Issue 153

CynthiaMomoLeeUID: 2587828

In any society, there are people who are living under the educated style that educatees listening to the teachers about every principle and knowledge and there are students that are willing to access another style that the average person would not have been limited and would be full of more creativity and enthusiasm on knowledge. With increasing advancement of both developed nations and developing nations, the requirement to the graduate in society has been tremendously enhanced. So the student must master the principle of the classical theory and how to put it into practical use while at the same time trying to come up with different views to pursuit further exploration.

Nowadays, even though the change in society is so speeding and colorful that more and more fresh
and different information is spread and described to any place in the world, the basic and common sense of the knowledge that was accumulated by our forerunners cannot be denied and given up to the modern learner. One's individual development and the capacity to fulfill one's own purposes can depend on an adequate preparation in childhood. Education can thus attempt to give a firm foundation for achievement of personal fulfillment. The better the foundation that is built, the more successful the child will be. Simple basics in education can carry a child far.

Furthermore, it is the strong and wealthy accumulation in knowledge that spur people to create and think why and another way to reach the same destination. So it is of great significance to emphasis on putting forward different views, suspicion and assumption. More importantly, when having a new and outstanding method, people need to have the ability to hold it. As deepening the thinking, people would face incredible problems and then seek the answer in order to solve so many "why" in heart.

Incredible changes in any realm have enhanced the overall standard of living and comfort level of any country. It cannot be denied that technology development is greatly due to more and more active thinkers to question the old knowledge and show the new ways. The breakthroughs in bioengineering science are helping to unravel the mysteries of life, with the spirit of exploring the truth from generation to generation. High-speed magnetic levitation trains can transport people safely at speeds of up to three hundred miles an hour in parts of Europe and Japan. People can communicate with anyone that has a computer and access to the Internet, anywhere in the world. All the above situation are allowed because of saying yes and no and pursuiting more outstanding thing than ever before.

In conclusion, not only would the basis of the knowledge to the average person enhance, but the courage not to be limited to the other teaching and to make independent thinking would also be owned.

cooltozeroUID: 2705603

In any society, there are people who are living under the educated style that educatees listening to the teachers about every principle and knowledge（i这个定句从问没有谓语）  and there are students that are willing to access another style that the average person would not have been limited and would be full of more creativity and enthusiasm on knowledge. With increasing advancement of both developed nations and developing nations, the requirement to the graduate in society has been tremendously enhanced. So the student must master the principle of the classical theory and how to put it into practical use while at the same time trying to come up with different views to pursuit further exploration. （总觉得跟题目相关度不够！！！）

Nowadays, even though the change in society is so speeding and colorful that more and more fresh
and different information is spread and described to any place in the world, the basic and common sense of the knowledge that was accumulated by our forerunners cannot be denied and given up to the modern learner. One's individual development and the capacity to fulfill one's own purposes can depend on an adequate preparation in childhood. Education can thus attempt to give a firm foundation for achievement of personal fulfillment. The better the foundation that is built, the more successful the child will be. Simple basics in education can carry a child far.

Furthermore, it is the strong and wealthy accumulation in knowledge that spur people to create and think why and another way to reach the same destination. So it is of great significance to emphasis on putting forward different views, suspicion and assumption. More importantly, when having a new and outstanding method, people need to have the ability to hold it. As deepening the thinking, people would face incredible problems and then seek the answer in order to solve so many "why" in heart.

Incredible changes in any realm have enhanced the overall standard of living and comfort level of any country. It cannot be denied that technology development is greatly due to more and more active thinkers to question the old knowledge and show the new ways. The breakthroughs in bioengineering science are helping to unravel the mysteries of life, with the spirit of exploring the truth from generation to generation. High-speed magnetic levitation trains can transport people safely at speeds of up to three hundred miles an hour in parts of Europe and Japan. People can communicate with anyone that has a computer and access to the Internet, anywhere in the world. All the above situation are allowed because of saying yes and no and pursuiting more outstanding thing than ever before.

In conclusion, not only would the basis of the knowledge to the average person enhance, but the courage not to be limited to the other teaching and to make independent thinking would also be owned.




语言上仍然很成功。
字数上好像不点不充足。


逻辑上，
第二段，论证基础知识的重要性。但遗憾的是缺乏例证。
第三四段，论证创新的重要性，有几个比较有说服力的例子。
从论证基础知识与创新的关系上，本文基本成功。
但是，我认为，本文只到论证“基础知识与创新的关系”这一层面，并没有再扩展到 被动接受与怀疑精神 的这一层面。  没有真正讨论到教育问题。

基础知识难道就跟题中所说的被动接受对应么？ 也不见得，当我们学基础知识的时候，多点怀疑精神，可以学得更好。
而创新就跟题目中的怀疑与提问相对应吗？  好像也不那么明显。   
我想，如果要把这些问题说清楚，还需要更多的逻辑分析。

CynthiaMomoLeeUID: 2587828

thanks so much 2# cooltozero