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slimhUID: 2438517

2.22 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most people often let others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves.

"Which bag is fit to my dress today?" Don't you think such a question is frequently asked by a woman who lives around in our daily life? It is so true that sometimes people need others advice to make a better choice. However, due to the different personalities possessed by human being, not all the people often let others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves.

To begin with, it needs to be clarified that one asks others for opinions or ideas does not as equal as one asks others to make decisions instead of him. As known to all, group work provides significant achievement, when all the members work together. It is clear that group power gains every individual’s idea, when all these ideas concluded in one way, the power of the knowledge will be stronger than ever. That's why group study programs exist in every university and team building programs are provided in every company in general. People share their experiences or ideas often, because a good idea or a piece of advice may help others mostly. But still, as I mentioned from the above, to share ideas dose not mean to make decisions. As far as I am concerned, although people may like to ask others for advice, people do not let others make decisions for them.

Furthermore, a person who is mentally mature enough always makes decisions by himself. He or she can do everything with his or her decision as long as he or she wants to.
The reason is every one is an individual, and they have the right to make decisions by themselves. Bill Gates quitted from the university because he himself wanted focus on his software development, James Cameron spent billions of money to direct the famous movie Titanic while others suggest him to stop wasting money on the cheap romance story. Bill Gates and James Cameron are all made decisions by themselves and made significant achievement in their career. From every aspect, I highly doubt that people often let others make decisions for them. From my point of view, people who think individually should make decisions by themselves.

Still, there are even no grounded surveys or reports to prove that most people often let others make decisions for them. I, as a mature person, never let others make decisions for me.
And I am sure that most people insist to make decisions by themselves, because they are the masters of their faith.

ivybettyUID: 2328308

"Which bag is fit to my dress today?" Don't you think such a question is frequently asked by a woman who lives around in our daily life? It is so true that sometimes people need others advice to make a better choice. However, due to the different personalities possessed by human beings, not all the people often let others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves.! e/ B8 S  H  q. M4 k
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To begin with, it needs to be clarified that one asks others for opinions or ideas does not as equal as one asks others to make decisions instead of him.观点明确 As known to all, group work provides significant achievement, when all the members work together. It is clear that group power gains every individual’s idea, when all these ideas concluded in one way, the power of the knowledge will be stronger than ever. That's why group study programs exist in every university and team building programs are provided in every company in general. People share their experiences or ideas often, because a good idea or a piece of advice may help others mostly. But still, as I mentioned from the above, to share ideas dose not mean to make decisions. As far as I am concerned, although people may like to ask others for advice, people do not let others make decisions for them.

Furthermore, a person who is mentally mature enough always makes decisions by himself. He or she can do everything with his or her decision as long as he or she wants to.2 t/ H" g& z7 @( e0 D# Z
The reason is every one is an individual, and they have the right to make decisions by themselves. Bill Gates quitted from the university because he himself wanted focus on his software development, James Cameron spent billions of money to direct the famous movie Titanic while others suggest him to stop wasting money on the cheap romance story. Bill Gates and James Cameron are all made decisions by themselves and made significant achievements in their career. From every aspect, I highly doubt that people often let others make decisions for them. From my point of view, people who think individually should make decisions by themselves.! y4 Z' l2 x$ Y" Z

Still, there are even no grounded surveys or reports to prove that most people often let others make decisions for them. I, as a mature person, never let others make decisions for me.
And I am sure that most people insist to make decisions by themselves, because they are the masters of their faith.
LZ观点明确,论理有据, 尤其第二段开头一下子就排除了第一段可能产生的歧义.同时 BG&jC的例子很好.

奇流沙UID: 2698749

2.22 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most people often let others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves.

"Which bag is fit to my dress today?" Don't you think such a question is frequently asked by a woman who lives around in our daily life? It is so true that sometimes people need others advice to make a better choice. However, due to the different personalities possessed by human being, not all the people often let others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves.

To begin with, it needs to be clarified that one asks others for opinions or ideas does not as equal as one asks others to make decisions instead of himself. As known to all(我个人觉得这个短语是很好的，但是记不得在哪里看到过说最好不要用，因为这个短语太过武断，凭什么说你接下来给出的观点就是众所周知的？所以保险起见，慎用……), group work provides significant achievement, when all the members work together. It is clear that group power gains(get…together如何?) every individual’s idea, when all these ideas concluded in one way（不大明白，请教）, the power of the knowledge will be stronger than ever. That's why group study programs exist in every university and team building programs are provided in every company in general. People share their experiences or ideas often, because a good idea or a piece of advice may help others mostly. But still, as I mentioned from the above, to share ideas dose not mean to make decisions. As far as I am concerned, although people may like to ask others for advice, people do not let others make decisions for them.
呵呵，这个观点和俺一样滴~
Furthermore, a person who is mentally mature enough always makes decisions by himself. He or she can do everything with his or her decision as long as he or she wants to.

The reason is every one is an individual, and they have the right to make decisions by themselves. Bill Gates quitted from the university because he himself wanted to focus on his software development, James Cameron spent billions of money to direct the famous movie Titanic while others suggest him to stop wasting money on the cheap romance story. Bill Gates and James Cameron are all( Both of Bill Gates and James Cameron) made decisions by themselves and made(gained) significant achievement in their career. From every aspect, I highly doubt that people often let others make decisions for them.(如果是这一段的结论句，这一段只提出了一个方面啊，如果是上下两段的，为啥不干脆并入最后一段？)
From my point of view, people who think individually should make decisions by themselves.

Still, there are even no grounded surveys or reports to prove that most people often let others make decisions for them. I, as a mature person, never let others make decisions for me.
And I am sure that most people insist to make decisions by themselves, because they are the masters of their faith（此处可是想说fate？）.
红色—改
粉色—好地方
紫色—请教
绿色—废话……
论点提出的不错，但是第二个论点虽然给出了两个例子，但我总觉得欠缺点什么。是不是因为给出论点之后就立马举例子，中间应该再加一点过渡性的说明再引出例子比较好呢？