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john_332UID: 2741978

To be well-informed people should get information from many different information sources.

  We all living in a era that called the time of informations

exploded into every corner of the world.Never has we been

surrounded before by so many pieces of informations.Since
most less-informed people would encounter more difficulties

in and embarrassments in the daily life,I think it is essential

to get information from many different sources if we need to

a well-informed people. Just like most successful athletes

need constant practice to make their musles stronger to

acchieve higher goals, a learned professor gain their

knowledge by  regular accumulation.there is no doubt that

get information gradually is a must for a people to be well-

informed so that he/she would be able to anlaysis the latest

situations and take his/her action accordingly.

  Although I agree one should get information from different

sources, in my point of view,the approaches are the key in

this process, at the first place,in a world fullfilled with

countless messages and informations,we definitely need a

effective and clear brain to guide our way in finding the

useful informations. Without a purposeful thought  bearing in

the mind,one may tempt to confuse and overwhelming

oneself in the sea of informations. Only a clear head isn't

enough , when we set up a direction and aspect we want to

be well-informed, a ability of sharp judgement and

insightfulness play a improtant role in this process of filtering

and identifiying correct informations. There are a number of

examples in the history that a incorrect information lead to a

diaster or a distorted message results in a serious mistake.
Last but not least,how to harness the complicated

technologies and advanced platform to make information

searching efficient and meaninful is also a skill which we

should acquire.
Thanks to the internet and powerful search engine like

google,the field website and mass media available all the

time,we can easily get the information we interested in with

single clicks at home.

   The way in getting information may vary through

individuals,even with the same background or similar

personality,yet to get understanding of a certain aspect and

in turn become well-informed need to be proactive and keep

searching from different sources,of course in a correct way.

第一次参加活动，写得不好，请见谅。

yuxiao518UID: 2527170

To be well-informed people should get information from many different information sources."

  We all living in a era that called the time of informations. Never has we been

surrounded before by so many pieces of informations, exploded into every corner of the world.Since
most less-informed people would encounter more difficulties
in and embarrassments in the daily life(这句不知道是什么意思？),I think it is essential
to get information from many different sources if we need to

be a well-informed people. Just like most successful athletes need constant practice to make their musles stronger to
acchieve (achieve) higher goals, a learned professor gain their
knowledge by  regular accumulation.(这两个例子不是针对的different sources) there is no doubt that

get information gradually(好像偏题了) is a must for a people to be well-

informed so that he/she would be able to anlaysis the latest

situations and take his/her action accordingly.第一段好像太长了

  Although I agree one should get information from different

sources, in my point of view,the approaches are the key in

this process, at the first place,in a world full filled with

countless messages and informations,we definitely need a

effective and clear brain to guide our way in finding （感觉to find 要好些）the useful informations. Without a purposeful thought  bearing in

the mind,one may tempt(tend) to confuse and overwhelming oneself (改为to submerge )in the sea of informations. Only a clear head isn't

enough , when we set up a direction and aspect we want to
be well-informed, a ability of sharp judgement and

insightfulness play a improtant role in this process of filtering

and identifiying correct informations. （改Only holding a clear head isn't

enough , we should have sharp judgematical and insightful skill in

filtering
and identifiying correct informations when we determined to

be well-informed.] There are a number of

examples in the history that a incorrect information lead to a
disaster or a distorted message results in a serious mistake.

]
Last but not least,how to harness the complicated technologies and advanced platform to make information

searching efficient and meaningful is also a skill which we

should acquire." Thanks to the internet and powerful search engine like google,the field website and mass media available all the

time,we can easily get the information we interested in with

single clicks at home.

   The way in getting information may vary through (depending on）
individuals. For those, even with the same background or similar $ n6 w: u& N) _  q! l0 B

personality, may not get understanding of a certain aspect(understand a specific field)and in turn become well-informed need to be proactive and keep searching from different sources,of course in a correct way.(最后一句：While, to be a well-informed person need to search different sources with initiative and perseverance, and above all, in a correct way.

john_332UID: 2741978

谢谢yuxiao518的修改，其实我觉得这个题目不好写，可以展开论述的空间非常窄

小心littleheartUID: 2726034

We all living in a era that called the time of informations（the information age）exploded into every corner of the world.Never has we been surrounded before by so many pieces(so amount ) of informations.Sincemost less-informed people would encounter more difficulties in and embarrassments in the daily life,I think it is essential to get information from many different sources if we need (desire) to a well-informed people. Just like most successful athletes need constant practice to make their muscles stronger to achieve higher goals, a learned(distinguished) professor gain their(his/her) knowledge by regular (continuous) accumulation. there is no doubt that get(getting) information gradually is a must for a people to be well- informed so that he/she would be able to anlaysis the latest situations and take his/her action accordingly.
  Although I agree one should get information from different sources, in my point of view,the approaches are the key in this process, at the first place, in a world fullfilled with countless messages and informations(information不可数), we definitely need a effective （method）and（a） clear brain to guide our way in finding the useful informations. Without a purposeful thought  bearing in the mind,one may tempt to confuse and overwhelming （dumping）oneself in the sea of informations. Only a clear head isn't enough , when we set up a direction and aspect we want to be well-informed, a ability of sharp judgement and insightfulness (also)play an improtant role in this process of filtering and identifying correct informations. There are a number of examples in the history that an incorrect information lead to a disaster or a distorted message results in a serious mistake.（这段主要在论述得到信息的方法，而主题是说人们是不是应该得到大量的信息~lz考虑下）
     Last but not least, how to harness the complicated technologies and advanced platform to make information searching efficient and meaningful is also a skill which we should acquire.'
Thanks to the internet and powerful search engine like Google, the field website and mass media available all the time, we can easily get the information we interested in with single clicks at home. The way in getting information may vary through individuals, even with the same background or similar personality, （建议这里断句）yet to get understanding of a certain aspect and in turn become well-informed need to be proactive and keep searching from different sources, of course in a correct way.
看了lz的文章后，觉得自己写跑题了~~~囧~~这机经中的题说的不全，真的很容易让人confusing，不过我觉得按照lz对主题的理解，应该是要成为一个全面的人，人们是不是应该掌握大量的不同信息。而lz的论述部分主要说的是人们应该怎样掌握信息，是不是也有些偏题呢？？还有就是例子少了些。