7.22日作文

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题目:Should children begin learn foreign languages as soon as possible?
As parents expect highly about their children's achievement, it seems like a trend that more children start study a foreign language at a quite young age, thus many of them reach a higher level of the language than their peers. However, it's merely wrong to force a young child into suffering reciting those boring words of foreign language. If the child would like to learn, that is another story.
As for those who would rather do some sports or deal with mathematics problem, it better give them freedom than send them to foreign language school. It is terrible to force Beethoven to solve physics problem or Einstein to run 100-meter race. According to this logic, Children who learn foreign languages must regard it as one of them hobbies.
Even when a child love foreign language so much that he has to learn a foreign language as soon as possible, learning at a early stage of develop isn't a wise idea. for children have just establish their point of view at the outer world not even finish learnt their mother language enough for daily using, he would have a
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