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发表于 2009-2-19 16:06:51 |显示全部楼层
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Currently econimic mushroom,the society is becoming increasingly competitive. As students who are about to step into the society,we must grasp sophisticated technology to intensify job-market competition. Education is entering a new era . The universities are now offering a wider range of courses to students for them to select from. I strongly agree with the viewpoint that it’s benefit to students at university to choose difficult classes despite they hard to get top grades.

In the first place,only through learning more advanced knowledge can We have a leg up on the competition. In a changing and competitive global economy,  job-market competition appears increasingly awfully fierce. Furthermore, in recent years,the frontiers of science are topics of most concern.  There are some complex and abstruse areas of academic interest or pecializations needed to solve. Thus,we should take difficult classes besides foundation Course to catch up with the sustained development of society.

In addition,learning difficult classes is conducive to improve the capacity of solving complicated problem. Since the knowledge of difficult classes is always abstruse and complex,in the process of learning those,it can enhance such as logical flow or flexibility; capacity to cope with changes. Choosing difficult classes is also a challenge to students,because of its profundity. If you have the courage and daring to overcome the challenge ,  you can maintains boundless confidence in itself and the courage to correct mistakes, overcome danger, remove shortcomings, surmount difficulties and work for greater victories.

Above all,learning difficult classes is so crucial for students at university. And hard to get top grades doesn't mean that there is no possibility of getting top grades if you can put your heart and soul into it.


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