【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组 桐庐钓徒 第二十一次作业】

桐庐钓徒UID: 2620263

Is it better to spend money on something that lasts long time, such as an expensive piece of jewelry, or spend on something that provides a short-term pleasure, such as a vacation?(05/18/07)

In general, people always focus on the long-lasting quality while they spend money on something, like jewelry, antique, or book. The psychological explanation, I think, is that people hope money can be worth spending out of a long-term consideration. Spending money on it is a better choice accordingly. Besides, long-lived stuff usually means a lot, such as the status of wealth or noble, the chase of life that has high-class tastes. Moreover, it becomes a symbolic representation which in memory of a meaningful event, or is used for collection even investment. Take diamond ring as an example. A diamond ring not only implies a permanent marriage but also treasures the wonderful emotion up.

On the other hand, it can be argued that short-term pleasure is obtained more easily than durable enjoyment, and positive effect which is brought by the short-lived feeling is faster and more significant. For instant, traveling in a couple of days is a good way to alleviate stress and relax, at the same time it help traveler broaden outlook, or accumulate knowledge. Dose not it have coordinative impact on the person, comparing with the thing lasts long time?

As to which way is better, the answers vary.Spending money is a process that satisfies not only people’s material need but also psychological need, no matter which way it is. Therefore, I think whether one way is better than the other depends on specific circumstances.

自己觉得写得头重脚轻了— —
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In general, people always focus on the long-lasting quality while they spend money on something, like jewelry, antique, or book. The psychological explanation, I think, is that people hope money can be worth spending out of a long-term consideration.(感觉这个表达有点怪您是想说买些会升值的东西吗people hope a great amount of money can be a good investment in something that may appreciate.
)Spending money on it is a better choice accordingly. Besides, long-lived(long-lasting) stuff usually means a lot, such as the status of wealth or noble, the chase of life that has high-class tastes这句举例不完整你要举出那些代表地位，身份的物品出来. Moreover, it becomes a symbolic representation （which）
删掉in memory of a meaningful event, or is used for collection even investment. Take diamond ring as an example. A diamond ring not only implies a permanent marriage but also treasures the wonderful emotion up没看懂also后面什么意思.

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On the other hand, it can be argued that short-term pleasure is obtained more easily than durable enjoyment, and positive effect which is brought by the short-lived feeling is faster and more significant. For instant, traveling in a couple of days is a good way to alleviate stress and relax, at the same time it help+s traveler broaden outlook, or accumulate knowledge. Dose not it havecoordinativeimpact on the person, comparing with the thing lasts long time?: s- q  b2 d: s）感觉这样写很不好，你用nobody can deny 都要好些

As to which way is better, the answers为什么用复数？ vary.Spending money is a process that satisfies not only people’s material need but also psychological need, no matter which way it is. Therefore, I think whether one way is better than the other depends on specific circumstances.3 ~4 H+ O9 [/ o
字数不够，句子还需多锤炼，没什么太亮的词汇和句子。