eddie的独立作文 2.6

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2.6 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not show their political or social views known in the classroom.

Should teachers present their political or social views known in the classroom? This is a long held dispute. For my part, I could not lend my support to the issue in the topic for that it has gone too extreme. Although in most of the situations teachers should play a neutral role in the classroom, it is quite important for students to form some normal political or social views with the favor of teachers.

Admittedly, it is no denying that it is inappropriate for teachers to show too much of their political or social penchant in the class under most of the conditions. Due to their much more plentiful social experience, teachers, as other adults, gain various attitudes towards our society and politics, some of which may be fair and just, others of which, however, may be unfair or even evil. What's more, sometimes they may assume too aggressive in front of their students. Therefore, holding a neutral position is the role teachers should attain.

Additionally, as students, we have the right and should have the chance to perceive the society we live in and the political policies ourselves. What we should take charge of in the school is just to learn the universal principles of our nature other than to be trapped into unrelated personal views about the society or politics. Too much views about society and politics from our teachers may not only occupied much time which should have been spent on our study but also force us form negative inclination about everything outside campus. We are gradually growing up and one day we will certainly step out of schools, which is also the process we get to know our society and politics. Thus too much social or political views should be refused in the classroom.

Nevertheless, not only as a student but also one social members at the same time, it is really beneficial for teachers to impart some of the normal and common views towards our society and politics. For example, some moral standards which still have not faded after thousands of years can help students form positive attitudes towards life. Always being accommodating to those in need is one in case. Moreover, the sense of patriotism renders so important in the youth education that it can never be neglected from teachers' syllabus.

By and large, under most of the conditions it is not proper for teachers to show their social or political views in the classroom which may be prejudice, because it is unfair for students to establish their own points of view with second-handed information. But to some basic social or political views, teachers should take the responsibility to impart them to students.

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Should teachers present their political or social views known in the classroom? This is a long held dispute. For my part, I could not lend my support to the issue in the topic for that it has gone too extreme. Although in most of the situations teachers should play a neutral role in the classroom, it is quite important for students to form some normal political or social views with the favor of teachers.


Admittedly, it is no denying that it is inappropriate for teachers to show too much of their political or social penchant in the class under most of the conditions. Due to their much more plentiful social experience, teachers, as other adults, gain various attitudes towards our society and politics, some of which may be fair and just, while others of which, however, may be unfair or even evil. What's more, sometimes they may assume too aggressive in front of their students. Therefore, holding a neutral position is the role teachers should attain.
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Additionally, as students, we have the right and should have the chance to perceive the society we live in and the
political policies ourselves. What we should take charge of in the school is just to learn the universal principles of our nature other than to be trapped into unrelated personal views about the society or politics. Too much views about society and politics from our teachers may not only occupied much time which should have been spent on our study but also force us form negative inclination about everything outside campus. We are gradually growing up and one day we will certainly step out of schools, which is also the process we get to know our society and politics. Thus too much social or political views should be refused in the classroom.


Nevertheless, not only as a student but also one social members at the same time, it is really beneficial for teachers to impart some of the normal and common views towards our society and politics. For example, some moral standards which still have not faded after thousands of years can help students form positive attitudes towards life. Always being accommodating to those in need is one in case. Moreover, the sense of patriotism renders is so important in the youth education that it can never be neglected from teachers' syllabus.# S3 W  P/ v3 G' [% I* G
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By and large, under most of the conditions it is not proper for teachers to show their social or political views in the classroom which may be prejudice, because it is unfair for students to establish their own points of view with second-handed information. But to some basic social or political views, teachers should take the responsibility to impart them to students

我觉得词汇用的不错；但是不少句子的结构太罗嗦不简洁。
整个文章的结构有点乱。开始说中立，接下来说好，又说不好 最后又说老师要重视不可以忽略。我读起来一下子很没方向；是不是可以开始先说把好处一块说完，再把坏处一快说完；然后说最好还是中立态度。这样结构会清楚很多

个人意见。。。

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Should teachers present their political or social views known in the classroom? This is a long held dispute. For my part, I could not lend my support to the issue in the topic for that it has gone too extreme.（这句不错！） Although in most of the situations teachers should play a neutral role in the classroom, it is quite important for students to form some normal political or social views with the favor of teachers.
Admittedly, it is no denying that it is inappropriate for teachers to show too much of their political or social penchant in the class under most of the conditions. Due to their much more plentiful social experience, teachers, as other adults, gain various attitudes towards our society and politics, some of which may be fair and just, others of which, however, may be unfair or even evil. What's more, sometimes they may assume too aggressive in front of their students. Therefore, holding a neutral position is the role teachers should attain.
Additionally, as students, we have the right and should have the chance to perceive the society we live in and the political policies ourselves. What we should take charge of in the school is just to learn the universal principles of our nature other than to be trapped into unrelated personal views about the society or politics. Too much views about society and politics from our teachers may not only occupied much time which should have been spent on our study but also force us form negative inclination about everything outside campus.（这句水平很高！赞！） We are gradually growing up and one day we will certainly step out of schools, which is also the process we get to know our society and politics. Thus too much social or political views should be refused in the classroom.

Nevertheless, not only as a student but also one social members at the same time, it is really beneficial for teachers to impart some of the normal and common views towards our society and politics. For example, some moral standards which still have not faded after thousands of years can help students form positive attitudes towards life. Always being accommodating to those in need is one in case. Moreover, the sense of patriotism renders so important in the youth education that it can never be neglected from teachers' syllabus.

By and large, under most of the conditions it is not proper for teachers to show their social or political views in the classroom which may be prejudice, because it is unfair for students to establish their own points of view with second-handed information. But to some basic social or political views, teachers should take the responsibility to impart them to students.

本文为中立性、平衡观点的文章，很不错！句式多变，词汇丰富，例子生动，没有发现语法错误。第1段引题，提出平衡性观点。第2段和第3段说明不该表达观点：第2段站在老师的角度分析，第3段站在学生的角度分析。第4段引用例子说明应该表达观点。第5段总结。小弟水平很低，读了3遍才理顺，说错之处还请多多包涵！