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the environmental issues are too complex to be handled by the individual.Do you agree or disagree?* L5D- z# _0 M+ J$ U, e
# s8 e" G$ R1 h9 r: G: v* [. Pwhen we readnewspaper, our attention are often drawn by those terrible environmental issueswhat are increasingly happening on the whole world, such as, we broke the hottest weather record (the record of the hottest spottemperature) again and again, sea levels are rising highly, plant andanimal species are disappearing at an astonishing rate (以一个长句开头,写得很不错). Fortunately, more andmore people have come to realize the seriousness of this issue and try tosolve. However, I agree that environmental issues are global events which cannot be simply dealed (dealt) with by individual,and require a coordinate efforts and cooperation from the whole world.2 U* K. Q8 O( ]$ E/ n* `
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/ ]* t r4 w* e8 f: |: w9 ?To begin with,someone would argure (argues) that thereare many things we can do to save our planet, such as switch to renewablesources of energy, plant trees, take walk or bike instead of driving car, andso on, but all these efforts can only improve the local environment, which has(have) little effect with(on)the global issue.(句子长啊) Actually, the truthis that we never lack the telant(talent)and responsibleindividuals who are eager to devote themselves to the career of improving theenvironment, but resolutive (resolute) andpowerful governments and an agreement from the majority countries of the world.Because behind the environmental issues are the complex connection between country’s (countries’) security and economy. I got agood point in this case from a documentry (documentary)called The Age Of Stupid, the peris’ wantto build a wind farming landscape (a wind farm)in their farm, only which can reduce the 10% pollution made by electricity downto zero in their town, however, the project is refute by the local governmentagain and again, because many opponents insist that the wind farm would destroythe enjoyalbe (enjoyable) view of their town,which bring them huge economic benefit. Therefore, without the supporting andsponsor from authoritative organization, it is hard for an individual toconquer many difficulties, let alone to handle the issue. : j; G! _+ N A/ k
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Inaddition, I think that all governments should be responsible for theenvironmental issues, and individuals can attent(attend)to some meaningful clubs which are aim to guard the earth, then every one’seffort would like little drop then complie(compile)together becoming a torrent river. For example, Sireea Club in which, peopletry their best to reverse global warming and create a clean, renewable energyfuture. They are working with some of the world’s top climate scientists,engineers and evergy(even) experts to figure outwhat is the best way to save our planet. And the meeting hold in Copenhegen(Copenhagen)discussed and force every country to bear its share of responsibility toaddress the climate change. * P; D
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Inconclusion, it is crucial to wake up every citizen in this world to aware theseriousness of this issue, but it is impossible for individual to solve thisissue, because it is not only a plexpering problem of a country but also themost intractable trouble for the whole world.
24分的文章,例子很好,字数很多,向你学习了,不过有一点我要说明一下,长句子太多了,很多长句写成短句更好,还加一点句子之间少连接词。
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