eddie的独立作文 2.3

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2.3 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People will feel happier when they finish a challenging or difficult work than they finish an easy work.

Which one would make you feel happier, getting through tough work and solving the problem or undergoing an easy task, which could also be accomplished by others? Different people hold distinct attitudes towards this question. However, as a person pursuing challenge, I think it is much happier after finishing difficult work than easy ones.

Why can't easy work offer people as much excitement as those tough ones? It is because that they are too simple to arouse people's passion to conquer it. Dealing with easy work is just as common as having meals or sleeping everyday. Would you feel anything special about your daily meals or sleeping? I think the answer is obvious.

However, unlike the easy work, tough "game" would ignite the flame of fighting inside and also make things become interesting. During the process of dealing with challenging task, one's potential is exploited as much as possible, which breaks one's old recognition about him- or herself and certainly build up the confidence. And after coping with the difficult work, people would gain a brand-new self. I used to be afraid of speaking in the public and worried about being embarrassed if I make something inappropriate. But intuition told me that I have to get rid of this kind of self-deny if I want to achieve something huge in the future. So I took part in an English speech competition, where I had to speak in front of thousands of people who would never know that I was so nervous that my leg could not help trembling. I told myself to calm down and persist. At last I got the champion, which really made my day!

Additionally why finishing challenging work could bring people more happiness is that it marks you that you could finish the work that others can not. Experiencing tough is not the thing that everyone dare to try and that will for sure sharpen you among those common ones. If you are brave enough to accept hard mission and eventually finish it successfully, others would give you their admiration and admission. Those prominents who achieved feats are always those who were able to deal with tough situations. When you gain admission and admiration from others after the hard experience, you will certainly feel joyful.

To sum up, due to the psychology of challenging, all the ambitious people would not feel happy and successful when they finish easy work. But the process of exploiting oneself during the tough mission and the distinction brought by the ability of dealing with hard work are actually the things they pursue.

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Which one would makes you feel happier? getting through tough work and solving the problem or undergoing an easy task
which could also be accomplished by others? Different people hold distinct attitudes towards this question. However, as a person pursuing challenge（challenge pursuer）, I think it is (am) much happier after finishing difficult work than easy ones.

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Why can't(去掉) easy work cannot offer(bring) people as much excitement as those tough ones? It is (去掉)because that they are too （去掉
simple work is not easy to arouse people's passion to conquer it. Dealing with easy work is just as common as having meals （eating）or sleeping everyday. Would(Do..do you feel吧？) you feel anything special about your daily meals (eating)or sleeping? I think the answer is obvious.

However, unlike the easy work, tough "game" would (could)ignite the flame of fighting
（想说的是内心的斗志么？有没有更native的词来代替呢？the will to compete）inside and also make things become interesting. During the process of dealing with challenging task, one's potential is exploited as much as possible, which breaks one's old recognition about him（himself）- or herself and certainly build up the confidence
of the person. And after coping with the difficult work, people would gain a brand-new self(自我？ego). I used to be afraid of speaking in the public
place and worried（concerned） about being embarrassed when
make something inappropriate. But intuition told me that I have to get rid of this kind of self-deny if I want to achieve something huge in the future. So I took part in an English speech competition, where I had to speak in front of thousands of people who would never know that I was so nervous that my leg could not help trembling.（好长呀童鞋） I told myself to calm down and persist. At last I got the champion, which really made my day!
Additionally why finishing challenging work could bring people more happiness is that it marks you that you could finish the work that others can not. Experiencing tough is not the thing that everyone dare to try and that will for sure sharpen you among those common ones. If you are brave enough to accept hard mission and eventually finish it successfully, others would（will） give you their admiration and admission. Those prominent(名字是prominence或者prominentness) who achieved feats are always those who were able to deal with tough situations. When you gain admission and admiration from others after the hard experience, you will certainly feel joyful., n9 q, B, p& _/ X


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To sum up, due to the psychology of challenging, all the ambitious people would not feel happy and successful when they finish easy work. But the process of exploiting oneself during the tough mission and the distinction brought by the ability of dealing with hard work are actually the things they pursue. (主语好长啊。。)

总结：我觉得内容表达的清楚，词汇运用也不错，就是你的长句太多啦，能不能长短加起来呢？ anyway,一起 add oil !!