Issue136 7.15

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"The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
I agree with the assertion that the circumstance have no choice is very rare. Just at the moment, readers of this article are choosing whether the circumstance of no choice is rare. Nevertheless, it doesn’t mean that we can do whatever we want. That’s to say, Restricted by law, there is no absolute freedom of the choice.

In our life, we are choosing by the minute, choosing the time we get up, the food we eat, the books we read, the activity we join in, the job we occupy, the city we leave in, the one we marriage with and other too many choices should be done. Everyone has choices, even sometime everyone has to choose. For example, a student has to choose the major to study further, a doctor has to choose the treatment for patients and a governor has to choose the policy to interest public.

Someone opposed to the issue maybe cites examples of the appearance, the temper and the gender. However, as we know, cosmetic surgery can help change appearance and gender; the habits and customs can help change the temper. “Nothing is impossible.” The so-called “no choice” is merely a lack of courage of taking the consequence, such as losing money, reputation damage and health hazards. In other words, the essence of no choice is the fear of daring to take risks.

In short, there are too many options around us. The so-called no choice but we refused to choose to avoid paying the price.

Could we arbitrarily choose? The answer absolutely is no. Although we always have many choices, the choices we make never be entirely free limited to the ethic, moral and law. For instance, we should not choose killing and abortion which are against the law and we also should not choose incest which is condemned by the moral.

To sum up, in most instances, there doesn’t exist no choice circumstance. Namely, the circumstance have no choice is very rare. The rare circumstance is that we cannot c hoose the absolute choice, because of the ethical and moral limitation and law.

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"The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
I agree with the assertion that the circumstance have no choice is very rare. Just at the moment, readers of this article are choosing whether the circumstance of no choice is rare. Nevertheless, it doesn’t mean that we can do whatever we want. That’s to say, Restricted by law, there is no absolute freedom of the choice.


In our life, we are choosing by the minute, choosing the time we get up, the food we eat, the books we read, the activity we join in, the job we occupy, the city we leave in, the one we marriage with (marry。Marriage是名词)and other too many choices should be done. Everyone has choices, even sometime everyone has to choose. For example, a student has to choose the major to study further, a doctor has to choose the treatment for patients and a governor has to choose the policy to interest public.
Someone opposed to the issue maybe cites examples of the appearance, the temper and the gender. However, as we know, cosmetic surgery can help change appearance and gender; the habits and customs can help change the temper. “Nothing is impossible.” The so-called “no choice” is merely a lack of courage of taking the consequence, such as losing money, reputation damage and health hazards. In other words, the essence of no choice is the fear of daring to take risks.
In short, there are too many options around us. The so-called no choice but we refused to choose to avoid paying the price.（没看明白）
Could we arbitrarily choose? The answer absolutely is no. Although we always have many choices, the choices we make （+will）never be entirely free limited to the ethic, moral and law. For instance, we should not choose killing and abortion which are against the law and we also should not choose incest which is condemned by the moral.
To sum up, in most instances, there doesn’t exist no choice circumstance. Namely, the circumstance have no choice is very rare. The rare circumstance is that we cannot c hoose（make） the absolute choice, because of the ethical and moral limitation and law.
思路很清晰，但语句有少部分的不通畅，多研究下范文会有收获。建议第二段加点说理以增强说服力~~