eddie的独立作文 1.17

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1.17 It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Recently I have heard that a new restaurant may be built around the place where I live. Some people around me welcome this proposal while some others reject it. Given the various benefits brought by the restaurant, I totally support the building of the restaurant. Here go the reasons below.

Firstly, the only disadvantage of the place where I live is its over-quietness and obviously the restaurant could deal with this problem. My apartment is built in a not so developed area of the city where people do not visit often except the residents here. Especially in the night outside is dark and even like a dead city, which also provides odds for robbery or other criminals. What's more, I'm a person who hate lonely and over-silence. Building a restaurant in the neighborhood could attract many people to come and eat and make this area more prosperous. More people here around can also exert warning upon criminals here and may reduce the occurrence the crimes.

Secondly as a bachelor, cooking is definitely not the thing I like everyday. And I do believe most of the single persons hold the same opinion as I do. So a restaurant nearby does solve a big problem for us. When we come back from work or campus with the exhausted body, having a delicious but cheap dinner in the restaurant instead of cooking ourselves can not only save our valuable time but also "rescue" our appetite from self cooking. (People always lose their appetite after their long time cooking.) Not only for us single persons, getting tired of cooking is usually also universal problems for families. Under this situation, occasional meals in the restaurant here around is a not bad option for families.

At last the introduction of the restaurant here may be the first step of the commercialization of our living district. What will come next may be the big shopping mall, big supermarket or big hotels. Who knows! But living in a developed and convenient area is just something I really want.

To sum up considering the many benefits of the restaurant, I, personally, side with the proposal of building the restaurant.

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eddie的独立作文 1.17

1.17 It has recentlybeen announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do yousupport or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to supportyour answer.


Recently I have heard that a newrestaurant may be built around the place where I live. Some people around mewelcome this proposal while some others reject it. Given the various benefitsbrought by the restaurant, I totally support the building of the restaurant.Here go the reasons below.(开头简单明确，写得很好)

Firstly, the only disadvantage of theplace where I live is its over-quietness and obviously the restaurant coulddeal with this problem. My apartment is built in a not so developed area (是否更好些an undeveloped area) of the city where people do not visit often except theresidents here. Especially in the night outside is dark and even like a deadcity, which also provides odds for robbery or other criminals. What's more, I'ma person who hate lonely and over-silence. Building a restaurant in theneighborhood could attract many people to come and eat and make this area moreprosperous. More people here around can also exert warning upon criminals hereand may reduce the occurrence (of)the crimes.
写得很有条理，论据和例子very good！

Secondly as a bachelor, cooking isdefinitely not the thing I like everyday. And I do believe most of the singlepersons hold the same opinion as I do. So a restaurant nearby does solve a bigproblem for us. When we come back from work or campus with the exhausted body,having a delicious but cheap dinner in the restaurant instead of cookingourselves can not only save our valuable time but also "rescue" ourappetite from self cooking. (People always lose their appetite after their longtime cooking.) Not only for us single persons, getting tired of cooking isusually also universal problems for families (family).Under this situation, occasional meals in the restaurant here around is a notbad option for families.

At last the introduction of the restauranthere may be the first step of the commercialization of our living district.What will come next may be the big shopping mall, big supermarket(s) or big hotels. Who knows(口语词组)! But living in a developed and convenientarea is just something I really want.

To sum up considering the many benefits ofthe restaurant（above）, I, personally, sidewith the proposal of building the restaurant.(结尾处有点短)
总评：我要是评委，至少给你25分，呵呵，写得很好，例子很充分，错误也很少。记得帮我修改。加油！