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交晚了,对不起大家,昨天实在写不出来。。

Issue31  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧!
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作者:寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间:58分0秒     331 words
从2006年5月14日9时6分到2006年5月14日10时58分
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Money spent on research is almost always a good investment, even when the results of that research are controversial.
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Scholar and scientific studies are extremely important, as they provide individuals, organizations, and society with discoveries, inventions, and following financial profits. However it is too idealistic and optimistic to claim that money spent on research is almost always a good investment, because a good investment, which means great benefits with few problems, requires careful evaluation of social background, the conductors' working abilities, and the operating processes.

First of all, money spent on research cannot be well invested without detailed observation of social status. The research is not likely to produce profits immediately and efficiently when it has nothing to do with the requirement of individuals, organizations, or society, because people cannot make use of the results of the research with has cost a large amount of money. On the other hand, the research cannot exceed the affordability of its conductors and society, otherwise it will induce severe problems. Other studies cannot be operated smoothly, and their following profits will be reduced. The ordinary life of individuals, management of organizations, and stability of society will be threatened. As a result, only when the research fits the social background, at least the related requirement and affordability, money spent on it can become a good investment.

Besides, the money spent on research cannot be well invested without appropriate conductors with relevant abilities. It cannot be expected that economic studies carried out by artists with little economic knowledge will reach high profits. Different studies demand different experts and workers, as well as the number of them. An easy study does not need a huge work team, otherwise money will be wasted on the complex management of that large organization. A difficult study cannot be conducted without a relatively large work team, which can ensure the progress of that study. Therefore, only when the research is carried out by an appropriate number of appropriate experts and workers, money spent on it can become a good investment.

Furthermore, the money spent on research cannot be well invested without a careful plan of the operating processes. The research should be finished on time with expected results, or the money spent on it cannot reach high profits. Each step of the research should operate smoothly, so as to avoid unnecessary problems. Thus an excellent plan is extremely essential, and only when the operating processes of the research is well planned, money spent on it can become a good investment.

In conclusion, not all money spent on research can become a good investment. In order to produce great profits with few problems, the research must fit social requirement and related affordability, and has to be conducted by an appropriate work team with well planned operating processes.
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发表于 2006-6-14 10:45:31 |只看该作者
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观点:用在研究上的钱并不总是好的投资,好的投资,即创造高的收益且只引起少量的问题,需要对客观条件,研究者的能力和研究方案作出评估

1. 好的投资必须与客观条件相符,即满足当前的社会需要,又不超出社会的承载能力
2. 好的投资必须是投资到适合的研究者和研究团队
3. 好的投资要求好的实行计划

总结:只有当一个研究项目符合客观的社会条件,有适合的研究团队,并且有好地实行计划的时候,使用在其上的资金才能成为好的投资

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Issue186  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧!
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Practicality is now our great idol, which all powers and talents must serve. Anything that is not obviously practical has little value in today's world.
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Thesis: Admittedly practicality provides individuals, organizations, and society with immediate profits, necessary supplements, and pleasant circumstances, idealism, something that is not apparently practical at all, also plays a significantly important role in today’s world, no matter academically, economically, or politically.

1.        Academically, while practicality enables people to gain high grades, abundant funds, and splendid fames more easily, idealism encourages people to develop all their possibilities and go deeper and further.
2.        Economically, while practicality ensures efficient management, smooth operation, and stable profits, idealism give people beautiful dreams and life targets, which help them overcome difficulties and failures bravely and optimistically.
3.        Politically, while practicality helps people defeat adversaries and produce high efficiency, idealism can deeply impress ordinary people and conduct large campaigns such as innovations and revolutions.

In conclusion, practicality is necessary and important, which great powers and talents must serve, whereas other things that are not obviously practical, but somehow idealistic, cannot be ignored. Idealism is also extremely essential in today’s world, as it encourages people to develop their total possibility, overcome difficulties optimistically, and impress others deeply.

