[big fish] 3月6日 issue88 by wowoyuweiwei

wowoyuweiweiUID: 2754055

The statement above is not totally right in my views. Nowadays, as we can see, the world is changing and developing rapidly at every moment. Inevitablly, the high technology influences our daily life but it could not determine social customs and ethics. There are other factors play improtant roles in the whole progress.
To begin with, I have to admite that because of the new technologies, our life changes a lot including social customs. So much things come into being with the help of them which were just dreams in our ancesters' world. For example, no body can believe that human beings can travel around the world in such a short time by taking a plane. At that time, this journey must be not only long  but also dangerous. On other aspects, when it comes to Christmas day, if a family member can not be back home he or she would write a letter and send it out several weeks before. But now, in this modern society, only clicking some buttons and typing some words into computers  will help the homesickers express their feelings and wish the best to the whole family. These kinds of things get more convinient changing our former customs.
At the second place, social ethics also be influenced by technologies. Maybe what we think was not right ten years ago turned to be legally just caused by  the new inventions. There is a quite phenomenon that recently, more and more personal information become public which harms us ordinary people.  The internet make it impossible to keep somthing secret especially the personal stuffs. To the worse, the thievies who can steal others' information don not think it is unmorally. They enjoyed the progress of this and even spread it to millions of Internet suffers. Therefore, we can imagine how terrible the victims feel.
As what I discussed above, we can see that the technologies do make sense to our social customs and ethics. But, on the other hand, we should not state they can determine everything especially those two. We know that the progress of forming the customs and ethics is determined not only by technologies but also some other important factors such culture, environment of the whole society and the former habits. Although an incresing number of people get used to the convinient way to comunicate with each other, we still prefer go home to celebrate festivals with friends and family instead of doing this by phones or e-mails. This traditon can not be easily changed only by new technologies.
To sum it up, the technologies do real affect customs and ethics. But we should not say that they can be determined by new inventions or theories.

jenius4869UID: 2659821

1# wowoyuweiwei

The statement above is not totally right in my views. Nowadays, as we can see, the world is changing and developing rapidly at every moment. Inevitablly, the high technology influences our daily life but it could not determine social customs and ethics. There are other factors play improtant roles in the whole progress. To begin with, I have to admite that because of the new technologies, our life changes a lot including social customs. So much things come into being with the help of them which were just dreams in our ancesters' world. For example, no body can believe that human beings can travel around the world in such a short time by taking a plane. At that time, (in the past,)this journey must be not only long  but also dangerous. On other aspects,(In addition,) when it comes to Christmas day, if a family member can not be back home he or she would write a letter and send it out several weeks before. But now, in this modern society, only clicking some buttons and typing some words into computers  will help the homesickers express their feelings and wish the best to the whole family. These kinds of things (,which are making our life more and more convenient,are gradually changing/altering ) get more convinient(convenient) changing our former customs. At the second place, social ethics also be influenced by technologies. Maybe what we think was not right ten years ago turned to be legally just caused by (because) the new inventions. There is a quite phenomenon that recently, more and more personal(or you can use private) information become public which harms us ordinary people.  The internet make(加s) it impossible to keep somthing secret especially the personal stuffs. To the worse, the thievies（thieves） who can steal others' information don not think it is unmorally（immoral）. They enjoyed the progress of this（such behavior） and even spread it to millions of Internet suffers(customers). Therefore, we can imagine how terrible the victims feel. As what I discussed above, we can see that the technologies do make sense to our social customs and ethics. But, on the other hand, we should not state they can determine everything especially those two. We know that the progress of forming the customs and ethics is determined not only by technologies but also some other important factors such culture, environment of the whole society and the former habits. Although an incresing number of people get used to the convinient（拼写） way to comunicate with each other, we still prefer go home to celebrate festivals with friends and family instead of doing this by phones or e-mails. This traditon can not be easily changed only by new technologies. （不要举一个例子吧，有点自相矛盾啊） To sum it up, the technologies do real affect customs and ethics. But we should not say that they can be determined by new inventions or theories. 从你的开头看，应该是反对态度，但你却用了两段来说明作者的观点，自己的观点却只用了一段，我觉得这个让步让得篇幅太多了。还有反对作者的观点，你的立场是还有其他因素，但我觉得你还应该就科学进步谈谈他本身是怎么不能决定customs 和 ethics的，这样更为直接。 时间关系，马上熄灯，没时间标红了，不好意思啊。