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life ia a processing of accumualting knowledge ,there are many manner we can absorb knowledge,such as reading books,practicing,and communicating with eachother, basically we learning throught two main method,dong and reading.in my opinion ,both of them have huge advantage of acquiring knowledge,but reading is better in some aspects' usage than doing.

once with curiosity, reading is a more aborad of containing knowledge than doing practice.a book can explaing much more things than we can spend time doing it separately,for instance, a physical textbook in senior school can almost include all the physical general knowledge in daily life, but it seem hard for us to realize them independently.

yet another reason is that,reading can replace doing to learn something that impossible to do in common condition,for example it's really impossible for us to experience walking on the moon,but throught reading we can lean more than this,receive more funny things. obviously,reading offer much more sense than doing can.

the third main reason is that reading can save much more time of learing new things,assumedly, if we learn all the knowledge by doing them ourself,how much time should we take? it's difficult to calculate! oppositely,throught reading we can absorb knowledge fastly and effectively.

taking into account of all these reasons ,reading can offer more knowledge and makes our learning more time effectively,reading is a much better way of learning than doing.

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once with curiosity, reading is a more aborad of containing knowledge than doing practice.a book can explaing much more things than we can spend time doing it separately（应该断句},for instance, a physical textbook in senior school can almost include all the physical general knowledge in daily life, but it seem没加s hard for us to realize them independently.

yet another reason is that,reading can replace doing to learn something that impossible to do in common condition,for example it's really impossible for us to experience walking on the moon,but throught reading we can lean more than this,receive more funny things. obviously,reading offer much more sense than doing can.

the third main reason is that reading can save much more time of learing new things,assumedly, if we learn all the knowledge by doing them ourself,how much time should we take? it's difficult to calculate! oppositely（大写）,throught reading we can absorb knowledge fastly and effectively（有点中式英语思维吧）.2 \* e" v$ H& `% ^3 E' a

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打错的太多了，而且逗号后面应该有空格才对！
建议好好改改，可读性亟待加强