2.21作业 slimh

slimhUID: 2438517

2.21 Do you prefer to finish a project completely then to another one or do two or several projects at a time?


Every one has different work style, some may want to do a project completely at a time, and some may rather do two or several projects at a time. As a person with great motivation to the work, I personally prefer to do two or several projects at a time. There are several reasons to maintain my opinions.


There are multiple situations may happen during when we are working. One of them is timeless situation with a large of work; at least it always happens to me. Several projects, for example, need to be finished in very limited time. However, for the first time, I was afraid and even didn't know where to start. But soon, I take them as the challenge, and set up several functions to finish the projects in time. Firstly, I separate them with urgent one and normal one due to the dead line, and do firstly the easily being finished one. Then I do the normal one with limited time. This kind of functions improved my personal skills, and trained me to make a decision correctly in a short time. As known to all that do several works at a time brings colossal pressure to a person. However, it is also a challenge that once you get through with it, you will be happy with the coming enthusiasm from the success.


Furthermore, I found I could learn more things and gain more experiences from doing two or several projects at a time. Apparently, do one project completely at a time seems good enough, while compare with doing two or more projects at the same time, I definitely believe that I can learn more things from the latter one. My intention to the work is learn as much as I can, how can I miss such opportunities with great platform of learning more things in a short time? Because I’m still young and lack of experience, I wish I could learn as much as possible in a short time. It is also my personal reason of supporting the idea which does two or more projects at a time.


To sum up, it is still a topic with arguments from different types of people. Yet, my consistent with work is to learn as may as possible, I am in favor of doing two or several projects at a time.

lavenderelaineUID: 2689477

2.21 Do you prefer to finish a project completely then to another one or do two or several projects at a time? # t3 i: g" W% y" } & J  p1 U9 Z5 U" l ' t1 N. `( ?8 m* ~" AEvery one has different work style, some may want to do a project completely at a time, and some may rather do two or several projects at a time. (由一个县城的句型，different people have different work styles, some…, while the others …你看这样怎么样~)As a person with great motivation to the work,（as后面是不是应该加句子？Being full of great motivation…怎么样） I personally prefer to do two or several projects at a time. There are several reasons to maintain my opinions.(我白痴不太懂啊，请问maintain是不是应该I maintain，不应该 reason to maintain, support 怎么样？ 还是你那种是已经有的经典句型？ 请赐教) # o( k) O3 g6 z4 d$ b3 e5+ T/ n- E  m' [+ }- l: s4 o1 r  f+ ]2 F$ W0 iThere are multiple situations may happen（好像有2个动词了。要不把there are删了，要不situations后加一个that即that在定从中作主语） during when we are working（不太清楚啊，是不是during 后when 应该去了）. One of them is timeless situation with a large of work; at least it always happens to me. Several projects, for example, need to be finished in very limited time. However, for the first time, I was afraid and even didn't know where to start. But soon, I take them as the challenge, and set up several functions （是想说schedules么？）to finish the projects in time. Firstly, I separate them with（into）(an） urgent one and (a) normal one due to the dead line, and do firstly the easily being finished one. Then I do the normal one with limited time. This kind of functions improved my personal skills, and trained me to make a decision correctly in a short time. As known to all that do(ing) several works at a time brings colossal pressure to a person. However, it is also a challenge that once you get through with(with删) it, you will be happy with the coming enthusiasm from the success. 2 {& S4 ]2 f4 d1 x1 t+ D 3 T( z8 f+ R: P/ m. c: W . w% P4 _8 n. n7 N: n Furthermore, I found I could learn more things and gain more experiences from doing two or several projects at a time. Apparently, do one project completely at a time seems good enough, while compare（ed） with doing two or more projects at the same time(slimh一定注意英这个compare with无论句中句首都是compared with…也不能comparing with), I definitely believe that I can learn more things from the latter one. My intention to the work is learn(ing) as much as I can, how can I miss such opportunities with great platform of learning more things in a short time? Because I’m still young and lack of experience, I wish I could learn as much as possible in a short time(. It is also my personal reason of supporting the idea which does two or more projects at a time.)是楼主自己想的句子么？~ 好像有点别扭。多嘴改成这样怎么样 , which is one of the reasons why I prefer to do seeral things at a time. 哈哈 slimh 好~ 第一次见面。多多指教啊~~~^-^ 下面个人拙见~~ 1. 注意要动名词短语作主语的话别忘了 -ing 2. 个人感觉还是分几个分论点作2，3，4段比较清晰 能支持自己观点。读起来楼主2，3段貌似在说一个观点，个人认为。 3. 句子积累就可以新手捏在即文章了~ 我也是这个毛病啊，肚子里句子太少了 所以自己老编。有时候符合语法 ，但是读起来会很别扭 因为人家老美没有这么用的  。 嘿嘿 。说的不对的见谅啦~~~ 一起加油 ！

