3.20 yxb_25的独立作文

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由于3.27要一战了，题目不是用的jbc88  给出的题目，小组太多，好乱啊，貌似用的是happyfaith2008(03)的题目，希望有心的高手帮小弟改改，第一次在论坛发作文，今天（3.22）的作文我今天晚上补上！

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University students should be required to take basic science classes even if they are not part of the field of the study。5 x6 f5 ^0 n& o


Many universities are require their students to take basic science classes for which to gain more opportunities for young students in their future career. As far as I concerned, wider knowledge means to youngster can obtain more choices, higher salaries and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market, even whether the classes are part of the students' major study and research field or not.



Obviously, in most cases the traditional higher education system only concerned about the specialize field achievement of the college students. Which directly result the students have a limited opportunity to obtain a suitable job beyond their profession. On the contrary, applicants with Art and Science degree would not only be qualified for jobs in Company&Government office, they would also be well prepared for any job with basic science skill as a prerequisite. With a large range of potential jobs to choose from, students with extensively knowledge are more likely to find a job that suit their particular needs and interests.

Moreover, employers are willing to pay more premium for applicants who study and read extensively, because it will save much money to hire extra specialists for the company. For instance, many companies desire employee who are competent in more than one major field and spare no expense to offer higher salaries to attract them because of their endless potential. Therefore, college graduates with extensive view and knowledge are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher salaries and gain better life than who lack basic science knowledge.



Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher job standard, basic science knowledge gives students more common sense than who lack it. For example, if a eathquake taking place near in your living place, such as Haiti and Wenchuan(China). How to survive and help families members in that catastrophe is more important than anything. In that case it is obvious to predict that the terrible consequences when college students do not take any basic science course and fail to save themselves. In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that college students take basic science course is essential element for their life.

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3.22 3Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?* p3 ^# zTeachers should assign homework to their students every day.


Obviously, most of childrent wants a brilliant and splendid study experience without any stress within their childhood. However, due to parents are generally most concerned about the development of their child, it is not completely true to say that teacher should provide a pressureless study environment for students, which means, no assignment.

First of all, homework can cultivating students' good learning habits. As normal individuals, students more or less have some bad habits, such as lazy and idle. Even though the studious student on the condition with no homework for a long time, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for most students tend to unconsciously or subconsciously circumventing the hardness and difficulty when they facing. Therefore, teachers assign homework to their student not only cultivating students' patients, but also let teachers to recognize the deficiency the students have and force them to develop in a correct direction, like challenge the difficult without fear.

Additionally, assignment can examine the students' learning achievement. When students learning in the class guiding with teachers, it is not surprising that teachers perhaps have not enough capable of understanding almost every students' thoughts and their knowledge level within the limited teaching time. Assign appropriate homework everyday essential and it is the best way to resolve that problem. Nor for restrict their splendid childhood, but to inspect the harvest they gain in the daily class.


Although assign homework every day restrict children's free time in certain degree, we living in a world where knowledge is accumulated by multiplying and at the same time, the job market become more and more competitive. Who does not advance to against the current will falling behind. Accordingly, rather than immersing in the easy and comfortable study environment, students within difficult and hardness are more likely  success and have grate ambition in the future.

In brief, teacher's assignment and homework is vital important within the study progress.

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3 23  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Sports teaches us lessons about life.
In modern sociality, Physical training is a compulsory course not only runs through from preliminary to higher education, but influence our whole human life profoundly. We all now live in a world that exercise in the stadium is no longer exorbitant, and the sports games spiritual are readily spread every corner of the world through of which like Olympic Games, Super bowl etc. We can experience our life and socialization better within the games only if we already have acquired athletic spirit, such as team work and how to win and lose gracefully.

First of all, the factor we cannot neglect is that sports teaches us self esteem. With the coach, who teaches us more than sports, and ethics, safety and uses best practices, people who participate in sports can gain so much. Besides, the enormous health benefits of sports also promote us healthy and optimistic life style, which is the essential elements of the self esteem and life lesson. For instance, children in organized sports  not only have more opportunities to interact with a variety of people, but also teach them how to communicate with other people.

