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armstrongUID: 204256

should solving problems present and future follows the experience from analyzing the past? it is true that the experience in the past provides the method to address some problems. But is it one thing for all? some people believe that human should depend on the lesson and method in the pass, while others hold the opposite opinion. As for us, it is from case to case.

Firstly, in retrospect, the development of science relys on the knowlege introduced by fomer people. Like a high tower,  when we stand on the top of the building to look over the landscape, the first floor is indispensable. To build the tower, we need to base on the former floor. Like newton, said(I paraphrase):" my vision is so far just because I stand the shoulder of the gaint. For example, when it comes to the education area, advanced physics course teaches not only the breakthrough and discovery in recent but also the classic theory in the 19 century. We inevitablely study the knowlege of ancient people.

At the same tiime, throught learning past event teaches us aviod the repeating mistakes. German school always indoctrinate the huge negative of that war for  the world: Untold people were murdered and maimed;The gaint number of people became homless; too many children lost his or her parents. Through studying the horrible disaster, the young will have the strong sense to refuse war in the future. When encountering some political problems, government and senators will take their efforts to keep the peace with negotiating, conpromising.
So, understanding the past can guide, to some extent, human how to do smoothly.

holding the learning the past dose not work in all situation. After all, with the development of our society, the advancement of the technology, some new problems are exposed to us. we fail to by the mean of any old experience to handle it. For example, the greenhouse effect makes people stay on the hot pan. If absent of feasible sloving, we will kill ourselves. However, in the history people never faced such a problems.

All in all, Tosolve immediate issues , we should combine the old experience and newperspective. It is the best way to help the progress of human.
超时2min，  唉感觉还是没展开

happyfaith2008UID: 2709856

Should solving problems present and future follow the experience from analyzing the past? It is true that the experience in the past provides the method to address some problems. But is it one thing for all? Some people believe that human should depend on the lesson and method in the pass, while others hold the opposite opinion. As for us, it is from case to case.

Firstly, in retrospect, the development of science relies on the knowledge introduced by former people. Like a high tower, when we stand on the top of the building to look over the landscape, the first floor is indispensable(这里我有点不明白，the first floor 对于什么是不可避免的呢？). To build the tower, we need to base on the former floor. Like Newton, said (I paraphrase):" my vision is so far just because I stand the shoulder of the giant. For example, when it comes to the education area, advanced physics course teaches not only the breakthrough and discovery in recent but also the classic theory in the 19 century. We inevitably study the knowledge of ancient people. ; L& Y. j% M% f
1 N  M( d* @. {- s; q（个人觉得最好阐明一下 understand the past 和the knowledge introduced by former people 的关系。最好 之前就介绍，知识是对过去的理解的产物。另外，我觉得应该强调一下to solve problem。因为题目要求说的是为了解决问题，应不应该……这里解决问题这一目的应该是我们论述时要提到的。）
At the same time, through learning past event teaches us aviod the repeating mistakes. German school always indoctrinate the huge negative of that war for  the world: Untold people were murdered and maimed; The giant number of people became homeless; too many children lost his or her parents. Through studying the horrible disaster, the young will have the strong sense to refuse war in the future. When encountering some political problems, government and senators will take their efforts to keep the peace with negotiating, compromising. So, understanding the past can guide, to some extent, human how to do smoothly. & F% ~2 ~9 U4 a
（还是和上段一样的感觉，没有扣准解决问题）
0 k( Q/ u3 g( E7 C- _& l7 `holding the learning the past dose not work in all situation. After all, with the development of our society, the advancement of the technology, some new problems are exposed to us. we fail to by the mean of any old experience to handle it. For example, the greenhouse effect makes people stay on the hot pan. If absent of feasible solving, we will kill ourselves. However, in the history people never faced such a problems.
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All in all, To solve immediate issues , we should combine the old experience and new perspective. It is the best way to help the progress of human.

总述：拼写错误有点多，建议下次在原稿后面自行修改后再贴上。这样自己改的进步大。语言没有问题。注意一下审题和扣题。文章结构也不错，很清晰。加油~~~

红色为改好的拼写

happyfaith2008UID: 2709856

效果怎么这样？55555555555
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xuln0709UID: 2761332

should solving problems present and future follow the experience from analyzing the past?(以疑问开头，挺好的) it is true that the experience in the past provides the method to address some problems. But is it one thing for all? some people believe that human should depend on the lesson and method in the past, while others hold the opposite opinion. As for us, it is from case to case. " `& I. w) I+ Z

Firstly, in retrospect, the development of science relies on the knowledge introduced by fomer people. Like a high tower,  when we stand on the top of the building to look over the landscape, the first floor is indispensable. To build the tower, we need to base on the former floor. Like Newton, said(I paraphrase):" my vision is so far just because I stand on the shoulder of the gaint. For example, when it comes to the education area, advanced physics course teaches not only the breakthrough and discovery in recent but also the classic theory in the 19 century. We inevitablely study the knowlege of ancient people.(首先，这一段在表达上没有什么大的问题，但是读起来不是很流畅，我的意思是，你能不能在每一句话前面加一个逻辑承接词，或者一个开启下文的词，这样这一段的整体感会更强。)


At the same tiime, throught（去掉） learning past event teaches us aviod the repeating mistakes. Germany school always indoctrinate the huge negative of that war for  the world: Untold people were murdered and maimed;The gaint number of people became homless; too many children lost their parents. Through studying the horrible disaster, the young will have the strong sense to refuse war in the future. When encountering some political problems, government and senators will take their efforts to keep the peace with negotiating, conpromising. So, understanding the past can guide, to some extent, human how to do smoothly. - u% y* z) l7 _

fholding the learning the past dose not work in all situation. After all, with the development of our society and the advancement of the technology, some new problems are exposed to us. we fail to by the mean of any old experience to handle it. For example, the greenhouse effect makes people stay on the hot pan. If absent of feasible sloving, we will kill ourselves. However, in the history people never faced such a problem.
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All in all, To solve immediate issues , we should combine the old experience and new perspective. It is the best way to help human make bigger progress..


文章的结构还是不错的，很清晰，楼主在第三个分论点上走向了与前面两个相反的方面去说，恩，这种思路我要学习学习了，建议楼主多多加强语言表达，还有一些拼写错误注意下。。。
令外03MM说的，没有扣住solving problems的问题也有，我的作文也有这个问题，呵呵，一起加油吧~~
红色是改动的地方，蓝色是写得比较好的地方