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The development of technology make our life simpler or more complicated? Obviously, it make our life simpler. With the help of new echnology, people can live easier and simpler.

To begin with, in some situation, new technology can provide safer and simpler method. One well known example is the invention of robert, in some cases,for example, poisnous enviroment or very deep water,  it is very dangerous and complicated for people to access these places, and only one who is specialed trained and ware special equipment can be allowed to do it. However, all of these things are unnecessary if we have a robert. The only thing we need to do is to send the robert to these situation and control it remotely to finish all the tasks.

Secondly, new technology bring us simpler method in communiation. One century  ago, if we want to communicate with our friend in America, we have to write a letter and send it by post service. It would take two or three weeks  or even longer that it was received by our friends. Amazingly, with today's email system, we just need to type the message by email, and then it will be received in only several minites. What a convinent and simpl life the new technology offers us!

Last but not least, it is new technology that makes a revolutionally change happened in the library management. In the tradition library, you will found rows and rows of drawer within which are countless record cards. If you want to search books or journels you are interested in, you have to learn the special searching methos, otherwise, it will be difficiult to find the book from so many cards. Comparisingly, with the library data system, we just type the name of the biik or the author in the computer, then the positionof the book what we want will diaplay on the screen in several seconds. The information technology makes the library management unbelievable simple.

In conlusion, new technology gives us lots of simpler method in many areas, the above are only three of them.

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The development of technology make our life simpler or more complicated? Obviously, it make our life simpler. With the help of new echnology, people can live easier and simpler.

To begin with, in some situation, new technology can provide safer and simpler method. One well known example is the invention of Robert, in some cases, for example, poisnous enviroment or very deep water,  it is very dangerous and complicated for people to access these places, and only one who is specialed trained and ware special equipment can be allowed to do it. However, all of these things are unnecessary if we have a robert. The only thing we need to do is to send the robert to these situation and control it remotely to finish all the tasks.

Secondly, new technology bring us simpler method in communiation. One century  ago, if we want to communicate with our friend in America, we have to write a letter and send it by post service. It would take two or three weeks  or even longer that it was received by our friends.（时态与前一句一致就可以了）
Amazingly, with today's email system, we just need to type the message by email(搭配不对), and then it will be received in only several minites. What a convinent and simpl life the new technology offers us!

Last but not least, it is new technology that makes a revolutionally change happened in the library management. In the tradition library, you will found rows and rows of drawer within which are countless record cards. If you want to search books or journels you are interested in, you have to learn the special searching methos, otherwise, it will be difficiult to find the book from so many cards. Comparisingly, with the library data system, we just type the name of the biik or the author in the computer, then the position of the book what we want will diaplay on the screen in several seconds. The information technology makes the library management unbelievable simple.

In conlusion, new technology gives us lots of simpler method in many areas, the above are only three of them.

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