TWE第一篇求拍：if you could ask a famous person one question

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At the first look, this is a simple question, but with some reflection it becomes a tough choice, it all depends on what kind of famous person you meet. As far as my own response is concerned, The special question comes to my mind is what were you doing when you were still a infamous person just like me.

As a famous person, of course he or she is rich, and have won a lot of respect and admire. all of these, however, tend to confuse your judgment. So if you want to know what kind of person he or she really is I think such a question will more or less give you some deep impression about that. For example, some day you meet a very famous professor in your field, more specifically, he or she is a Nobel Prize winner. You got a really big chance, but if you ask him or her why are you so successful today, are there some useful tips or shortcuts? Most frequently, you will get such a response: just keep trying, focus on something interesting, and after the age of 50 or 60, you will get what I get today. That is right, but what you can learn from his response? So little, everybody know he or she should try their best to pursue their goal in life, but the problem is how to practice this!

However, if you ask him what did you do everyday when you were my age? what you did everyday in your childhood, were you a thoughtful guy? This would be a better question, why? Because you can get more ideas and inspiration from such kind of response. From his or her response, you may know you should join more social activities, such as serving as volunteer in some conferences or doing some volunteer works for local community. Or, simply, you should train yourself to be a more open-mind student, try to find chances to discuss with your lecturers or your classmates. In a word, doing something special would certainly distinguish yourself with others, and then actually you have paved the road to success by yourself.

To be frank, such a choice of question actually, in other words, means what we can learn from famous person. You can not simply hold a wish that I want to be famous too because he or she can be such famous. What you need to do is to find some ways practical or directive for your recent situation instead of asking a question full with passion and admire, just as a professor in our college always says: following your own choice and interests is exactly your shortcut in your career even in your life.

At last, it is hard to give any conclusive summary. What I want to say is that, having a chance to meet some celebrities is lucky, but the most important thing is to find some practical ways suitable to your interests and your dream, and then someday your dream will become your excited career.
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At the first look, this is a simple question, but with some reflection it becomes a tough choice, it all depends on what kind of famous person you meet. As far as my own response is concerned, The special question comes to my mind is what were(用现在时就可以了吧) you doing when you were still a infamous person just like me.

As a famous person, of course he or she is rich, and have(has) won a lot of respects and admire(admiration). all of these, however, tend to confuse your judgment. So if you want to know what kind of person he or she really is I think such a question(什么样的question,不明白) will more or less give you some deep impression about that. For example, some day you meet a very famous professor in your field, more specifically, he or she is a Nobel Prize winner. You got(get) a really(去掉) big chance, but if you ask him or her why are you(注意语序you are) so successful today, are there(there may be) some useful tips or shortcuts? Most frequently, you will get such a response: just keep trying, focus on something interesting, and after the age of 50 or 60, you will get what I get today. That is right, but what you can learn from his(去掉) response? So little, everybody know he or she should try their best to pursue their goal in life, but the problem is how to practice this! (从that is 开始, 总觉得说话很罗嗦, 建议简化!)

However, if you ask him what did you do everyday when you were my age?(what you did everyday when you are in my age.) what you did(did you do) everyday in your childhood, were you a thoughtful guy? This would be a better question, why? Because you can get more ideas and inspirations from such kind of response. From his or her response, you may know you should join more social activities, such as serving as volunteer in some conferences or doing some volunteer works for local community. Or, simply, you should train yourself to be a more open-mind student, try to find chances to discuss with your lecturers or your classmates. In a word, doing something special would certainly distinguish yourself with others, and then actually you have paved the road to success by yourself.

To be frank, such a choice of question actually, in other words, means what we can learn from famous person. You can not simply hold a wish that I want to be famous too because he or she can be such famous.(感觉没说完) What you need to do is to find some ways practical or directive for your recent situation instead of asking a question full with passion and admire, just as a professor in our college always says: following your own choice and interests is exactly your shortcut in your career even in your life.

At last, it is hard to give any conclusive summary. What I want to say is that, having a chance to meet some celebrities is lucky, but the most important thing is to find some practical ways suitable to your interests and your dream, and then someday your dream will become your excited career.
果然是刚考完g的人啊, 语句的表达很到位,但是有时感觉话还没说完就结束了, 让人有种不知所云的感觉. 还要注意语法!

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考完G好久了！限时太紧张，语句不可能很严密，语法错误对我来说也免不了！

对了那个what did you do everyday when you were my age?(what you did everyday when you are in my age.)
应该就是用过去时吧？