In addition, sports changes people's conception of healthy body image. Most of us know that fast food industry and computer games brings many unhealthy habit for children and adolescents, even diseases. Research shown us that the obesity and heart disease rate are increased roughly 1/3 in youngsters in recent years. Sports can help people to maintain a healthy body weight and positive life attitude therefore to prevent many diseases which not suppose to take place.

Moreover, sports teach us recognize the vital concept of how to teamwork with others and, more importantly, how to win and lose gracefully. Whether in the sports field or the real society, working as a team and learn to regard the result gracefully are the necessary element of success. In many cases, teammate mostly regarded as a friend  overcome challenges and obstacles together rather than merely as a colleague.


Although many people deem that some of the sport games are dangerous and terrifing, such as extreme games. We cannot deny that the influence of the athletes spirit bring into our daily life. (Because when  face with crisis, we did not shrink from our challenge. We overcome them. We did not avoid our responsibility, we embraced it. We did not fear out feature, we shape it.)

括号内是引用Obama 昨天在 health care bill 通过后在白宫的讲话！

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Obviously, most of children wants(want) a brilliant and splendid study experience without any stress within their childhood. However, due to parents are generally most concerned about the development of their child, it is not completely true to say that teacher should provide a pressureless study environment for students, which means, no assignment.

First of all, homework can cultivating(cultivate) students' good learning habits. As normal individuals, students more or less have some bad habits, such as lazy and idle. Even though the studious student on(in) the condition with no homework for a long time, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for most students tend to unconsciously or subconsciously circumventing(circumvent) the hardness and difficulty when they facing(they faced). Therefore, teachers assign homework to their student not only cultivating( to cultivate) students' patients, but also let teachers to recognize the deficiency the students have and force them to develop in a correct direction, like challenge the difficult without fear.( but also to make sure the deficiency of their students and then force the students develop in a correct direction.) 不知道这样改对不对，总觉得LZ的长句主宾在来回变换，不过我自己语法也学得不好，呵呵，LZ自己再斟酌下哦~
Additionally, assignment can examine the students' learning achievement. When (all) students learning in the (same) class guiding with teachers, it is not surprising that teachers perhaps have not enough capable of understanding almost every students'(all students’) thoughts and their knowledge levels within the limited teaching time.(这句加点小词可以强调下学生人数多和老师无法估计估计到每个学生的情况真内容) Assign appropriate homework every day essential and it is the best way to resolve that problem. (Assigning appropriate homework every day is an essential solution to this problem.) Nor for restrict their splendid childhood, but to inspect the harvest they gain in the daily class.(后面这句与作业是为了老师检验学生是学习成果这个论点的关系不是很紧密，建议改成由于作业老师可以找出学生的学习问题从而进行针对性辅导之类的)
Although assign homework every day restrict children's free time in certain degree, we living in a world where knowledge is accumulated by multiplying and at the same time, the job market become more and more competitive. Who does not advance to against the current will falling behind. Accordingly, rather than immersing in the easy and comfortable study environment, students within difficult(形容词形式的啦，要换名词吧) and hardness are more likely (to be succeed?) success and have grate ambition(野心？还是成就类的比较好吧) in the future.

In brief, teacher's assignment and homework is vital important within the study progress.

呵呵，每次改别人的作文总觉得比自己写的好，恩恩，多多学习，今天比较忙，明儿有时间再帮你改前面的哈~

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3.24. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should live one city or in one country all their life instead of moving to live in different places.

Although little part of people unwilling to leave it no matter how splendid outside world is because their extremely inadaptation and unbelonging  sense. However, with the intense development and communication of the global economy and modern society. In most cases, deep in people's hart, weather unconscious or subconscious people are dissatisfy their limited living circle. The hunger of knowledge and curiousity gradually turn into the main reason to urge people to find them. Therefore, I strongly support that people should moveing to live in different places.

First of all, living in several places can broaden our horizon. Moving to a new place is always an eye opening experience, which means people can make themselves wisdom within the different customs and culture. For instance, when a native Chinese student moving to Western country. It is a big opportunity to immerse himself in that country and understand its most original culture rather than reading in the book sitting on the library chair. For that reason people through moving out to their own places  not only can experience the exotic civilization, but also broaden their horizon.