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Argument213  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧!
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The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of Armchair Video, a chain of video rental store.
'Because of declining profits, we must reduce operating expenses at Armchair Video's ten video rental stores. Raising prices is not a good option, since we are famous for our special bargains. Instead, we should reduce our operating hours. Last month our store in downtown Marston reduced its hours by closing at 6:00 P.M. rather than 9:00 P.M. and reduced its overall inventory by no longer stocking any film released more than two years ago. Since we have received very few customer complaints about these new policies, we should now adopt them at all other Armchair Video stores as our best strategies for improving profits.'
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The owner of claims that in order to deal with declining profits, all Armchair Video stores should reduce operating hours and stop stocking any film released more than two years ago. Admittedly the owner has been working hard to solve the problem of declining profits, but his recommendation is not as practical as he expects.

1.        In order to reduce operating expenses, the owner recommends that they should reduce operating hours because raising prices is not a good option. He argues that they cannot increase prices because they are famous for special bargains. However, if their special bargain is main cause of the declining profits, reducing operating hours cannot provide Armchair Video stores any improvement.
2.        The owner illustrates the activities of their store in downtown Marston, and encourages all their other stores to carry out similar polices, because they have received very few complaints. Nevertheless, he has not mentioned the following operation of that store. Few complaints does not mean increasing profits. In fact, no information indicates that the operating expenses have been saved since they reduced operating hours by closing at 6:00 P.M. rather than 9:00 P.M., or sales have been improved since they reduce overall inventory by no longer stocking any film released more than two years ago.

In conclusion, the owner’s recommendation is not reasonable. Whether adopting those policies can reduce operating expenses or improve profits still remains a question.

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Issue31  第7篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧!
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作者:寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间:58分0秒     331 words
从2006年5月14日9时6分到2006年5月14日10时58分
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Money spent on research is almost always a good investment, even when the results of that research are controversial.
------正文------
Scholar(   size=3]Sample Text scholastic)and scientific studies are extremely important, as they provide individuals, organizations, and society with discoveries, inventions, and following financial profits. However it is too idealistic and optimistic to claim that money spent on research is almost always a good investment, because a good investment, which means great benefits with few problems, requires careful evaluation of social background, the conductors' working abilities, and the operating processes.

First of all, money spent on research cannot be well invested without detailed observation of social status. The research is not likely to produce profits immediately and efficiently when it has nothing to do with the requirement of individuals, organizations, or society, because people cannot make use of the results of the research with has cost a large amount of money. On the other hand, the research cannot exceed the affordability of its conductors and society, otherwise it will induce severe problems. Other studies cannot be operated smoothly, and their following profits will be reduced. The ordinary life of individuals, management of organizations, and stability of society will be threatened. As a result, only when the research fits the social background, at least the related requirement and affordability, money spent on it can become a good investment.

Besides, the money spent on research cannot be well invested without appropriate conductors with relevant abilities. It cannot be expected that economic studies carried out by artists with little economic knowledge will reach high profits. Different studies demand different experts and workers, as well as the number of them. An easy study does not need a huge work team, otherwise money will be wasted on the complex management of that large organization. A difficult study cannot be conducted without a relatively large work team, which can ensure the progress of that study. Therefore, only when the research is carried out by an appropriate number of appropriate experts and workers, money spent on it can become a good investment.

Furthermore, the money spent on research cannot be well invested without a careful plan of the operating processes. The research should be finished on time with expected results, or the money spent on it cannot reach high profits. Each step of the research should operate smoothly, so as to avoid unnecessary problems. Thus an excellent plan is extremely essential, and only when the operating processes of the research is well planned, money spent on it can become a good investment.

In conclusion, not all money spent on research can become a good investment. In order to produce great profits with few problems, the research must fit social requirement and related affordability, and has to be conducted by an appropriate work team with well planned operating processes.

作者驾驭文字的功底很强,行文基本上没有很大的错误,只是作者的观点我不是很赞成,我认为这个论题应该是持肯定意见,有保留的赞成
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