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发表于 2010-1-5 19:17:11 |显示全部楼层
the environmental issues are too complex to be handled by the individual. Do you agree or disagree?

when we read newspaper, our attention are often drawn by those terrible environmental issues what are increasingly happening on the whole world,such as,we broke the hottest weather record again and again, sea levels are rising highly, plant and animal species are disappearing at an astonishing rate. Fortunately, more and more people have come to realize the seriousness of this issue and try to solve. However, I agree that environmental issues are global events which can not be simply dealed with by individual, and require a coordinate efforts and cooperation from the whole world.


To begin with someone would argure that there are many things we can do to save our planet, such as switch to renewable sources of energy, plant trees, take walk or bike instead of driving car, and so on, but all these efforts can only improve the local environment, which has little effect with the global issue. Actually, the truth is that we never lack the telant and responsible individuals who are eager to devote themselves to the career of improving the environment, but resolutive and powerful governments and an agreement from the majority countries of the world. Because behind the environmental issues are the complex connection between country’s security and economy. I got a good point in this case from a documentry called The Age Of Stupid, the peris’ want to build a wind farming landscape in their farm, only which can reduce the 10% pollution made by electricity down to zero in their town, however, the project is refute by the local government again and again, because many opponents insist that the wind farm would destroy the enjoyalbe view of their town, which bring them huge economic benefit. Therefore, without the supporting and sponsor from authoritative organization, it is hard for a individual to conquer many difficulties, let alone to handle the issue.


In addition, I think that all governments should be responsible for the environmental issues, and individuals can attent to some meaningful clubs which are aim to guard the earth, then every one’s effort would like little drop then complie together becoming a torrent river. For example, Sireea Club in which, people try their best to reverse global warming and create a clean, renewable energy future. They are working with some of the world’s top climate scientists, engineers and evergy experts to figure out what is the best way to save our planet. And the meeting hold in Copenhegen discussed and force every country to bear its share of responsibility to address the climate change.
In conclusion, it is crucial to wake up every citizen in this world to aware the seriousness of this issue, but it is impossible for individual to solve this issue, because it is not only a plexpering problem of a country but also the most intractable trouble for the whole world.


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the environmental issues are too complex to be handled by the individual.Do you agree or disagree?* L5D- z# _0 M+ J$ U, e

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when we readnewspaper, our attention are often drawn by those terrible environmental issueswhat are increasingly happening on the whole world, such as, we broke the hottest weather record (the record of the hottest spottemperature) again and again, sea levels are rising highly, plant andanimal species are disappearing at an astonishing rate (以一个长句开头,写得很不错). Fortunately, more andmore people have come to realize the seriousness of this issue and try tosolve. However, I agree that environmental issues are global events which cannot be simply dealed (dealt) with by individual,and require a coordinate efforts and cooperation from the whole world.2 U* K. Q8 O( ]$ E/ n* `
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To begin withsomeone would argure (argues) that thereare many things we can do to save our planet, such as switch to renewablesources of energy, plant trees, take walk or bike instead of driving car, andso on, but all these efforts can only improve the local environment, which has(have) little effect with(on)the global issue.(句子长啊) Actually, the truthis that we never lack the telanttalentand responsibleindividuals who are eager to devote themselves to the career of improving theenvironment, but resolutive (resolute) andpowerful governments and an agreement from the majority countries of the world.Because behind the environmental issues are the complex connection between country’s (countries’) security and economy. I got agood point in this case from a documentry (documentary)called The Age Of Stupid, the peris’ wantto build a wind farming landscape (a wind farm)in their farm, only which can reduce the 10% pollution made by electricity downto zero in their town, however, the project is refute by the local governmentagain and again, because many opponents insist that the wind farm would destroythe enjoyalbe (enjoyable) view of their town,which bring them huge economic benefit. Therefore, without the supporting andsponsor from authoritative organization, it is hard for an individual toconquer many difficulties, let alone to handle the issue. : j; G! _+ N  A/ k

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Inaddition, I think that all governments should be responsible for theenvironmental issues, and individuals can attent(attend)to some meaningful clubs which are aim to guard the earth, then every one’seffort would like little drop then complie(compile)together becoming a torrent river. For example, Sireea Club in which, peopletry their best to reverse global warming and create a clean, renewable energyfuture. They are working with some of the world’s top climate scientists,engineers and evergy(even) experts to figure outwhat is the best way to save our planet. And the meeting hold in Copenhegen(Copenhagen)discussed and force every country to bear its share of responsibility toaddress the climate change. * P; D
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Inconclusion, it is crucial to wake up every citizen in this world to aware theseriousness of this issue, but it is impossible for individual to solve thisissue, because it is not only a plexpering problem of a country but also themost intractable trouble for the whole world.

24分的文章,例子很好,字数很多,向你学习了,不过有一点我要说明一下,长句子太多了,很多长句写成短句更好,还加一点句子之间少连接词。

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发表于 2010-1-6 23:30:29 |显示全部楼层
People today spend too much time on their enjoyment --what they like to do --rather than what they should do?7 z8 s0 q- O8 Y! L
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In recent decades human life has experienced a lot of amazing changes in almost every social aspect, which definitely bring much more opportunities for people to do what they like than in the previous time. Yes, it is true that people today spend too much time on their enjoyment, and a undesirable consequence also inevitably follows.
To begin with, a survey by an authority investigating organization says that people’s sleepying time are shorter and shorter, especially in Asian area, where 63% people claim that they would not go to bed before 12 o’clock. Therefore, there is no wonder that the night clubs always are stuffed with numerous individuals hanging out all the night. In this situation, what people should do is to perform a regular schedular which guarantees the adequate sleeping hours. However, hundred and thousand people choose to burn their bone oil and enjoy the entertainment they like. And another good case in this point is the penomenon that the fast food industry just like the mushroom in the spring which is developing at an astonishing rate. The succulent hamburger and crisp french fries are adopted as the most favorite food by countless modern people, who are appealed by the tasty flavour,convenience as well as its inexpensive price, while ignore the unhealthy ingredients such as salt, suger and fat, which is absolutely detrimental to their body. Similarly, it goes without saying that people should consume food which is much more wholesome than fast food such as organic vegetable, although whose taste is fader than those fried stuff.  
the mentality of hedonist applied widely & on a large scale cause all kinds of unacceptable consequences for the whole society. This degenerate trend in society are a bad influence on young generation, who tend to indulge themselves with pursuiting enjoyment all the time and leave themselves no time for endeavoring. It is probably no exaggeration to say that this currend would pose a serious threat toward the world’s promising future, if there is no effective effort to be carried to change this situation.
In conclusion, although the seeking of enjoyment is the everlasting endeavor of human in all society, it is harmful for people to spend too much time on them.

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