Moreover, moving outside their own country is the best way and much easier to learn a foreign language of that country. For example, many Chinese parents send their child to English-Speaking countries where are best places to practice and educate their children to reach a higher English level and capability. Not except my friend who made me shocked  by his amazing oral presentation when he finish his 4-year college journey in the United States.

The last reason is that the employers are more tend to applicants who has been moved to some different places and has a extensive knowledge. As we all know, wiser person must be not satisfied the present place, on the contrary, they are looking forward and improving themselves endless. Donald Trump is the best example, he is a businessman who always up in the air. Hotel, real estate, even TV show, ect, he never satisfy himself in one business field and one place.

In sum, one small field can not make person develop to a intelligence and knowledge one. Therefore, if you eager to succeed in your future life, please go outside.

今天写了很久很久很久，本以为这题目很好写，写到一半卡壳了，郁闷，不知道最后一句话能不能呼应主题，感觉有点怪。。。哎

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3.25.  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Printed books have greater effects on society than television has.


Every year, with the amazing growing rate of the multimedia and High-technology  industry.  Such devices like computer and television are flooded into our daily life and change our habit profoundly. However, I strongly believe that reading traditional books are greatly effects on society and individuals than television has, although the television are became the essential facilities in every one's house.

Compare to the television, traditional printed books allow people to touch, feel and smell the knowledge, which is a preferable way to learning knowledge than the virtual one. When you looking backward to our mankind's developing process, it is a easy way to find out that every civilization's development is based on the entity. For example, our ancestors using stone and bamboo to spread their experience and culture. That entity knowledge such as printing books effects our modern society profoundly for thousand years. Accordingly, it is hard to remember and preservation the knowledge completely within the television show  when people watching it.

Moreover, television threaten individuals' healthy problem more deeply than the printed book. In most cases of our society, the main reason of patients who suffering from short sight mostly due to the excessive watching television and exposing themseves in the harmful radiation ray. For instance, students has been seen for a long time as future resources of country's intelligence. However, research shown that the rate of youngsters who wearing glasses in China are sharply arisen in recent years because their excessive television time, which will become the chronic problem of the society and influence students' future career profoundly.

In addition, individuals are isolated from the vivid and splendid society by excessive watching television. On the contrary, traditional printed book stimulating and developing the relationship when people meet each other, exchange their book and communicate their learning experience in the library or classroom. For example, if a student was constantly reading book in the library, it is more possible to find friends with common interests than isolate himself in a limited space and the virtual world.

In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, it would be much more beneficial for all individuals and society to read the printed books rather than watching the virtual television program. Printed books not only stimulate people to think about the current society, but effect the development of our next generation profoundly. Because its incomparable advantage to effect our society than the other one.

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Every year, with the amazing growing rate of the multimedia and High-technology  industry.  Such devices like computer and television are flooded into our daily life and change our habit profoundly. However, I strongly believe that reading traditional books are greatly effects on society and individuals than television has, although the television are became the essential facilities in every one's house. （这里的however感觉有点牵强，前面只是介绍一个现状和事实，后面是作者观点，本不是一类事物，貌似不存在转折关系？如果前面是讲别人的观点，这个地方再however就感觉自然一些了。）

Compare to the television, traditional printed books allow people to touch, feel and smell the knowledge, which is a preferable way to learning knowledge than the virtual one. When you looking backward to our mankind's developing process, it is a easy way to find out that every civilization's development is based on the entity.（entity? 实体？电视也是啊，这个应该不是区分电视和书籍的关键点吧？） For example, our ancestors using stone and bamboo to spread their experience and culture. That entity knowledge such as printing books effects our modern society profoundly for thousand years. Accordingly, it is hard to remember and preservation the knowledge completely within the television show  when people watching it.

