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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In 20 years from now on, students will not use printed books anymore.

As the development of modern socity, the advanced media has been increasingly occupied people’s live, especially the way of education. Such as the online education, it means that people can have access to advanced and even oversea education whenever and wherever he wants. However, from personal perspective, these modern approachs will fade compared with the traditional printed books.

Admittedly, there is no denying that the developmental techology affecting on the means of education forshadows the future of education. In particular, these modern methods play key roles to help students to study their majors and apprehend the knowledge. An illustration about the online education can be taken as an example. My little cousin who is 12, he can speak smooth English for the reason that his parents provided him opportunity to learn English online since he was 8. Futhermore, in daily life, we can always see this phenomenon that students do some reading by a little electrical book. In general, in consideration of these benefit from modern technologies, we can imagine the future development of electrical books, online education and so on.

However, even I can concede that these advanced exert positive effect on today education, can we say that these technologies can take place of tradition books in the next 20 years? The answer is negative. Common sense informs us that it is unrealistic for every students to hold one or two computer or electrical book. Since even in the next 20 years, numerous families cannot afford such a advanced facility. As we all know, building such advanced system may well be require a large investment. Correspondingly, the printed books can be receive by most of families. Moreover, we have to consider the feeling of students, since people would prefer to read the printed books rather than the electrical ones. Generally, considering all of these possible but realistic respects, printed books cannot be replaced.

Lastly, some disadvantages hing with the advanced technologies have to be taken account. Firstly, the electrical books in some cases would be harmful to children’s eyes. Secondly, a great deal of negative infromation also can be inserted into children which would exert the counterproductive effect. Lastly, online education can provide the platform for student to play games which to some extent influence negatively on student’s study. Ultimately, traditional books cannot bring about these effects on students, but only promote their condition of study.

In sum, grantedly I admit that advanced technology plays a key role in the process of education and in the next 20 years, which would occupy most of people’s live and study. The traditional books are irreplaceable for students and education even in 20 years in future.

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2.11作文

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