TOEFL4-6 Dark-Tournament小组第12次作业by liurui8802

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Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.（07.1.13）


Many students are complaining about their daily homework, saying that this boring burden has crowded out their time for playing. However, many teachers and parents hold the view that daily homework is crucial in enhancing skills students learn in class. As a student, I believe daily homework is indispensable, yet to help students learn better and happier, we should change the forms of homework. With a more creative form, students can find their daily homework joyful and meaningful.

Undoubtedly, homework is an effective tool to assist students in acquiring knowledge and applying skills we learn under situations close to reality. Hardly can we grasp the true essence of a theory in maths or physics if we do not practice through daily homework. We may find a theory easy at first glance, but in reality we may fail to apply it successfully. With daily practice, on the contrary, we find the skills or the theory impressive on our minds, and easily apply them when we encounter similar situation in our lives.

Some people may argue that some subjects, such as history, philosophy, are totally a matter of memorizing facts. Homework will definitely turn these courses into a dull and boring task, which, at worst, can let children lose interest in these subjects.Thus the daily homework should be eliminated. It may seem plausible, but daily work can be meaningful and joyful only if the forms of homework are changed. For instance, teachers may as well discard the old-fashioned style——copying the important facts, numbers in the textbook——but introduce new and creative forms such as daily discussion within a group or searching on the Internet for related materials of the events or facts they talk about in class. Not only will these daily homework be attractive to students and boost their interest, but students will also learn communication skills, team spirit and critical thinking through the processes.If we clear the homework off the board in a haste, children  will get rid of bordom as well as a chance to develope other important skills.

Daily homework is necessary, no matter what subject it is. But if our teachers are willing to think out some more funny and creative forms of homework, they will help their students study happier and better.



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Many students are complaining about their daily homework, saying that this boring burden has crowded out(这个地方用crowd out不知道合不合适，感觉有点不对) their time for playing. However, many teachers and parents hold the view that daily homework is crucial in enhancing skills students learn in class. As a student, I believe daily homework is indispensable, yet to help students learn better and happier, we should change the forms of homework. With a more creative form, students can find their daily homework joyful and meaningful.

Undoubtedly, homework is an effective tool to assist students in acquiring knowledge and applying skills we learn under situations close to reality. Hardly can we grasp the true essence of a theory in maths or physics if we do not practice through daily homework. We may find a theory easy at first glance, but in reality we may fail to apply it successfully. With daily practice, on the contrary, we find the skills or the theory impressive on our minds, and easily apply them when we encounter similar situation in our lives.

Some people may argue that some subjects, such as history, philosophy, are totally a matter of memorizing facts. Homework will definitely turn these courses into a dull and boring task, which, at worst, can let children lose interest in these subjects.Thus the daily homework should be eliminated. It may seem plausible, but daily work can be meaningful and joyful only if the forms of homework are changed. For instance, teachers may as well discard the old-fashioned style——copying the important facts, numbers in the textbook——but introduce new and creative forms such as daily discussion within a group or searching on the Internet for related materials of the events or facts they talk about in class. Not only will these daily homework be attractive to students and boost their interest, but students will also learn communication skills, team spirit and critical thinking through the processes.If we clear the homework off the board in a haste, children  will get rid of bordom as well as a chance to develope other important skills.（这段是不是有点走了...讨论如何让作业更好帮助学习？...主题应该是讨论作业的必要性吧）

Daily homework is necessary, no matter what subject it is. But if our teachers are willing to think out some more funny and creative forms of homework, they will help their students study happier and better.

跟上次看的一样...LZ的文章词句都非常出色...但是在主题和逻辑的把握上有所欠缺...

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Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.（07.1.13）

Many students are complaining about their daily homework, saying that this boring burden has crowded out their time for playing. However, many teachers and parents hold the view that daily homework is crucial in enhancing skills students learn in class. As a student, I believe daily homework is indispensable, yet to help students learn better and happier, we should change the forms of homework. With a more creative form, students can find their daily homework joyful and meaningful.

Undoubtedly, homework is an effective tool to assist students in acquiring knowledge and applying skills we learn under situations close to reality. Hardly can we grasp the true essence of a theory in maths or physics if we do not practice through daily homework. We may find a theory easy at first glance, but in reality we may fail to apply it successfully. With daily practice, on the contrary, we find the skills or the theory impressive on our minds, and easily apply them when we encounter similar situation in our lives.

Some people may argue that some subjects, such as history, philosophy, are totally a matter of memorizing facts. Homework will definitely turn these courses into a dull and boring task, which, at worst, can let children lose interest in these subjects. Thus the daily homework should be eliminated. It may seem plausible, but daily work can be meaningful and joyful only if the forms of homework are changed. For instance, teachers may as well discard the old-fashioned style——copying the important facts, numbers in the textbook——but introduce new and creative forms such as daily discussion within a group or searching on the Internet for related materials of the events or facts （建议去掉）they talked about in class. Not only will these daily homework be attractive to students and boost their interest, but students will also learn communication skills, team spirit and critical thinking through the processes （in the process）. If we clear the homework off the board in a haste (in haste), children will get rid of bordom (boredom) as well as a chance to develope (develop) other important skills.

Daily homework is necessary, no matter what subject it is. But if our teachers are willing to think out some more funny and creative forms of homework, they will help their students study happier and better.

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