lixinjiayouUID: 2754331

Every one has different work style, some may want to do a project completely at a time, and some may rather do two or several projects at a time. (个人觉得这句话太plain，或许应该用个漂亮的句型，比如：when asked about ones working style ,some people prefer to finish a project completely and then move on to another ,while some favors doing several project at a time.)As a person with great motivation to the work（我感觉motivation to the work的表意挺中文的，我也不知道什么比较好，但就是感觉别扭，或许as a person with great passion for my work?）, I personally (I 和personally有点语意赘述，貌似我在“作文实战常见错误”里见过)prefer to do two or several projects at a time. There are several reasons to maintain（是不是改成support会比较正确呢^_^） my opinions（单数opinion）. 3 d6 r+ t! m. `2

刀小镜UID: 2618532

Every one has different work style, some may want to do a project completely at a time, and some may rather do two or several projects at a time. As a person with great motivation to the work, I personally prefer to do two or several projects at a time. There are several reasons to maintain(support) my opinions.
There are multiple situations may happen during(去掉) when we are working. One of them is timeless situation with a large amount of work; at least it always happens to me. Several projects, for example, need to be finished in very limited time. However, for (at)the first time, I was afraid and even didn't know where(how) to start. But soon, I take them as the challenge, and set up several functions to finish the projects in time. Firstly, I separate them with urgent one and normal one due to the dead line, and do firstly the easily being finished one. (and I finished the easier one at first)Then I do(did) the normal one with limited time. This kind of functions(function) improved(improves) my personal skills, and trained me to make a decision correctly in a short time. As known to all that do(doing) several works at a time brings colossal pressure to a person. However, it is also a challenge that once you get through with it, you will be happy with the coming enthusiasm from the success.
Furthermore, I found I could learn more things and gain more experiences(经验不可数) from doing two or several projects at a time. Apparently, do one project completely at a time seems good enough, while compare(d) with doing two or more projects at the same time, I definitely believe that I can learn more things from the latter one. My intention to the work is (to)learn as much as I can, how can I miss such opportunities with great platform of learning more things in a short time? Because I’m still young and lack of experience, I wish I could learn as much as possible in a short time. It is also my personal reason of supporting the idea which does two or more projects at a time.
To sum up, it is still a topic with arguments from different types of people. Yet, my consistent with work is to learn as may as possible, I am in favor of doing two or several projects at a time.

姑娘思路挺好的 就是句子方面多少有些问题 如果时间充裕多背背好句子一类的东西

slimhUID: 2438517

帅帅童鞋：slimh一定注意英这个compare with无论句中句首都是compared with…也不能comparing with), 这个非常非常感谢阿！！！！

还有我的写法都是 中间两段用不同的侧面或例子来支持一个论点的，不知道这样的写法对不对啊。。我看你的至少有5段，我掰不出那么多阿。。郁闷。。总是超时。。

至于maintain我是想逼自己用不同的词汇去代替support等词汇，所以故意写的，我再去查查它的用法哈。。
请多指教！

slimhUID: 2438517

嗯， 对，我也觉得开头一句太casual的感觉了！！！谢谢指教！！ 3# lixinjiayou

slimhUID: 2438517

唉，丸子童鞋真实戳到我的痛处呀。。我词汇量明显非常不够，而且语法很烂，现在看那个张满胜的语法书，每天捉摸着呢。。如果你那边有好的教材欢迎介绍阿。。