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强哥很强大UID: 2783695

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
8 R6 ~( _* [+ F* X( _9 \People should be allowed to use cell phones on public transportation such as buses and trains
    Facing the statement whether you can use your cell phone on public transportation,we can find some people hold the idea that we can use cell phone on public while others don’t.According to my own expierence I don’t think using cell phone on public transportation should be allowed.
    For starters,I think it may bring troubles to others when using cell phone on public transportation.When you are answering a phonecall other passengers nearby have to cut down their volume of sound or even stop talking to give you a smooth talk.Maybe they don’t want to hear your talking with someone else,but they have to draw attention to.It is very embarrassed.

    More importantly,it also disturbs others and makes them uncomfortble.For instance,you are answering a call when you take a bus,it may be noise to others who want to have a rest.They will feel uncomfortable and they don’t want to hear what you are talking about absolutely.
Last,using cell phone on public transportation is an impolite behavior to others.You have the obligation to keep a quiet ambience for everyone else.You may broke good atmosphere and may be disgusted with your careless behavior.


    Of course,using cell phone on public transpirtation could be allowed in some cases,for example,you have very important thing to deal with or you have to answer a phone call.But if all these factors are considered,I think the opposite view is wisdom.In a word,we must take others benefit into accout and refusing to use cell phone on public transportation is the best choice.

51航海UID: 2738581

Facing the statement whether you can use your cell phone on public transportation,we can find some people hold the idea that we can use cell phone on public while others don’t.According to my own expierence I don’t think using cell phone on public transportation should be allowed.
    For starters,I think it may bring troubles to others when using cell phone on public transportation.When you are answering a phonecall other passengers nearby have to cut down their volume of sound or even stop talking to give you a smooth talk.Maybe they don’t want to hear your talking with someone else,but they have to draw attention to.It is very embarrassed.

    More importantly,it also disturbs others and makes them uncomfortble.For instance,you are answering a call when you take a bus,it may be noise to others who want to have a rest.They will feel uncomfortable and they don’t want to hear what you are talking about absolutely
Last,using cell phone on public transportation is an impolite behavior to others.You have the obligation to keep a quiet ambience for everyone else.You may broke good atmosphere and may be disgusted with your careless behavior.
（这三个原因都是disturb others, 反复在说，重复了吧?感觉如果写多个理由的话，就该是不同的角度）

    Of course,using cell phone on public transpirtation could be allowed in some cases,for example,you have very important thing to deal with or you have to answer a phone call.But if all these factors are considered,I think the opposite view is wisdom.In a word,we must take others benefit into accout and refusing to use cell phone on public transportation is the best choice.

语言驾驭的能力还是不错的，很简洁，要是句式在变化一下就更好的~