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There is nothing that young people can teach older people.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.


It has been a common conception that young people have nothing of value to teach their olders. I am firmly suppotive about this statment. Young people have nothing to teach olders.

One of advantages of being old is having a plethora of experiences. When things happened to them, they can process those things very quickly and make their own judgements according to their experiences which are gained through ups and downs in their lives. And also these experiences make them wise. About the experiences, young people can never overpass old people.

Also, Seniors always have a different perspective on life comparing to their young gengeration. In China, the olders go through lots of difficulties in their lives, like suffering poverty, war, poor living conditionds,etc.That is why they are diligent, perseverant and independent,etc. Thay had a plenty of merits for young pepole to learn from.

Finally, old people tend to enjoy teaching and helping young kids. Lots of old people try to educate young generations as much as possible. This is because on the way they don't want young people suffer what they had been through, on the other way they want to help young people build a better situation ,namely find a shortcut to make their livings easy. Not all young people like helping or teaching their seniors.

All in all, I think younger people can learn more from the last generations. Of course, this is not to say that olde people can not learn from their youngers. The education process does not only work one way through generation gaps.
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我就顺便再贴一次吧呵呵

It has been a common conception (It is a common conception, It is generally accepted) that young people have nothing of value to teach their olders
(? old people
或者their parents). I am firmly supportive (supporting) about this statment. Young people have nothing to teach olders.

One of advantages of being old is having a plethora of experiences. When things happened to them, they can process those things very quickly and make their own judgements according to their experiences which are gained through ups and downs in their lives. And also these experiences make them wise. About the experiences (关于这些经历,年轻人永远也不会超过老人?什么叫关于这些经历), young people can never overpass old people.

Also, Seniors always have a different perspective on life comparing to their young gengeration. In China, the olders go through lots of difficulties in their lives, like suffering poverty, war, poor living conditionds,etc.That is why they are diligent, perseverant and independent,etc. Thay had a plenty of merits for young pepole to learn from. (具体有些啥merits而让年轻人不能teach老人?)

Finally, old people tend to enjoy teaching and helping young kids. Lots of old people try to educate young generations as much as possible. This is because on the way they don't want young people suffer what they had been through, on the other way they want to help young people build a better situation ,namely find a shortcut to make their livings easy. Not all young people like helping or teaching their seniors. (年轻人不想教老人跟题目问的年轻人没有任何东西教老人不是一个概念)

All in all, I think younger people can learn more from the last generations. Of course, this is not to say that olde people can not learn from their youngers. The education process does not only work one way through generation gaps (这句话什么意思?).  


拼写错误可以自己贴到word里面改。
首先字数太少,字数太少就会限制话题的深一步发展
我觉得楼主要做的第一件事是要好好审题,问的是年轻人没有任何可以教老人的东西。而楼主的第二段写老人的merits,第三段写老人喜欢教年轻人,这个跟题目真的没有什么联系。
况且这个命题本来就比较绝对,我是觉得持相反的意见会好写一点
要注意句子的应用,避免词不达意

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