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Frew issues are as likely to be fraught with controversy as that involving the necessity of advertisement. Some people hold that advertisement waste the company's money and time for the potential consumers have knew what they wanted to buy. While, others convinced that advertisement will still play a important role in the future society. I strongly stand with the later for the following reasons.

Certainly no other reason in any decision is more crucial than the significance that advertisement made for the manufacturer. Nowdays, advertisements born practically with every new production, so why they popular for the manufacturer even may cost so much. The primary reason is that, establishing a brand for a company , in a way, make the company win the first step with their competitors in recent dramatical competition environment. Many examples in the history have justifed this. We may cite the example of Wrigley's chewing Gum. In the beginning, chewing gum was treated as gave away for the consumers who bought other things. Afterward, observed that people prefer the free gum more than other charged goods, Wrigley planed to sell the chewing gum normally with first two brands. However, for not caring about advertisement effect of the two new brands, the chewing gum did not sold well at the beginning. But Wrigley did not gave up his new production, after analyzed the reason carefully, he invest a lot into the new goods, and he achieve the goal in the end, so it is today's Wrigley chewing Gum. For another reason, with a well-known brand setted by advertisement, a company can occupy a large size asset of the company's image, which would benefit itself in a long run. Actually, as we observed, the successful corportions alway build a famous brand by advertisement, some like PESSI, NIKE,MICROSOFT.etc.

Not only for the manufacturer, advertisement is also important for the consumers. Life experience tell us that we often contact a new production by the advertisement, which were been carried by all kinds of mediums possible. For example, when we commute to work on the morning, the advertisement in the bus may unforgetable for you beacause of everyday's meeting. Advertisementare more and more flequent in our daily life. In the Internet-oriented era, people can do pratically everything while still at home, even they were guided by the advertisement from a web site they clicked to do shopping online. Thus, the only way that they know information about the good was the advertisement.

Although advertisement contribute greatly both to the manufacturer and consumers, they both also should pay more attention to the negative effect the advertisement may bring. In the place of the company, keeping the quality of the productions as the advertisement saying is the most important thing if they want to achieve a long-term profit. TOYOTA is a typical opposite case for the manufacturer. And for the consumers, who always followed directly to buy the goods by the advertisement, should do more research about the goods beyond the saying of the advertisement. In most occasion, advertisement over the fact.

Taking into account all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that advertisement will continue to play an extremely role in the modern commercial activities. However, the manufacturer should not only think much of how to make their production more pupular by advertisement for their profit, but also care more about the qulity of goods for the consumers. And the consumers should make a wise choice not only depend on the advertisement.
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发表于 2010-4-6 22:59:07 |只看该作者
第一次交作业,还没开始控制时间,写的有点多。

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RE:4.7 的作业

Driving by the drastical pressure of future career, the concept that students at university or college should choose the most difficult classes is somewhat widely accepted by the majority who want to put themselves into a favorable position in the future job market, and people sharing the belief in it assert that the difficult course will really benefit them a lot even they cannot get a top grades. Nonetheless, it seems to me that there are valid concerns that the choice the student done above may not be a wise or insightful when taking consideration both the integration of the knowledge architecture and the evaluate criterion of the difficult.

Undeniably, the courses on our syllabus, in a way, have differences in the difficulty. However, those differences should not consider as a reason to choose some more difficult classes, because our eventual goal is to get a favorable position in the future job market. For the subject of computer science(CS) as an example, many students of CS prefer like to choose the C++ and JAVA as the primer computer language for they learn from their former that C++ and JAVA are great challenged classes which will contribute you much in the future job market. While, in my opinion, both the need of the market and your interesting are the key factors for you to make decision.

As we know, knowledge has play an extremely important role in the progress of human, according to the tendency of our modern society's development, it will continue contribute greatly to our future lives. The existed knowledge which have been written in our textbooks is the most valuable one, which we should inherent all of them but only choose the difficult one.

On the other hand, the standard which is designed by the education system to rank the difficulty of classes cannot completely reflect the difference of them when the differences of the students were ignored.

To sum up, students should make their choice of the courses in the university base on whether it can do favorable for their future career of the integration of the knowledge they learned.

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Frew issues are as likely to be fraught with controversy as that involving the necessity of advertisement. Some people hold that advertisement waste the company's money and time for the potential consumers have knew what they wanted to buy. While, others convinced that advertisement will still play a important role in the future society. I strongly stand with the later for the following reasons.
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Certainly no other reason in any decision is more crucial than the significance that advertisement made for the manufacturer. Nowdays, advertisements born practically with every new production, so why they popular for the manufacturer even may cost so much. The primary reason is that, establishing a brand for a company , in a way, make the company win the first step with their competitors in recent dramatical competition environment. Many examples in the history have justifed this. We may cite the example of Wrigley's chewing Gum. In the beginning, chewing gum was treated as gave away for the consumers who bought other things. Afterward, observed that people prefer the free gum more than other charged goods, Wrigley planed to sell the chewing gum normally with first two brands. However, for not caring about advertisement effect of the two new brands, the chewing gum did not sold well at the beginning. But Wrigley did not gave up his new production, after analyzed the reason carefully, he invest a lot into the new goods, and he achieve the goal in the end, so it is today's Wrigley chewing Gum. For another reason, with a well-known brand setted by advertisement, a company can occupy a large size asset of the company's image, which would benefit itself in a long run. Actually, as we observed, the successful corportions(corporations) alway build a famous brand by advertisement, some like PESSI, NIKE,MICROSOFT.etc.

Not only for the manufacturer, advertisement is also important for the consumers. Life experience tell us that we often contact a new production by the advertisement, which were been carried by all kinds of mediums possible. For example, when we commute to work on the morning, the advertisement in the bus may unforgetable for you beacause of everyday's meeting. Advertisement
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Although advertisement contribute greatly both to the manufacturer and consumers, they both also should pay more attention to the negative effect the advertisement may bring. In the place of the company, keeping the quality of the productions as the advertisement saying is the most important thing if they want to achieve a long-term profit. TOYOTA is a typical opposite case for the manufacturer. And for the consumers, who always followed directly to buy the goods by the advertisement, should do more research about the goods beyond the saying of the advertisement. In most occasion, advertisement over the fact.

Taking into account all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that advertisement will continue to play an extremely role in the modern commercial activities. However, the manufacturer should not only think much of how to make their production more pupular by advertisement for their profit, but also care more about the qulity of goods for the consumers. And the consumers should make a wise choice not only depend on the advertisement.[size=12.0000pt]
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600字巨作,太强大了,写得很棒,结构,语法都没发现有什么问题,至少我这么觉得,例子和观点都很丰富,作者太厉害了,可以肯定是高分文章,再看一遍,学习学习~[size=12.0000pt]

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4.7的题目好像我看错了,写到别的题目了,那就这个把 3# bruce520

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