菜鸟作文求拍9.29

doubledianUID: 2661760

政府应该把钱花在access internet而不是transportation上，同意与否
The government’s job is to try their best to improve the standard of people’s living. No matter what method the government taking has one purpose that to make more convenient for people and to make their country stronger. So if discuss the question whether government should spend the money on access internet or transportation it is hard to say.

In my point of view, on one hand, government should spend money on access internet. As the science developing so fast today people achieve much information through the internet. Using the internet people can play games to relieve their pressures from work and study, and for a student using internet can also gives him a chance to learn more knowledge at home. People can communicate with each other no matter where and when. It is also convenient for a big company to have a meeting that all employers will not attend the meeting in a hurry, even they are abroad they can also attend the meeting on time because the meeting is hold though internet. For these advantages that internet bring for human, government should spend money on it.

But on the other hand, government should also spend money on transportation. After a long time work, people would like to go out to relax themselves. The place they would go may be a park near their home or a interest in other city. For the last one, people should have a car and the road should be well. And I think the transportation is very important to develop the economy especially for a poor place. Transportation can bring people from every place together and this not only can increase the economy but also can let people know each other better. For this reason, government should spend money on transportation.

To sum up, government is responsible for increasing the economy and promoting the relationship with other countries. So government should not only spend money on access internet or transportation but also on any other things that can do good to develop the country’s economy and people’s life.

joyceliuUID: 2477232

The government’s job is to try their best to improve the standard of people’s living. No matter what method the government taking(takes) has one purpose ( the only purpose )is that to make (bring)more convenient(convenience) for(to ) people and to make their country stronger. So if discussing the question whether government should spend the(去掉） money on access internet or transportation it is hard to say.

In my point of view, on (the) one hand, government should spend money on access internet. As the science developing so fast today people achieve much information through the internet. Using the internet people can play games to relieve their pressures from work and study, and for a student using internet can also gives him a chance to learn more knowledge at home. People can communicate with each other no matter where and when( at any time no mwtter where he was). It is also convenient for a big company to have a meeting that all employers will not attend the meeting in a hurry, even they are abroad they can also attend the meeting on time because the meeting is hold though internet. For these advantages that internet bring for human, government should spend money on it.

But on the other hand, government should also spend money on transportation. After a long time work, people would like to go out to relax themselves. The place they would go may be a park near their home or a interest in other city. For the last one, people should have a car and the road should be well. And I think the transportation is very important to develop the economy especially for a poor place. Transportation can bring people from every place together and this not only can increase the economy but also can let people know each other better. For this reason, government should spend money on transportation.

To sum up, government is responsible for increasing the economy and promoting the relationship with other countries. So government should not only spend money on access internet or transportation but also on any other things that can do good to develop the country’s economy and people’s life. (建议重点写一方面，少见平衡观点， 多用一些高级词汇， 避免重复用第一反应词）