Moreover, television threaten individuals' healthy problem more deeply than the printed book. In most cases of our society, the main reason of patients who suffering from short sight mostly due to the excessive watching television and exposing themseves in the harmful radiation ray. For instance, students has been seen for a long time as future resources of country's intelligence. However, research shown that the rate of youngsters who wearing glasses in China are sharply arisen in recent years because their excessive television time, which will become the chronic problem of the society and influence students' future career profoundly.（电视带来的伤害，引发的重大问题，不管好坏，好像也是影响……）

In addition, individuals are isolated from the vivid and splendid society by excessive watching television. On the contrary, traditional printed book stimulating and developing the relationship when people meet each other, exchange their book and communicate their learning experience in the library or classroom. For example, if a student was constantly reading book in the library, it is more possible to find friends with common interests than isolate himself in a limited space and the virtual world.（这一段将电视让人们变得孤僻，书让人们关系更紧密。可是，这和影响没什么关系啊？好像题目不是讨论书和电视哪个处多的吧？）

In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, it would be much more beneficial for all individuals and society to read the printed books rather than watching the virtual television program. Printed books not only stimulate people to think about the current society, but effect the development of our next generation profoundly. Because its incomparable advantage to effect our society than the other one.

我语言把握不太好，所以表达上就做不了什么评价了。
楼主主要问题是这个题目审的有点偏，把effect写成benefit了。重新审题应该就没问题了。
另外，字写的好多……呵呵，加油吧~！

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3.26Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students who keep their rooms neat and organized tend to be more successful than students who do not.

While some students are fanatical about keeping their bedrooms neat and organized, and other others careless about that. Some people ascribe the student's neat and organized behaviour to the genetic. However, I believe that neat and organized habit not only comes from the students' inborn nature, but also effect their successful in present and future career.

First of all, students who are able to keep their rooms tidy and cleanly are surpass in study than others who did not. Keeping bedroom neat and clean is important for every students and it is a vital stage in their learning step. As we all know that one essential elemental skill for students who performance well in study is their excellent organization of learning notes, which made tough leaning process more easier and enjoyable. For instance, almost all successful managers are good at arrangement skill in their daily work, such as organize the company's plan, keeping the manufacture and production process perfectly. Therefore, if a student keeping their room neat and tidy when he/she young, that useful behaviour will effect and influence their future career profoundly without any doubt.

We can also explain that students keep their room organized and neat indicate maturity and responsibility, which will more likely to successful than students do not. When student growing up, another vital step in that progress is the responsibility training such as organize their bedroom, which may bring about some maturity thinking for them like an adult. For example, achievers always responsible for their family, society, even their country. That the reason why many parents training their kids early. They give some privilege for their children like staying later in outside with their friend, or attending social events only if they finish their housework like organize their room and cleaning dishes. Which is the best way to let the students know that responsible for their family and their parents is important even though they just a kid and growing up.

As the saying goes, your habits determine your future and success. Although there are some special case in the society that part of parvenu who become a millionar within one night without any preparation. Nevertheless, in most cases, we still believe that successful life is tend to some individuals who struggle of it and cultivating their good custom since they were a child.

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3.27 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Scientists should be responsible for the negative impacts of their discoveries.

Scientists, is a kind of person who engages in a systematic activity to acquire knowledge by using different scientific methods. Although some inventions are discovered by scientists change our society profoundly, whether positive or negative impacts. However, as far as I am concerned, scientists should be responsible for the negative impacts of their discovers without any doubt.

One prominent example is the atomic technology discovered by scientists, which caused the invention of atomic bomb in the early nineteen century. The famous event in World War II, which forced Japanese surrendered by the U.S. Air-force who dropped two atomic bombs on the two Japanese major cities and killed millions of civilians, which ended this painful global war until 1945. This epic invention also threaten billions of human life in the "Cold War" period by the two superpower, United States and Soviet Union. Scientists who research atomic area and alter, even improve this technology toward evil side like military territory should absolutely responsible for their mistaken behaviour.


The other example of invention may also cause some disaster in the future by scientists. First of all, the plastic bag, which flood into every corner of our life and impact our environment profoundly. "The Greatest Invention in the World" in 100 years ago now became "The Worse Invention in the World" because the natural earth has not capacity to digest million tons of plastic materials every year. Moreover, the green house gases, called CO2. The industrial and individuals let the green house gases largely emitted by the ineffective use of energy, which change our atmosphere profoundly just because of the invention of some fossil fuel searching facilities which compelled the exploit process much more easier by scientists. Not only the users, scientists also should rethink about and responsible for the negative impacts of that consequences.

Finally, although each invention was intended for some good quality by scientists and most inventions are. In my point of view, like the atomic bomb and the plastic bag, the inventors and scientists cannot be held responsible for the irresponsibility of the people who use their intentions.

