which is not only relevant o our daily life also help us predict future, No historical data, such as the demography, we could not control the trend of population development, And we also don't make suitable plan for future. No historic image, the scientists fail to develop the advanced technology as they are based on historic questions. Such as robot, which turns out in the scientific fiction, turns reality ultimately by a series of experiment. No former experiments before doing something, it is possible to walk cursive road. The history tells us which road is better, in order to avoid us make similar false, while point a better direction. In short, the history takes an important role in predicting future.

In sum, the history is relevant to our daily life, also to our future. Everyone all benefit from history, let alone he admits or not.  So, If we absorb the elite of history, we can develop better for ourselves.

[ Last edited by 阿择菜 on 2005-8-10 at 14:08 ]

foreveraUID：202035

同学...我的文章你好象都没有看明白哦.....

阿择菜UID：2110339

我怎么没看明白了,,,我不是把我的看法都写的很清楚吗

阿择菜UID：2110339

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