2.12大作文

yuminjiaUID: 2659628

It is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than to save money for the future.
  Concerning that the superiorities brought by saving money for the future preponderate over the merits of spending money on resorting, I agree with the statement that it is better for us to save money.
  To begin with, it is indisputable that money is indispensable for old citizens if they were in sick.Take my friend's grandma Nancy for example.When she was eighty years old, she afflicted lung cancer.Meanwhile, without adquent deposit,she couldn't afford the exorbitant therapy cost.Consequently, she couldn't continue an effecitive therapy in hospital,but move back home. In this case,it is obvious that we should save money before retiring.So, as we become older and older,we will not concern about the therapy charge when in sick.
  Furthermore, it is undoubted that  with the elevation of our living standard,most family will spend more moneny on children's education.Therefore, it is important for parents to save money for their children.From a recent statistic report, the tuition of univerities are growing every year at a rapid speed.So, if parents didn't save adquent money for their child, their child would face a problem of dropping up advanced education because of lacking money.Hence, it is better for parents to save money at present rather than to spend on entertainment,such as travelling.
  Finally, I admit that travelling and vacation can help us relax our mind and release  pressure.After a tedious and hard work, we,indeed, need to go out of city and enjoy the beatiful landscapes brought by nature.So, if we have prepared enough money for the future, such as dealing well with immergency cases in which appreciable money is needed, it is reasonable to spend moneny on the vacation once a year.
  Judging from what I mentioned above, it is wiser for us to save money for the future than to spend on resorting.

刀小镜UID: 2618532

Concerningthat the superiorities brought by saving money for the future preponderate overthe merits of spending money on resorting (resort)《===句型赞！, I agree with the statement that it is better for us to save money.
To begin with, it is indisputable that money is indispensable for old citizensif they were in(划掉)sick. Take my friend's grandma Nancy for example. When she was eightyyears old, she afflicted lung cancer. Meanwhile, without adquent (adequate)deposit, she couldn't afford the exorbitant therapycost. Consequently, she couldn't continue an effecitive
(effective) therapy in hospital, but move (moved) back home. In this case, it is obvious that we should save money beforeretiring. So, as we become older and older, we will not concern about thetherapy charge when we are sick.
Furthermore,it is undoubted that with the elevation of our living standard, most familywill spend more moneny （money）on children's education. Therefore,it is important for parents to save money for their children. From a recentstatistic report, the tuition of univerities (universities)are(is) growing every year at a rapid speed. So, ifparents didn't save adquent
(adequate)money for their child, who（换成从句避免重复） wouldface a problem of dropping up advanced education because of lacking money. Hence,it is better for parents to save money at present rather than to spend onentertainment, such as travelling.（这段例子值得我借鉴，我这个废柴只能想出生病的例子= =!）


Finally, I admit that travelling and vacation can help us relax our mind andrelease pressure. After a tedious and hard work, we indeed, need to go out ofcity and enjoy the beautiful landscapes brought by nature. So, if we haveprepared enough money for the future, such as dealing well with immergency (emergency)cases in which appreciable money is needed, it isreasonable to spend moneny(money) on the vacation once a year.
Judging from what I (have)mentioned above, it is wiser for us to savemoney for the future than to spend on resorting(resort).

姑娘的句子很漂亮 例子也很赞 希望以后注意一下单词的拼写 还有就是姑娘的连词用得太频繁了 私以为有的地方其实不用也完全可以《===废柴一枚 如有不妥之处多多包涵

壁炉篝火UID: 2764373

2 12 ？ 下次考试 要考的文章？ 还是 自己随意写的？