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While some students are fanatical about keeping their bedrooms neat and organized, and other others careless about that. Some people ascribe the student's neat and organized behaviour (behavior) to the genetic. However, I believe that neat and organized habit not only comes from the students' inborn nature, but also effect (affect) their successful (success) in present and future career.

First of all, students who are able to keep their rooms tidy and cleanly are surpass in study than others who did not. Keeping bedroom neat and clean is important for every students and it is a vital stage in their learning step. As we all know that one essential elemental skill for students who performance well in study is their excellent organization of learning notes, which made tough leaning process more easier(呵呵，easily) and enjoyable. For instance, almost all successful managers are good at arrangement skill in their daily work, such as organize the company's plan, keeping the manufacture and production process perfectly. Therefore, if a student keeping their room neat and tidy when he/she (is) young, that useful behaviour (behavior) will effect and influence (effect and influence have the same meaning~) their future career profoundly without any doubt.

We can also explain that students keep their room organized and neat indicate (是什么indicate 呀，这样看像是students,可我觉得是行为，呵呵，应该调整下句子结构吧~) maturity and responsibility, which will more likely to successful than students do not. When student growing up, another vital step in that progress is the responsibility training such as organize their bedroom, which may bring about some maturity thinking for them like an adult. For example, achievers always responsible for their family, society, even their country. That the reason why many parents training their kids early. They give some privilege for their children like staying later in(in可以不要) outside with their friend (friends), or attending social events only if they finish their housework like organize (organizing) their room and cleaning dishes. Which is the best way to let the students know that responsible for their family and their parents is important even though they just a kid and growing up(a kid and growing up放在一起有问题哦).

As the saying goes, your habits determine your future and success. Although there are some special case (cases) in the society that part of parvenu who become a millionar (millionaire) within one night without any preparation. Nevertheless, in most cases, we still believe that successful life is tend to some individuals who struggle of it and cultivating their good custom since they were a child.
文章结论很清晰，写的很流畅，例子也很合适，错误不是很多，主要是单词拼写的错误，建议LZ下次留心就好了，呵呵~

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Scientists, is a kind of person who engages in a systematic activity to acquire knowledge by using different scientific methods. Although(觉得用Besides之类的会好些) some inventions are discovered by scientists change our society profoundly, whether positive or negative impacts. However, as far as I am concerned, scientists should be responsible for the negative impacts of their discovers(discoveries) without any doubt.

One prominent example is the atomic technology discovered by scientists, which caused the invention of atomic bomb in the early nineteen century. The famous event in World War II, which forced Japanese surrendered by the U.S. Air-force who dropped two atomic bombs on the(the可以不要) two Japanese major cities and killed millions of civilians, which ended this painful global war until 1945. This epic invention also threaten billions of human life in the "Cold War" period by the two superpower, United States and Soviet Union. Scientists who research (是不是少介词呀)atomic area and alter, even improve this technology toward evil side like military territory should absolutely responsible for their mistaken behaviour.（前面一直在申述原子弹的危害，后面就说要科学家负责，感觉中间少了点东西）

The other example（Other examples） of invention may also cause some disaster（disasters） in the future by scientists. First of all, the plastic bag, which flood into every corner of our life and impact our environment profoundly. "The Greatest Invention in the World" in(in不要就可以) 100 years ago now became "The Worse Invention in the World" because the natural earth has not capacity to digest million tons of plastic materials every year. Moreover, the green house gases, called CO2.(这句子不完整) The industrial and individuals let the green house gases largely emitted by the ineffective use of energy, which change our atmosphere profoundly just because of the invention of some fossil fuel searching facilities which compelled the exploit process much more easier by scientists. Not only the users, scientists also should rethink about and responsible for the negative impacts of that consequences.

Finally, although each invention was intended for some good quality by scientists and most inventions are(most inventions are放在这里什么意思呀，有点不懂). In my point of view, like the atomic bomb and the plastic bag, the inventors and scientists cannot be held responsible for the irresponsibility of the people who use their intentions.

感觉文章的结构是在陈述例子的基础上进行论述，这样的形式很少见到，呵呵。个人觉得中间那段缺点过渡的东西，还有就是文章中有些小语法错误，整体还是很不错的，加油